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Clone Wars
  Whelp it’s just introduced mind control
     Nope-
       Especially not plot
       I’m packing up my bags              I am leaving,
           I try to give everything the benefit of the doubt and at least try to get some good out of it via responsible quarantine practices
                   But, no
        [I don’t care if it all ends up a dream and the mind control end up being some bullshit, nope,              Not fucking worth it,                I’m not that damn              bored
             Too much tox for me
  Overall         Thoughts,      /Last          Thoughts            On            The             Series;       1. I’ll be honest I completely knew what        they were going for at the beginning
             *Teen Romance*
   Aka         Over    sexualization      of children      but we called it        something        different    so it doesn’t count
       (In reality                no child        acts like that,)
   So          Tox         Via        Proxy         For         That         Bul         l-       Shit
              Final;         It has a nice        animation
    But nothing           behind          the eyes,
     (Going           to do anything          better with my time)            Good day
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Clone Wars      The Wrong Jedi
   [Oh no it was there was with absolutely no set up!
     Now the asshole can go free despite likely causing a whole bunch of damage and being a fucking asshole,
    Also yeah screw everything else]
      hm
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Clone Wars    To Catch a Jedi
       [The clear child with no derogatory intentions makes me want to push the series father into the incinerator than it  already is
                         Feck you
                           [it was stronger but the              Tumblr refresh took me out of interest                                Rewriting it]
                                 Burn,
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Clone Wars    The Jedi Who Knew Too Much
            (Terrorize a                  woman)
               An adult
             Also wait       I thought they said no one was killed?.
             Like back near the ending they were like                 “he was the only one,”
                  [Working                         With?]
     ??
              So Force 
                That it was never ever brought up that they were dead or what happened to them or just whatever
                  ...    
               Oh joy a funeral 
              with a shade of                        Eugenics
                  Dear                        Frick
                 (This is why I hate    funerals; Bad enough that someone died in such a terrible way that they couldn’t be accountable in return to their        home (which they should     have) and had as close to a peaceful       death knowing that they hadn’t inflicted further pain and suffering on their fellow man,
          No let’s just parade that shit around and make everyone feel as miserable as possible while encouraging that misery
        (Not imagine reminding them about        soon their life will be over)
                     Dic                         k-                         .                         Re-                      mem-ber                            -                          Oh yeah I really care about all those   unnamed people-                           -                            Also yeah let’s try to remember how they were [in life] well the fact that they are dead is robbed in their faces
                        And guilt-tripped
                   Dick.
               [Ahsoka stop being an assumptious dick during a moment of                      silence,]
                   Well I may not respect the concept of funerals        But I do respect the concept of                    If there were rules for an established event                       That you decide to participate in                           You should probably follow                         them,
                       [Empathy circle,                            Asking if sad
                       No shit Sher                             Lock,]
                         It’s a                                Funeral]
[also why does      Ahsoka,        Single               out        Barisse?          She isn’t crying or seems noticeably more upset than any one else,
    “My            Light saber,”
     My mentor         was doing          nothing,
        I know, “younglings”              But for the age we see them          learning about light sabers              There’s little to no chance that someone she learned besides,                 Could teach her anything,
           “ Live for the living Jedi,”
           Then why did you drag the body out of here and make people stare        at it?
        [like live for the living      that’s all good and good,             But part of that includes              not being a dick,            Doing your role to make the world a habitable and decent place,                And being accountable,                 (If you’re inches away from death                  maybe stay home).                 And while this is going                  old fashion murder,                            You’d would assume they would’ve sectioned it off if they were anything resemb                      ling decent                      People,
                 Like not just one place (lane).     for this dude to operate,
                  And in case of       sociality,                   This place wasn’t closed off (permanent) for multiple reasons
                 (Like seriously you guys want to gather around a place where someone died?)
      Point being;           Living for the           living means being          acc-ountable                  And not subjecting people to           staring              at your           dead body,        -
  Live through     us     . . .   Er-
 [But-   they already did their fair share of     living-
[apologies for the “gallows”      humor,
   Just...following       the conclusion of the episodes         focus on,
        Death
   [Point being; you can’t make me feel bad for someone who literally decided   fuck the environment        fuck life     fuck humanity,      i’m going to be a self-destructive       asshole,            And it kicked them in the          ass,
       [Like yeah yeah           loss of life very           tragic,             World is a            wor           -ser,             But that’s a            quick moment-              -] 
           -            [Also yeah                 Jedi life,                   ]
              Like screw all the cleaning                staff,
            Do they even get burials?                   (Weird hierarchy)
               Also, those were all                Jedi?
