Clone Wars
Whelp it’s just introduced mind control
Nope-
Especially not plot
I’m packing up my bags
I am leaving,
I try to give everything the benefit of the doubt and at least try to get some good out of it via responsible quarantine practices
But, no
[I don’t care if it all ends up a dream and the mind control end up being some bullshit, nope,
Not fucking worth it,
I’m not that damn
bored
Too much tox for me
Overall
Thoughts,
/Last
Thoughts
On
The
Series;
1. I’ll be honest I completely knew what
they were going for at the beginning
*Teen Romance*
Aka
Over
sexualization
of children
but we called it
something
different
so it doesn’t count
(In reality
no child
acts like that,)
So
Tox
Via
Proxy
For
That
Bul
l-
Shit
Final;
It has a nice
animation
But nothing
behind
the eyes,
(Going
to do anything
better with my time)
Good day
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Clone Wars The Wrong Jedi
[Oh no it was there was with absolutely no set up!
Now the asshole can go free despite likely causing a whole bunch of damage and being a fucking asshole,
Also yeah screw everything else]
hm
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Clone Wars To Catch a Jedi
[The clear child with no derogatory intentions makes me want to push the series father into the incinerator than it already is
Feck you
[it was stronger but the
Tumblr refresh took me out of interest
Rewriting it]
Burn,
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Clone Wars The Jedi Who Knew Too Much
(Terrorize a
woman)
An adult
Also wait
I thought they said no one was killed?.
Like back near the ending they were like
“he was the only one,”
[Working
With?]
??
So Force
That it was never ever brought up that they were dead or what happened to them or just whatever
...
Oh joy a funeral
with a shade of
Eugenics
Dear
Frick
(This is why I hate
funerals; Bad enough that someone died in such a terrible way that they couldn’t be accountable in return to their
home (which they should
have) and had as close to a peaceful
death knowing that they hadn’t inflicted further pain and suffering on their fellow man,
No let’s just parade that shit around and make everyone feel as miserable as possible while encouraging that misery
(Not imagine reminding them about
soon their life will be over)
Dic
k-
.
Re-
mem-ber
-
Oh yeah I really care about all those
unnamed people-
-
Also yeah let’s try to remember how they were [in life] well the fact that they are dead is robbed in their faces
And guilt-tripped
Dick.
[Ahsoka stop being an assumptious dick during a moment of
silence,]
Well I may not respect the concept of funerals
But I do respect the concept of
If there were rules for an established event
That you decide to participate in
You should probably follow
them,
[Empathy circle,
Asking if sad
No shit Sher
Lock,]
It’s a
Funeral]
[also why does
Ahsoka,
Single
out
Barisse?
She isn’t crying or seems noticeably more upset than any one else,
“My
Light saber,”
My mentor
was doing
nothing,
I know, “younglings”
But for the age we see them
learning about light sabers
There’s little to no chance that someone she learned besides,
Could teach her anything,
“ Live for the living Jedi,”
Then why did you drag the body out of here and make people stare
at it?
[like live for the living
that’s all good and good,
But part of that includes
not being a dick,
Doing your role to make the world a habitable and decent place,
And being accountable,
(If you’re inches away from death
maybe stay home).
And while this is going
old fashion murder,
You’d would assume they would’ve sectioned it off if they were anything resemb
ling decent
People,
Like not just one place (lane).
for this dude to operate,
And in case of
sociality,
This place wasn’t closed off (permanent) for multiple reasons
(Like seriously you guys want to gather around a place where someone died?)
Point being;
Living for the
living means being
acc-ountable
And not subjecting people to
staring
at your
dead body,
-
Live through
us
. . .
Er-
[But-
they already did their fair share of
living-
[apologies for the “gallows”
humor,
Just...following
the conclusion of the episodes
focus on,
Death
[Point being; you can’t make me feel bad for someone who literally decided fuck the environment
fuck life
fuck humanity,
i’m going to be a self-destructive
asshole,
And it kicked them in the
ass,
[Like yeah yeah
loss of life very
tragic,
World is a
wor
-ser,
But that’s a
quick moment-
-]
-
[Also yeah
Jedi life,
]
Like screw all the cleaning
staff,
Do they even get burials?
(Weird hierarchy)
Also, those were all
Jedi?
(Like seriously
what were they doing down there?)
Also yeah no wonder
everyone was suspicious,
Like five Jedi down there for no
established
reason
Weird glowy
Barisse
[Where’s
Luminara?
You know,
Barisse’s
“Men-tor,”
Authority
assumer,
Known
for
. . .
being on top of
things.
. . .
And control
-ling-
-
Micro manage
-
“Mov,
Seriously
can anyone
leave
this woman alone
for five seconds. .
Excuses she was already
terrorized enough by
Sky
walker
.
Still sucks,
Why?
Re-
public
Jedi-
How is Ahsoka part of the space military and doesn’t know that they answer to the space government?
[Did she think
they were just going to keep them locked up in the same
cell forever?
No space trial?
