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I'm delusional, but Lumi gives Childe his vision back IN PERSON

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I was suddenly caught in chilumi angsts😭

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So you win. What’s the claimed prize?

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some Lumis🤲❤️

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some Lumis🤲❤️

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jealous Childe vs Luminey🤭

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"his rough hands are a stark contrast to his lips - a feather touch to the wound that's yet to heal."

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someone is ranting, someone is pining🤭

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The moon & her night sky 🌙🌌

[as part of the Moonlit Dreama 24 hour Xlmi event on Twt]

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chu chu

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Thinking about the letter again...

Y'all know how Xiao's letter came attached with a Dream Solvent?

WELL!

According to the lore... A Dream Solvent is formed "If someone dreamed of heaven before waking up clutching a flower, then that blossom must have been made from such a fantasy"

And how Xiao's been dreaming about Lumine, recently..... The point I'm trying to make is... Lumine isn't just Xiao's "sweet dream"

She's also his "heaven"

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by happy accident I finished this on xiao’s bday

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Xiao's birthday letters to Traveler summarised:

2021 birthday: I caught crystalflies for you. I visualised them in your hair

2022: I listened to starconches on the beach wondering if I'd hear your voice

2023: I visited a friend and they threw a party, please come if you have the time

This birthday, 2024: I dream of you. Do I deserve to dream so sweetly?

In conclusion:

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I am a shoujo manga lover and my dose of romance is being feed by a fantasy action gacha game.

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los TABIBITOS cuando paso esto:

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"Perhaps were I to see you in the waking world, I would find the answer"

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Let's talk about fight scenes.

Writing fight scenes requires a delicate balance of action, emotion, and detail to keep readers engaged and immersed in the moment.

Here are some tips to craft compelling fight scenes:

Know your characters: Understand their fighting styles, strengths, and weaknesses—are they offensive, or defensive? Spontaneous, or strategic? Trigger-happy, or reluctant? Their personalities and motivations will influence their actions and decisions during the fight.

Create tension: Build tension leading up to the fight to increase the stakes and make the action more gripping. Foreshadowing, verbal sparring, or physical intimidation can all contribute to a sense of anticipation.

Use sensory details: Engage the reader's senses by describing the sights, sounds, smells, and physical sensations of the fight. This helps to create a vivid and immersive experience—but make sure not to overdo it. Too much detail can distract from the adrenaline of the fight.

Maintain clarity: Ensure that the action is easy to follow by using clear and concise language. Avoid overly complicated sentences or excessive description that could confuse readers.

Focus on emotions: Show the emotional impact of the fight on your characters. Describe their fear, anger, determination, or adrenaline rush to make the scene more compelling and relatable.

Include strategic elements: Incorporate tactics, strategy, and improvisation into the fight to make it more dynamic and realistic. Think about how your characters use their surroundings, weapons, or special abilities to gain an advantage.

Balance dialogue and action: Intersperse dialogue with action to break up the fight scene and provide insight into the characters' thoughts and intentions. Dialogue can also reveal or support the characters' personalities and motivations.

Keep it concise: While it's important to provide enough detail to immerse readers in the action, avoid unnecessary padding or overly long fight scenes. Keep the pacing brisk to maintain momentum and keep readers hooked.

Show the consequences: Illustrate the aftermath of the fight, including injuries, emotional trauma, or changes in relationships between characters. This adds depth to the scene and helps to drive the story forward.

Hope this helped ❤