#if you're looking for a book that has the mot realistic portrayal of the subway

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🦤 a quote you had to delete :( (but still wanna share!)

oooooooh!

from my short story -

this is from the second draft and it was deleted for a number of reasons. 1) it served little as a transition scene 2) I could move the conversation closer to the climax 3) the a-train to inwood had pissed me off that day so no cameo!

(why the fuck aren't there more direct subway lines in brooklyn?)

also, i forgot that micah was called ilya in the first few drafts. it was a leftover from a previous piece dealing with reincarnation as the main plot device, but micah felt like it straddled the secular and modern orthodox world better. `

wip game of birds!

#thenicestthingiveseen #sparrow short story #orig #if you're looking for a book that has the mot realistic portrayal of the subway #sick kids in love by hannah moskowitz #and a shot in the dark by victoria lee #i remember reading a specific scene in sick kids when the protagonist was complaining about the stairs of the platform i was on