Like this seems
like a very stupid
excuse-
To get Ahsoka involved,
(And overly sus)
And terror
-ize this poor woman further
(Note I know what she did was
downright shitty,
(Assuming she didn’t give a false confession
under duress)
That doesn’t excuse the
tox,-
Clones kil-
Seriously when
and why does everyone care about the
clones?
Like ‘oh no the
(ex) child soldiers died!
Yeah?
Like they were “actual” people
(By their standards)
and Jedi
(Who seem to rank up pretty high on the standards, even get a separate burial, and getting a statement ranking their lives only
(Assumed authority
is shit)
right there,
Ad-miral
Also yeah
they have different legal systems
for different groups of people,
(We’re just going to paint
that as fine,)
Like I know this is
assumed authority,
But that’s adding another layer of tox that I think should be
acknowledged -
She’s guilty-
Fair-
Dealt with
Did-
Did Ahsoka just advocate for the
death penalty-
!?
Like her hand moved in that
“over the neck,”
expression,
.
Revenge
Dude this is more than venting
this is murder
(Focus on the don’t
murder
part, before the painting with
broad strokes-
,
(You’d think one of the older Jedi would be advocating for this
shit)
A-hsoka
Could’ve
been a nice moment,
But the tone was off
And it didn’t make sense
‘ The evid-ence
seems clear’?
How would the
evidence have changed anything?
‘ things will never change,’
Weird statement,
- -
Military
That’s a damn good idea considering they’re
peacekeepers
(Oh yeah that’s the thing that’s thrown around pretty sparsely;
These guys are supposed to keep the peace,
(Yet from the itchy trigger finger you wouldn’t think that)
Never mind Anakin’s suddenly developed
terrorizing tendencies,
What would be good...
If they played
it up for evil,
And didn’t ignore the
unfortunate implications,
“Peace Keeper(s);
Hey, they actually called
them out for that bullshit,
That’s good
And yeah she is 100% deserves to be ashamed,
For enabling Anakin
last round,
And possibly
brutalizing,
Note, there’s a difference between venting
and brutalizing,
(Mostly decided by
emotions,)
But still they killed more people
than is acceptable either way
(0)
Oh never mind she’s just bitter and completely ignoring the consequences of her actions
(Yeah!)
(This is not accountability
this is
Vigilante justice,
Trying to solve everybody’s problems
for them,
Which is the just not how it works,
You can’t assume
accountability for
someone else
You
aren’t
them
[Author-ity]
Strate-gy-
Um?
[What?]
Is.
Is she
a master now,
If not then where is
Luminara?
And just
tasks?
[i’m sorry but Luminara doesn’t seem like the type to assign that kind of work,
Being pretty controlling
And high on everything rule -abiding even their elitist attitude -
towards the jedi-
Pretty sure
she would’ve sent a bot
or a servant
or something
. . .
Not an
apprentice?
. . .?
?
Literally nothing about Luminara?
“friend”
Assuming a lot that made they’ve only interacted
once and nearly died that
time,
Also, comfort?
Ahsoka is the only one that seems particularly
disturbed-
Yeah
Barisse is soft-spoken
-
But
not really sad that I can tell
[all of her speech has been well actively non-consequential and
nonsensical,
That vague]
Also yeah
Ahsoka feels bad,
After just say
-ing
Screw
You
To a general that reasonably pointed out that they’re peace keepers, and shouldn’t be interfering so much and so aggressively, in other people’s
lives
(And that’s fair with Lord terrorizer but painted as it’s no big
deal,”
Over there)
So yeah you can’t really make me sympathize with someone who just a essentially said “Screw being an accountable person, I want to hurt people
(Beyond reasonable venting
parameters),
And possibly kill them,
Yeah, no sympathy
Young
More so psychopathic,
[Like pretty sure
she insinuated murder there,]
What’s with the cell phone music?
Seriously, look;
She’s fine
This,
Also
geez she’s jumping right into the
baggage?
Like poor Barrisse,
She just wanted to go for a walk
and get some tasks
done
and this person is bringing in the tox,
[Like seriously you don’t just randomly launch into a rant about the abusers and the system they created,
Everyone already
knows,
Stick to the talking when there’s something actually good to
share,
[excluding
rare
occasions,
- ]
Dear frick
what have
I got myself.
into?]
Damn poor Barrisse
is trying to get out of this
conversation..
Like dude that’s against code...
Dude..
Haha, you’re so cool
* through gritted teeth,
*please help me*,
Genoisse
* Dear god you’re bringing up that
terrible
situation*?
-
[Help ME]
?
Oh yeah that’s not a completely weird thing to say to
someone after a
mur-der
-
?
[Ahsoka’s
projecting fucking..
HARD
Please
Leave
Ha, ha , ha
[that is a why-do-I-hang-out-with-you
ex
-pression-
-
Like Ahsoka clearly got the talent of starting a long rambling rant about random nonsense and subjecting the nearest person to it” trait from
Anakin
[Pre-quel]
-
[Here’s a reminder that Barisse just wanted a book or some
shit
To do her
“tasks,”
And got
subjected
to that,
-
[Wait this was an
all-call meeting-
[Apologies for the
abundance of pictures
but I have a lot of thoughts
,]
[Why did Luminara and Barisse
get snubbed?
