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#i'm planning to speedrun the event story in the first 3-4 days (so that i can focus on kazuki's birthday instead lmaoo)
deus-ex-mona · 2 years
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MAKE A HOLIDAY: Epilogue
well... this marks the end of the fruity thtottle adventure~?
previous part (chapter 7)
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MEGU: Okay, here’s a skip! Skipping YUI, it’s now RIO’s turn!
YUI: Oi, hold it! I was just about to throw four cards down!
DAI: Huuh~? Does a rule that allows you to put a few cards down at the same time even exist in this card game?
YUI: It does! Wait, huh? Maybe it’s a local rule? Either way, aren’t you being way too cruel by skipping my turn?!
DAI: Idiooot. Games are more fun when we’re merciless to each other.
RIO: Reverse.
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DAI: Whaaat?! But it’s my turn!
RIO: But it’s more fun when we’re merciless to each other, right?
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YUI: Nice one, RIO! It’s my turn again… Wait, I can’t put any cards down… I’ll pass.
MEGU: Yup, yuuup! I’m putting a card down~.
MEGU: …Y’know, doesn’t it feel like it’s been a really long time since we last did something like this~?
YUI: Right? I can’t remember when the last time we had time off in the evenings was.
DAI: The choreography of my dance solo needs to be checked later, so I’ll leave the checking to you, IV.
MEGU: Ah, that sounds nice. I wanna do it too! Can I, IV?
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IV: Of course.
RIO: IV, you said that you wanted to spend some time with everyone, but… are you really fine with spending it like this?
IV: Yeah, this is perfect.
RIO: That’s good, then. Though, I have something to check with you regarding the live…
DAI: Same here. I’ve drawn rough sketches of the costumes for our next live.
IV: You work really fast, don’t you? Let me see them later, okay?
YUI: Come to think of it, I wanted to try writing lyrics, so I’ve written some down.
MEGU: Ehh. I reallyyy wanna see them!
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YUI: Not now! I’m not done with them yet.
IV: How interesting. As for the song… what do you think about co-writing it with RIO?
RIO: That’s not a bad idea.
MEGU: Ehh, that sounds niceee. I wanna do something like that tooooo!
DAI: But you’re already in charge of the choreography.
MEGU: But I wanna try something new toooooo! Ah, how ‘bout this! I wannaaaa do an MC corner or something!
YUI: Lemme join in on that kinda thing too, yeah?
IV: Then, let’s talk about the live once this game ends, okay?
MEGU: Somehow, this kinda reminds me of when we were fooling around in IV’s hospital ward.
DAI: You’re talking about the times when all of us would visit him to check in, yeah?
YUI: But those were less of check ins, and more of visits to play around, right?
DAI: You’re the only one who thinks that way, though?
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MEGU: Exaaactly, you’re the one who aaalways brought in a microphone to sing.
MEGU: What a turn-off.
YUI: Huuh?! But you’re the one who was always yelling in the ward?!
DAI: You guys were the ones who always got us scolded each and every time, weren’t you?
RIO: Well, you all were going against the visitor rules of the hospital…
MEGU: But there’s no doubt in my mind that I was visiting him because I was worried about him.
IV: Haha, you didn’t seem to be worried, though.
RIO: In the end, regardless of the scolding we received, we ended up fooling around again immediately after, right?
YUI: Nothing can stop us when we’re all together, yeah?
DAI: What’s with that? How lame.
YUI: Oi!
IV: (They haven’t changed a bit from how they were back then…)
MEGU: I don’t wanna get scolded anymore, so please don’t get hospitalised again, okay~?
IV: Got it.
Every time all of them laughed together, IV found himself thinking that, as long as he was together with those members, they would be able to create history in the future…
That thought still had not changed a bit. Therefore, he could not afford to stop yet.
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thespoonisvictory · 3 years
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Please explain why Schlatt is the best character on the SMP.
(Alternatively, I would be really interested in hearing more about your dislike for Quackity's produced lore. Personally, I love it, so I'm really intrigued whenever someone says that they're not fond of it).
as much as I love schlatt, I think I'll answer the quackity question, because I've been meaning to.
first of all, I think I should clarify that I'm definitely biased, because my favorite streamers, outside of the dsmp universe, tend towards semi lore, or, at least, not whatever quackity's doing. I'm used to it, and people tend to not like change lol.
second of all, I really do like quackity's produced lore, but I don't like certain aspects of it, and find myself preferring semi lore in general. I don't think he should stop doing it so much as I think he should use it as an occasional technique rather than conveying near 100% of his story with it. big q is very talented and I commend him for taking such a bold approach, which I think pays off in some ways.
third, to me, semi lore is any lore that breaks the fourth wall in that it isn't trying to be something other than a minecraft stream, it's all in first person, and none of it is prerecorded. for example: most of wilbur's pogtopia streams are semi (or casual) lore to me, because he'll thank subs and joke with schlatt about getting techno a girlfriend, but it's still largely in canon.
anyway, in true jenny nicholson fashion, let's kick off with a numbered list.
