#her plot execution stinks of 'my editor made me cut scenes'

[darrowsrising]

Virginia deserved better in Light Bringer.

#how do you underdeliver on your best pov? read light bringer by pierce brown #light bringer spoilers #light bringer #idk if i can forgive pb i may need rg for that #she fucking needed cassius to tell her lysander might disrespect the parlay? #seriously? didn not even occur to the smartest person around that it could happen? #needs mr 'lysander cares about people i forget about vindabona on purpose' to point it out? #her plot execution stinks of 'my editor made me cut scenes'