How is Ahsoka?
[there are
-multiple things wrong
with this-]
Anyway-
L-eto
Because you’re a gosh
darn terrorist,
And out of the two Jedi she
probably knows-
Ahsoka is the least likely to go
{immediate death mode}.
Probably
she is kind of death mody now,
-
Com-mander
Tano,
Really?
-
Besides all the normal,
not Jedi guards,?
-
Because that smells of plot
convenience,
-
Like she and Ahsoka barely had one conversation,
Where she enabled Anakin’s crazy assumptions and tyran
-ical ruling,
-
?
-
[It’s-
a nice
shot-]
-
Whelp,
-
The
guarding system are real
weird here;
Sometimes it’s the
Centurions,
This is the real first time
we’re
see-ing
arc
-
Overly
competent,
Also like
five people dude, chill
Also the feck
are you telling her
this?
Oh
—
Guilt?
(Good)
.
?
.
[None of them have a red button
except for one,
Hm,
Oh yes it just completely open.
the door with no shields
and let the unarmed person go first,
-
Also yeah
dick move
Ahsoka,
You were
the Jedi to contact
-
Seriously, not your attorney
Oh heck
even one of the older Jedi?
The ap-prentice-
?
This is getting to
Mary Sue
levels
of
“fecking unlikely,”.
And
“unrealistic,”
To establish how much of an
unrealistic unbelievable bad ass
Ahsoka
Is,
Which, congrats, I don’t believe it
That a person living in subsequent poverty would know the name of one of the young to-be Jedis, Who reach-
ed such
renown
after
a few short missions,
Where not much was actually done,
And she never had an official staring
role, on her own,
That’s pure wish fulfillment
and it’s pure bullshit
[You know what would’ve made more sense?
And I’m not excusing the story in any way
I fecking
hate
it at this point,
But,
What if she was someone screwed over by some people
smugglers?
Who saw some serious crime getting committed,
And knew the name
“Ahsoka,”
From stories of the other people that got screwed over
by people
smug
glers,
Building on the past mythos;
Her adventures with the others
Esta-blishing herself as a
smaller crime fighter,
Typically.
asso-ciated with people smugglers,
And allowing her to get up a bit of reputation
Form her
own name.
-
Just
-a thought
-
Time
Wow Ahsoka’s a bitch
[derogatory
non-identification)
The animation...
is not helping,
Mine,
Yeah you mentioned it,
Before
She did
you fuckin watermelon,
Also,
[Apologies.
I meant
to make it
smaller, Didn’t;
Happen,]
But point
being she really
is trash;
Over - judgemental
Willing to go farther than
humane
Willing to assume
authority,
And yeah lady did terrible
shit,
But it was
five
people,
in a
war;
If that’s what set Ahsoka off, she’s really not up to hearing about the boomer war
Because yeah
boomer is far from innocent,
But these are
boomers this shit is expected,
And certainly didn’t
add or require that kind of tone
or behavior;
That’s
A
“You
Suck,”
And
a trip
to
accoun
-tability
Also yeah let’s talk about the
tone here for multiple reasons;
The Boomer isn’t the victim either
But by God, does it try to fame it as such,
When we come in,
[and I’m not
doing pictures for obvious
reasons,]
They are cur-led up in a corner-
Tone just barely making it about childify
-ication
And I got to say this
tone is fucking backwards,
With the elder boomer criminal,
Portrayed
with a unsteady unsure
scared tone,
Meanwhile Ahsoka,
For my complaints
of being portrayed
Too young
for her actions,
Too old
for the
-tone,
Is now portrayed
even older,
With cyn-
icism and defen-
siveness-
-
Which doesn’t make sense since the
present Gen doesn’t have anything to defend,
And has the un-certain tone
(Usually hope-ful)
The tones are completely wrong
Right after it being said that Ahsoka acts young in many ways
Instead of
acting
Like an old person who’s already
done their thing
And has something to be
defensive about
[not even the most toxic person
in present Gen,
Loses the uncertain tone
until their time is up,]
And continues a constant theme of the series not having any patience and not taking the time to develop anything
They want to have
, Ahsoka be cool and bad ass and say certain lines but don’t have the patience to work-
To develop it
properly,
Causing everything to fall
extremely
flat;
Re;verse
(With
correct
Tone,
Ass-
uming this is a
trap,)
O; What are you doing here?
A: What you?
[Door
closes
behind]
O; [crack Guess you’re not the only one
les;] to fall into their trap,
A; [Lifts Tell me or -or
up]
O; Or- or
what?!
It’s not
in your character
,child
A; Maybe
[Slump not
Ing]
- -
That at least feels natural
and not like a
body switch,
- - -
[also now you’re playing the death theme after he brutalized several people?]
Like,
[Wow that was quite possibly the most pointless set up I’ve ever seen,
With several
easy resolvable instances -
Play it straight
with not a drop of self-awareness to drink,
And because Ahsoka acted like a complete jerk ass I have no interest,
Especially when they can switch her tone to
old by gone enabler
[Good job taking any tension
or suspension of
belief, out of
your story]
...