1. this post, by patches, explains a bit of why the lore streams can get a bit disconcerting to me. the dsmp have always had a bit of charming awkwardness in their improv, because these are for the most part just Some Guys acting, and under the guise of a stream where it's just a Streamer Playing Minecraft, it fits. but the highly produced nature just- creates such a disparity between the quality of the cinematography and the acting that it's a little weird, y'know?
2. in some cases, semi lore allows for dread to be built in a unique way. during the exile arc, tommy would have lighthearted streamer jokes and bits, shout out subs, pretend like things were normal. he never acknowledges that his situation is messed up, that his condition is getting worse, that things are falling apart. it's a quiet, sinking, horror that creeps along over the course of weeks. it's important to the viewer that we are there every day to see the slow progress, to understand why tommy gets pushed so far down. besides the impracticality of 14 highly produced lore streams, you would lose a lot of the subtlety there.
the smp is such a unique medium in that the stream style itself is so telling. when tommy actively doesn't acknowledge what's happening, it makes the abuse that's occurring seem so much worse. when wilbur drops little hits about his depression or his plans in between lighthearted, ooc jokes, it lulls the audience into a false sense of security.
imagine a version of the 'forming las nevadas' story where quackity does it over the course of four nights. the slow realization of his manipulation tactics disguised by an unassuming stream format, because it's still quackity, joking around and laughing until he approaches the next person and he shifts into his 'persona'. when he finishes the conversation, we watch his face fall, his smile fade, as he walks back to an empty las nevadas. it would build hype, not to mention taking less work, and letting the audience see a bit more of quackity's humanity.
3. I mentioned it before, but it just straight up takes less time. I'm willing to wait, of course, but there's something to be said about the merits of pacing and being able to throw together a lore stream last minute. take, for example, tommy's death. it wouldn't have been nearly as impactful without the rushed, oddly somber flurry of livestreams that came after. jack didn't need a highly produced montage of him standing by tommy's grave as the seasons passed, of his planting flowers everyday. what turned out to be effective was just- him, walking around, coming to terms with his grief, completely silent for periods of time.
it was mourning. plain and simple, with no embellishment or evil villain music, shockingly earnest.
I don't think you could replicate that raw, undone feeling with a prerecorded, pre-produced, semi-movie. it feels like all of a sudden jack's pov was important enough that he had to stream, and there it was.
you could argue that this could be planned beforehand, but I think more often than not, that's a. not really feasible, and b. going to take away from the organic nature.
we all like candid shots, 'authentic' vlogs and influencers. to me, this is just one more extension of that rule.
4. under the same idea, you can make more. we spend more time with the streamers, and therefore the characters, and get to know their more human side. wilbur, for example, is deeply humanized by little things that you just couldn't really fit into a lore stream: his dynamic with niki, all his little moments of hesitation, his banter with tommy and his true love for l'manburg. who c!wilbur is is built up over hours and hours of comments and suggestions and one-off statements, and we just don't have time for that in quackity's lore. the transitions are snappy, filled with beautiful shots, but they don't allow for as much depth of character as that awkward little walk from place to place, that quiet monologue they do to themselves.
it's not impossible for you to do that, as with c!quackity and c!charlie serving as a 'morality pet', but at this risk of repeating myself endlessly, it's more earnest and organic in a sense.
5. last, I just really like multiple povs. one of my favorite bits from s1 is the fundy spy arc, because of how effectively multiple povs are used. streams where wilbur is deeply, deeply distraught over fundy's betrayal but thinks fundy doesn't care, while fundy is deeply, deeply distraught over wilbur's prior treatment of him but thinks he doesn't care. and you could watch both at the same time! quackity's pov isn't as personal when it uses third person, which is a bit sad because I think it's a unique aspect of livestreaming every perspective.
(I'm so sorry if this isn't coherent or makes any sense I'm very brain dead and tired from speedrunning three essays yesterday)
basically, I think quackity's lore style is good for big, grand events, occasionally. it's very cool to watch, definitely builds hype, and can make certain things easier, such as coordinating a bunch of people or doing special effects.
but for building a plot and establishing character dynamics, I really prefer semi/casual lore.
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