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Writing advice from my uni teachers:

If your dialog feels flat, rewrite the scene pretending the characters cannot at any cost say exactly what they mean. No one says “I’m mad” but they can say it in 100 other ways.

Wrote a chapter but you dislike it? Rewrite it again from memory. That way you’re only remembering the main parts and can fill in extra details. My teacher who was a playwright literally writes every single script twice because of this.

Don’t overuse metaphors, or they lose their potency. Limit yourself.

Before you write your novel, write a page of anything from your characters POV so you can get their voice right. Do this for every main character introduced.

#inspo

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that one dialogue abt sholmes crossdressing

#herlock sholmes the femme lesbian you are.... #tgaa

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chimera ryuunosuke for a twt friend

and here’s a fixed version bc I am a #idiot

#tgaa #the great ace attorney #tgaa fanart #dai gyatuken saiban #dgs fanart #dgs #ryuunosuke naruhodou #ryunosuke naruhodo #naruhodou ryuunosuke #naruhodo ryunosuke #tgaa dungeon meshi au #dungeon meshi #dungeon meshi spoilers #<- unsure about that one but just to be safe

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Press play, the audio is worth it.

#kazuma core..

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“Jii… chan…” 

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Chapter Seven Omake, “The Legend of Ukogi” Full view recommended. 

#IM GINNA DIEEE #Kimetsu no Yaiba

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I laughed so hard about this

#tgaa

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a little redraw of something and extra

#can I kiss Ryuunosuke #tgaa

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#wip #tgaa #tgaa fanart #asoryuu #asoryuri #a bit

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a little cringe ignore me

#tgaa #tgaa fanart #asoryuu #asoryuri

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man this new olympian fucking sucks

#I JUST STARTED COUGHING #WHAT???? #tgaa

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Nobody in this game has any chill

#fucking love de killer man #ace attorney

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when i struggled with compositions i made a bunch of doodles. i liked how they turned out :]

#9MGGGG SOOOOOOO GOOD #tgaa #I should practice like this hrung #pucks favs

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many asoryuus

#tgaa #the great ace attorney #tgaa fanart #dai gyatuken saiban #dgs fanart #dgs #asoryuu #asoryuri

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#tgaa #pucks favs

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recent doodles

#tgaa #the great ace attorney #tgaa fanart #dai gyatuken saiban #dgs fanart #dgs #asoryuu #asoryuri #not tagging the rest tho figure it out

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WHOA

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A bit nervous

#tgaa #the great ace attorney #tgaa fanart #dai gyatuken saiban #dgs fanart #dgs #asogi kazuma #kazuma asogi #asougi kazuma #kazuma asougi #asoryuu #asoryuri