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Clone Wars Sabotage
(Oh yeah Saltine Triscuit died)
(I never cared about her as a character
I never cared about her as a person
(Difference being how others
react to her based on
how she actually is
(Vs.)
(She had one good episode before
her character-ization went inconsistent)
And I surely never cared for
her inconsistent and
poorly
written romance,)
On with it;
Hey, new,
(Random
Slow-mo
-)
The tone
got better
near
the
Beginning
-
Though had
a bumpy
start,
-
Though the plot escalation as well as tonal, and particularly emotional escalation, was pretty off
Resulting in emotional responses that were way too rushed or intense, being painted as logical
By the narrative,
(Not
in the universe
portrayed as a
illogical,)
Jedi spend the whole entire time profiling one dude and ignoring all other leads, a riot forms in one day with no
proof, or
evidence,
The council
su.
ddenly cares about the
clones,
Some
how they were kind of
right,
Also they totally invade his home, and do a lot of pretty problematic things that are not portrayed as troubling
[or disturbing
abuse of authority,]
[(more so
than the normal
authority assume)]
(Kinda)
Seriously
Skywalker assumes the very worst of this random person
and will not let it go, gosh darn terrorizes another
per-son
(Skipping way to the accusations and false negatives
with no explan
ation)
-and it only gets the serious
music,
Not that this is
clearly
screwed up
music
(And
portrayal)
[Also oh yeah the Jedi terrorize a woman, then continues when she runs away from Anakin - Worst Law Enforcers Ever-
[Who only takes the
High ground when it’s ordering Ahsoka what
advantage point to attack her at:]
Who was trying to pin the blame on her from the second they heard
LaRusso
And
uses very circumstantial evidence;
“How’d you know he was dead,”
[Literally told her five seconds ago that
nano bots were involved and that her husband was
MIA,]
[Runn-ing away means
you’re hiding something]
-Or don’t like Professor-Assumes-The-Worst-Ther-
e-
[Like thank God they were right
But still the heck was that not
portrayed a lot more terrifying?
And is dismissed as well clearly nothing more suspicious is going on despite there clearly being a loose end- about this
“goes higher than you think,”
That’s just completely ignored
[Like with the Zy-
gar-ian
s.]
Being a good case for why
assumed authority,
is terrifying, and excus
-ing it -
not a good idea,
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Clone Wars The Lawless
(Gosh darnit-)
[(I’ve talked about the
particular
ly bad faith of citing a
dead coworker]
Oh great
and it has child soldiers
(abominations)
(I’m just tox-ing
it and
skipping,
)
TOX
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Clone Wars Shades of Reason
{ Well.
(That got worse,)
?
[Well they apparently over took a kingdom in under 22 minutes
With the riot-ers of Puppet.
ton-ia ]
(Every concern I had about the pacing
comes back to bite this
episode,
I’m not happy
about it)
It wasn’t set up properly, it wasn’t built up properly, it wasn’t executed well and the emotions were nonexistent,
[It was all the reason I hate the Mandalore
arc,
[
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Clone wars Eminence
Okay. .
Hey emotion
?
?
?
Vsla
(What is a
Vizsla?)
Enabler
Vs
Aggressive
Non-
Compliant
Un-accou
n-t
able-
-
Enabler-
Souls
[Ok I’m trying to keep track
here;
(Because I do try to follow the stories
in case they become
some thing
even when they are in the
-0
cate
-gory-
- Yoda’s generation
-Qui- Gon’s generation
Dooku’s
-Obi-wan
-Anakin’s generation
- Ahsoka
[I am not counting the feckin young-lings”]
Okay dude seems around Obi-Wan but below
Both him and Saltine
- Higher than Anakin though
So,
-Yoda’s generation
-Qui- Gon’s generation
Dooku’s
-Obi-wan
- This dude
(Pre Visla)
-Anakin’s generation
- Ahsoka
Now Maul;
He seemed younger than Obi-Wan
but older than Anakin
So;
-Yoda’s generation
-Qui- Gon’s generation
Dooku’s
-Obi-wan
- This dude
(Pre Visla)
-Maul
-Anakin’s generation
- Ahsoka
So just for the record, Ahsoka’s generation
which is now an adult over 22,
Is dealing with
Anakin‘s generation
....
[Ok going to guesstimate regarding behavior,]
Is directly Obi-Wan‘s
[But they were two generations
under Obi-Wan
Pre-Visla; acting as some kind a
Brother generation
- Maul; Youngest
Brother
-Savage; ?
So,
[ -Yoda’s generation ]
[ -Qui- Gon’s generation
Dooku’s ]
[ - Obi-wan
- This dude } (Enablers)
(Pre Visla)
-Maul
-Anakin’s generation ]
- Ahsoka (Present)
(Ok you know what
I’m breaking out the colored markers
for this shit)
-Yoda’s generation
[Enabler]
(Progenitor
to
Qui-Gon’s
/
Dooku)
|
-Qui- Gon’s generation
Dooku’s
(Progenitor
To
Obi-wan)
|
- Obi-wan
| - This dude (Pre Visla)
| (Younger)
| [Brother gen]
| To
| Obi- wan
| -Maul
| (You
| nger
| Gen)
| [As in born before not that they are the same species
| though if
| someone fecks up the galaxy- everyone has to deal with it]
| - Savage
| [You
| nger
| Gen]
-Anakin’s generation
Ahsoka (How)
note I am ignoring that bit about Plagueis
Because no
And going on the direct
apprentice line-
[which note
I am aware
may ignore
several possi-
bilities-
Including Qui-gon and Obi-wan’s
Gen poss
-ib
ly,
are
bro.
Because of
convenience,
[Which is why I am ignoring the Plaguies
thing-
Because if serious is that old it’s really implying that someone that is old enough to be Anakin’s Great great grandfather, did that,
The nonsense applied in the whole midclorians to create
life thing
(Consent??)
And my general disregard for
anything that illuminates the opportunity of choice or
feckin’ realism;
Now if you’ll look at the chart;
[I NOW UNDERSTAND WHY THEY HAVE A
NO CHILDREN POLICY- no
attach-ments-]
Note that means there have been (at least)
four [distinct] generations in play
*are
[ ANd NONE of these fuckers die of natural causes
[Aka old age]
Unless you count getting run through by a light sword!
[HoW]
[”oh yeah the galaxy’s un-balanced,”
Cause you have so many fecking kids-]
Apologies just had to get that out of my system
[After making the damn chart]
We struggle
at three,
Like if I have to bring out the colored markers
I think that’s too many
I mean you can try
but it’s going to be a hell of a time
[For the writers]
justifying
how the core-
Point being
it’s a mess-
[ And I’m doing this just to figure out a conversation
-The generational beef
- The morality
- because yeah while they’re both
enablers, The tox
instigator, clearly has lower ground to their
victim,
Who was tox
first,
Who has the advantage
[One of the things that make a Narc conflicts,
a bit
of risk,
The only thing I can with our Narcs so poorly
established,
Including
their
excessives
And weak
nesses]
And whether I should boo or
cheer,
Or some thing as a good line or.
poor
[because I honestly think the line they’re doing here can work and maybe I didn’t need the chart but it makes it a bit easier and gives an understanding of how I’m comparing,
Because. .]
“ if they are weak
why do you wait,”
Because from a victim or younger generation that’s a pretty
potent/poignant line
From an abuser
its tone deaf
and needs more
malician
-
Personally I think they did a good job with
Pre-viz
-here
He’s the right kind of tone of someone stuck in their glory days trying to get the
younger generation to enable him a bit more regardless of the cost,]
[Power-ful allies
Haha,
What allies
[That didn’t-
Betray
Her,]
-
[Kenobi]
[HaHa]
[i’m sorry but regardless when the writers, pull it out of the
randomness hat, he’s a punk ass bitch
[Excuse me
for overuse of that term
I strictly mean it in the
derogatory non-
identification
Way
Meaning,
Un accountable in terms of fighting and self-defense of his pro
-fessed expertise]
[and occasionally in self-determination against peer pressure and threats far above or below his skill level]
Specifically, the Jedi Council
[continu
ing
on,”
]
[Ventress]
Exile
[you’ve been allegedly exiled
so many times it’s a bingo card,
]
(Also
instead of locking them up]
(Like I might’ve missed a few points
due to tox
But,
She didn’t just send them back to exhile where they started fecking with the shit
Did she?
I got as far as the juice thing then
Fast-pasted through the Academy
(No skim)
So sorry
if anything was missed
(But tox)
?
[that was a suddenly
softer tone,]
But
fair,
A-ll
Count
Dooku-
Dude,
he just didn’t [rabidly] support your small little fan club
that couldn’t do much
And [last I checked],
Just told
you not to do
a thing,
Like yeah
might’ve been
relatively
poor advice but what were you
expecting-
-
[Tone’s
a bit weird]
But she
has a point,
Despite the
uneven-
?
[that’s a strangely powerful way to keep him
intact]
Though
not-
-
To vote,
Also,
Who,
Why?
?
[In all truth, while the expressions were
a bit off, (I assume benefit of the doubt - illustrators
version-).
That that could’ve been a relatively poignant scene,
a (we totally
got him
To
Enable
Our
War-
between
Two
Enablers.]
How is
Savage taking less time than
Maul?
[is it cause made out of
metal?
Is it because
Savage is bigger?]
[Also you know what would’ve been
interesting?]
[Note, interesting
not better; it’s
perfectly serviceable
as is;
[Completely aesthetic]
If Maul had been “threatened” into the
death watch,
With Savage
as the chip,
And feigned
[Possibly having to be t-alked back into it
- cause
I mean he
died]
Just interesting,
?
Oh yeah that has been pretty fucked up for him considering the last time he was on anything resembling an operating table,
[also I kind of like the idea of Maul as
(for now) a nicer Sith Lord than
his master,
)
?
?
[Despisi ng
the
enabler,
But other than my
assum.
What is actually their in-
tention?
Because they don’t seem to really have a plan
other than
destroy things,
And even that is inconsistent
Too late. .
(I understand murder. .
But that wasn’t really set up)
)
?
Oh yeah approaching the clearly
ag-gressive
per-
sion
-
With an entourage
-
In the hospital
-
With his
injured brother/
mor-alty
pet)
Good
job
smart
guy
this would in no way put him on
edge,
E-r
[Not
sure
about
that,
]
?
-
[that was kind of
funny]
,
“Name
-s,”
[They going to make something
up ?]
“Brothers”
- that was a very
specific
word
choice,
Duc-hess
(Oh -yeah
he brought that up in the conversation-
“Army,”
[Please
no more
pirates,]
(Also yeah
trying to force peoples opinions to change (for
(Corr that always works out
upt)
well,)
?
(Are we going to get
dr
-oids)
“Black sun,”
Aight-
Gang,
“But there a crime syndicate,”
Whin-
ed the guy,
Leading a (death)
cult,
(Like I’m pretty sure they have done worse in this originated as some kind of crime syndicate/
Espionage within
the government-
-]
?
Dude
they’re cannon
get it together,
-
Oh so just
black dealing]
?
-
?
[Is
prisoner
]
?
Attack,
-
Or
Assemble/
En-tourage
-
?
- -
-?
[Ok so just a show of
strength,]
-
?
-
“ what a
stupid crime syndicate,’
.
Like;
“I want to talk to your boss
about possibly becoming business partner(s)
lucrative opportunity for both of us,
doing business
but sketchy,”
[Willing to participate in your
black market
op]
“ he’s gonna
kill you,”
? ??
[Like you do
realize that’s like going to a
- bank, [for a loan] and the
door
guy
Threate-ning you
with
death
-
Like how do you stay in
business?
[Like, don’t care
much for either practice,
Just don’t see why they don’t go to the non-threateny guy
over there-
?
[Like I’m sorry but that was just a laughable way of
establishing
t
hrea
-t
-
Bad-assery
-
And I think [it got let off-
way
too light-
-”
-
?
-
Okay
-
seriously-
[’ The One-
species
evil,’ is really starting to grind my gears
One whole generation of a species decided to go into purely only
crime syndicate,
Al-one-
:
The background
Kind
-a
Hot-
-
Now
- -
-
This is some nice
sc
ene
r
y-
-
I like the
Gold-
-
The
the outfits-
What?
-
[
]
[Note; I can understand not wanting to fall into the tropes of your Genre,
But it has to make sense-
[How does this-]
[excuse me
while I go into
depth on this]
This guy works, crime syndicate
AKa organized
illegal dealings,
Behind
the government(s)
back-
There are multiple ways you can do this
(clothing wise)
1. Bure-aucrat;
Aka the dude’s in the Italian suits,
Which not only denotes they are dealings of
off brand goods
(Typically
not in the country
of origin]
[Place]
But also
as their
role;
As a bureau
cratic brush
over-
Typical-
ly
Find
- ing
this guy
cover-ing
up,
2. Ragg
-ed
Dude in
brown
over
-coat
Torn-
-
His whole thing is looking like an unimpressive citizen allowing him to move with ease-
With the disadvantage of being
underestimated-
Possibly
works-
-cargo-
-
(That’s also just basic civilian that is generally associated with extremely chaotic and unpredictable allowing you to go more
ways story wise)
Point being,
some function,
Mean,
This dude is gold and gaudy and speaks more of a
barbarian then a black-
dealer
Crime
Syn-
dicate,
[and it’s not even gold as in the “I’m better than all you smugglers/crime lords
come at me bro!”
It simply does not have the
slickness for that,
No the
scheme,
[and fine
if you want to do alien fashion you do
alien fashion
but you how to establish that,
(And it’s still really comes back to that
pre-established logic
,).
Excluding the horn
which I’m assuming
is part of his head,
Again this is speaking more
War lord than
crime lord,
He really
DOES give off that
Aura,”
-
[Ok yeah this is really the most
out of tune scene,
Giving
me a headache from just the
plain inconsistency,”
-
?
-
Yeah...
no idea what just happened
...
Pre
Viz-la;
Was staring,
Then Savage was
laughing,
Just feckin
holding the
guy-
And now
there was someone on the floor.
. .
[??]
- -
Whelp, guess the other
g-uards just stood around and did nothing-
-
“Black sun,”
-
Despite there being no black in your outfits and
we haven’t even seen
an
in-
signia,
And I’m starting to think
n-e-ither in their operation
Seeing as they’
re,
guardy obvious,
[ pretty
damn
blatant,
Too
Aigh
h-t-
-
[Again that’s behavior more befitting of a
[War
]
lord,
-
?
-
Oh, yeah
that bodyguard was just straight up chilling
No ser-
ious.
-ly;
Like, I know my boss has ordered me to dispose of you,
I’m real sorry about that,
I can take you
outside if you want
Don’t
be-
Oh.
hey,
hold.
up-
Well,
shit
[Frank
is having a shit
day,
]
Like
(That is.
A.
[Wait
murder’s illegal!,
Exp
ression,
[What the hec
-k,
. . .
Well,
Shit,
No hesitation
(Bob is
having a shit
,day
[He’s
a
greeter,
]
.
-
?
Really, because we only saw four guys that you killed and that greeting party,
(That’s still
guerilla warfare
at best;)
[like seriously unless the
Mandalorian(s) only have like five guards
you’re still going to be
over-powered-
- -
<
Saltine
..weak
So much so that we haven’t even really seen the army-
Just some guys carrying cargo
And cargo
crat
e(s?
)
F-o
Y-eah,
One
Vis
-i
on-
-
C-l
[H-e’s righ
t - dude has no actual
commitment to killing
Sal-
tine,
This is just some
game,
he’s playing,
While
Maul actually seems interested
in
kicking his abusers
,
-
Dep-th
-
I mean
-
do either of you?
[like up to this point
I thought this was some
Gen beef,
But dude
Talks to
Pre-
Visla-
Like-
- In that
line,
Like he’s
same Gen,
Which doe
sn’t match the tone they’ve been
projecting
up to this point,
Of
Pre-Vizla,
robbed
of
something,
-
“Cri-minals,”
Seriously when did these guys have any qualms about mingling with other petty demeanors?
For that matter
and I don’t usu
-ally sin
compet
ency-
But this was
right after the
episode where
Darth
Maul
got his ass kicked,
And continues the major
theme of
inconsistency,
There is no scale of
escalation-
(Which is fine if you want to do
non-sequential if
you want to do
un-attached
short stories,)
[Though you should probably have some reference in order to keep the emotional tone con-
sist-
-ent-
And approp
-riate,)
There’s
no
scale
of
power,
As in I have no idea
who
can beat
who,
(Not in, ‘they’re equally matched
so it’s up to fate,” tension,
No,
It’s the writers haven’t established anything
And whoever wins just wins because
author favoritism,
Seriously
The only two consistent things;
Obi-Wan constantly gets his ass
kicked,
Unless
the
writers
play
favorites
And author’s hand is almost always
very clearly shown,
Which
you
don’t
want
me
to see;
As the
audience;
Note; I’m not saying there can’t be
luck; Or that something
existential can’t unbalance
The
circumstance,
Say one dude is trained in
anti-gravity situations,
One is not,
And the gravity
is flipped off,
Having them flop
around is a
decent
enough
representation,
Setting it
up beforehand
is even better,
But that’s not
what’s done
here;
(Not only is there no explanation to the sudden
rise in competency,
But there’s no
set up)
And there are
several scenes where it again relies on the concept of
(over) negative assumption,
Believing
the tropes
will carry
it, Enough to sustain
[Particularly with the Maul
scenes. .]
Where it’s like they’re saying
“And...
And what?
You didn’t
establish
anything,
There’s
nothing there for you to fall back on
And,
your menacing moment falls flat
[When no you have to actually
set that up,]
You didn’t earn that scene
otherwise,
[Empty tropes
make for
e-mpty
s-tories-
]
Why..?
[also didn’t he just tell you to
fuck off with
your
plan..
?
Well...
The characters are no longer drywall
the set up and the consistency on the other hand...
[still damn shaky,]
Plot wise,
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Clone Wars Point of No Return
Blue!
Ai-ght
?
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Clone Wars Missing in Action
Also
Blue
-
Al-ight
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Clone Wars A Sunny Day
It’s Fucking BLUE
OKAY
(I like
blue.)
Why?
Tho
Up date
It
was
aight
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Clone Wars Secret Weapons
[An actually plot important episode]
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Clone War Bound for Rescue
[Kinda]
Hey are we focus on something besides that weird youngling’s
[thing]
Oh fuckin’ dammit
[I honestly think they
ran out of ideas]
Seriously this is not
empha
sizing anything good
Seriously,
why are we dealing with these guys?
They’re not the main group up to this point;
(Obi-Wan Kenobi, Anakin,
Ahsoka,
The Jedi Council,).
They’re not
emphasizing anything important,
These are
not an accurate representation of children
[Nevermind
,child soldiers]
They are a child abominations
and nothing good comes of that,
[I’ve
gone over
it before but
if
your
moral
is
Un - applicable
and
useless-
“
So is your.
story-
-
As such I am skipping the
feck
over this.
-
[Because if they can put the effort in to make a good story, I can’t [ensure]
I, put the effort in to make a reviewer’s thing of it,
[that and I’m pretty sure that despite this going on soft tox, as par for the course on writer tips [Ex-
cessive]
They still “owe” me several
good stories
*No
En-
-
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[Great, are we going to see more of Yoda attempting to endanger un-child like abomination’s life and it being
painted
as a good thing by the
narrative]
Yep.
[A quick
note on
why
I hate this;
Suffering for
Good
is Bullshit,
No [good] story
requires suffering
Life doesn’t need suffering
[Implying that inflicting
suffer
ing
on anyone
is
Necessary]
Implying that causing distress
or pain to anyone
is
Necessary,
Never mind, to
children]
[makes you anything than an asshole]
[Yoda
is
an
asshole]
In order for good
[That is some straight up
Narc Bullshit]
And for entertainment;
A field that requires artificially stimulating the senses
without causing physical harm
[or actual distress]
That’s a damn insult
to normalize
[Insult
to
humanity]
[also yeah Yoda was totally about to let a kid
DIE
Like yeah they say oh no you only trapped inside your head
But.
If that kid wasn’t an abomination,
They will be dead
,five times over
[Tu-
mblr
Sp
ac-
In
g]
-
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?
Child soldiers!
(Also yeah this is really
contrasting/confusing it with imagery from both better episodes and not so much-
Grooming!
[So yeah making the world such a
dangerous place and
grooming them to believe this is the only option!
[Yay!]
[Violence]
-
Oh no
“Hey you are most
effecti-vely
order
-ed
Your groomers’
Ordered you to be the least irritating to our
social standard,
So we’re awarding them
[The gro
-omers]
[Not you because all kids want us to eat and sleep [as well as you know a stable environment]
and pfft,
You’re entertainment!
[We could reasonably put
our selfish desires aside
And reasonably
decide
Whether we have the
temperament,
restraint and
commitment
[As well
as maturity]
To not only create a society
conducive
To allowing children to grow up as
their own person
[instead of entertainment kept under watchful eye and
subjected to our very well]
Never mind
If we personally
could
Put our sense of
personality behind
[Acknowledge
,with great maturity,
That our time on this planet is
drawing to a close,
And willingly
Giving up our place
in the world
(Including all
access to entertainment,
And personality)
To ensure
a new being,
Grows up
knowing that is not alone,
But grows up in a stable
environment,
Knowing said
past will not change to hurt it
Much like the
sun,
Not being over-
involved and
burn-ing-
Nor neglectful
[And distant] and leaving them in the dark to stumble
for the basics
-stability-]
[Moving just enough to know they are not in a cruel
uncaring world]
[And so that they will always remember the
light
~the warmth~.
no matter where they go,
[Nor speak of a lack of resources for
they will not have to
beg]
[Continuing on;
I know this is a different
arc:
TOXIC
(Very lightly as a series has already been
burnt but I will never hesitate to throw it further into the
incinerator-]
What it constantly implies is
dis-
-turbing,
With no matter how many times the boomers try to justify it as
“it’s just for kids,”.
-that my generation not only did not want to and did not ask for generational overstep, but did not want this toxic under brand unaccountable garbage either,
If excessive should make something, it should make it for them
-self,
If it is toxic to them, it will be toxic to anyone else
And generational overstep to present this tox will not work in
it’s favor,
(Nor has it ever been viewed favorably by
non-enabling generations to recall-ed it upon
age,
Tox is Tox regardless
[There was no story that has not been made better by not including
un-child like abominations,]
Committing more acts of
toxicity does not make it better
(Two rights,
still whole lot of
feck-ing wrong)
And they were attempted to overstep the boundaries in order to get power and satisfaction from those that can do nothing against it
[is noted]
And we calmly asked them to take the foot out of the mouth
(As well as the boot)
And stay on that side of the accountability border
With any dedication they have to
accountability or
the faith in basic human decency,
With the only exception being
validation,
Complete acknowledgment of guilt
to those that they have harmed
(Millennials)
-not apologies
-not excuses
- Complete acknowledgment
of the harm they have caused
of the validity of their
victims’ emotions
And the full realistic
consequences of what they have done
-Being left at the victims own choice
and not being forced to take them
for none are required to forgive them
-As well as simply healing of the harm
and trauma they caused
- Without thanks
anticipated or
expected
-
The Future
- does not
want your
bull
-shit,
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And with this continuation of the arc
The continuing disturbing moral; Yes absolutely enable these positively over involved narcs they are totally different than the normal abusive Narcs, totally continue to be complicit
bend a knee,
capacitate,
make
room
for,
Despite how much accom-odating harms, inconveniences everyone
And how much they do not seem to give any con-sideration to the airport and harm they themselves have done or any even the minute even thought of helping,
Which they could’ve done
several bits before,
Especially if the damage is
largely thanks to it in to their enabling
And direct
Influence
With them only moving when they see a “Worser,” enabler,
a designated instigator, be held to any modicum of
res
ponsibility,
Totally not a performative attempt to
avoid accountability,
Gas-light those who did the work,
And
(Dodge) the consequences
from the toxic environment from the created
Nope just keep making excuses after them after it’s gone a long past the point of reasonability
And has caused on irrefutable harm to you and everyone around you and possibly your environment
Keep
ignoring the emotions
And insis-
ting that this guy is going to magically fix the problem
(Despite his time being long up ahead he decided to do
that-)
Especially if every circumstance and consequence you’re feeling and that is harming you is a directly due to the responsibility of your refusal to
hold this person accountable and get rid of the misery and suffering in your life,
(Absolutely do not do this
This is said with extreme Sardonism
(And a comprehensive of understanding of enablers
and abusers..)
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