             (Like seriously          what were they doing down there?)
             Also yeah no wonder             everyone was suspicious,
             Like five Jedi down there for no                 established                     reason
             Weird glowy
              Barisse
              [Where’s                Luminara?
              You know,                      Barisse’s            “Men-tor,”            Authority             assumer,
                  Known                        for                        . . .                 being on top of                    things.                       . . .                            And control                        -ling-                             -                             Micro manage                              -                                “Mov,
                          Seriously     can anyone        leave       this woman alone        for five seconds. .
      Excuses she was already            terrorized enough by              Sky               walker                    .                    Still sucks,
              Why?
               Re-                public
               Jedi-
                How is Ahsoka part of the space military and doesn’t know that they answer to the space government?
                 [Did she think       they were just going to keep them locked up in the same       cell forever?
    No space trial?
     Like this seems       like a very stupid           excuse-          To get Ahsoka involved,            (And overly sus)              And terror      -ize this poor woman further
      (Note I know what she did was            downright shitty,
      (Assuming she didn’t give a false confession          under duress)
       That doesn’t excuse the      tox,-
      Clones kil-
    Seriously when      and why does everyone care about the         clones?
     Like ‘oh no the      (ex) child soldiers died!
        Yeah?
    Like they were “actual” people             (By their standards)        and Jedi            (Who seem to rank up pretty high on the standards, even get a separate burial, and getting a statement ranking their lives only              (Assumed authority             is shit)           right there,
      Ad-miral
     Also yeah      they have different legal systems       for different groups of people,          (We’re just going to paint                that as fine,)
           Like I know this is              assumed authority,               But that’s adding another layer of tox that I think should be             acknowledged -
          She’s guilty-
             Fair-
          Dealt with                    Did-
    Did Ahsoka just advocate for the       death penalty-          !?
     Like her hand moved in that         “over the neck,”             expression,                  .                   Revenge
       Dude this is more than venting 
      this is murder
     (Focus on the don’t         murder          part, before the painting with          broad strokes-          ,         (You’d think one of the older Jedi would be advocating for this           shit)
    A-hsoka
    Could’ve        been a nice moment,
     But the tone was off
     And it didn’t make sense
       ‘ The evid-ence              seems clear’?
       How would the      evidence have changed anything?
          ‘ things will never change,’
        Weird statement,
         - -            Military
        That’s a damn good idea considering they’re          peacekeepers
     (Oh yeah that’s the thing that’s thrown around pretty sparsely;               These guys are supposed to keep the peace,
          (Yet from the itchy trigger finger you wouldn’t think that)
           Never mind Anakin’s suddenly developed                    terrorizing tendencies,
          What would be good...
          If they played              it up for evil,
           And didn’t ignore the        unfortunate implications,
        “Peace Keeper(s);
    Hey, they actually called       them out for that bullshit,
     That’s good
     And yeah she is 100% deserves to be ashamed,          For enabling Anakin          last round,              And possibly            brutalizing,
   Note, there’s a difference between venting       and brutalizing,
    (Mostly decided by     emotions,)
    But still they killed more people         than is acceptable either way                              (0)
       Oh never mind she’s just bitter and completely ignoring the consequences of her actions
         (Yeah!)
   (This is not accountability      this is            Vigilante justice,              Trying to solve everybody’s problems            for them,           Which is the just not how it works,             You can’t assume               accountability for               someone else
             You              aren’t                 them
 [Author-ity]
    Strate-gy-
     Um?
    [What?]  Is.
    Is she    a master now,
     If not then where is          Luminara?
      And just           tasks?
       [i’m sorry but Luminara doesn’t seem like the type to assign that kind of work,
     Being pretty controlling
     And high on everything rule -abiding even their elitist attitude -        towards the jedi-
     Pretty sure    she would’ve sent a bot       or a servant        or something              . . .                Not      an     apprentice?             . . .?             ?   Literally nothing about Luminara?
       “friend”
   Assuming a lot that made they’ve only interacted       once and nearly died that      time,
     Also, comfort?
    Ahsoka is the only one that seems particularly    disturbed-
    Yeah      Barisse is soft-spoken             -                But         not really sad that I can tell
   [all of her speech has been well actively non-consequential and      nonsensical,
  That vague]
  Also yeah     Ahsoka feels bad,           After just say          -ing            Screw              You              To a general that reasonably pointed out that they’re peace keepers, and shouldn’t be interfering so much and so aggressively, in other people’s     lives
   (And that’s fair with Lord terrorizer but painted as it’s no big     deal,”          Over there)
     So yeah you can’t really make me sympathize with someone who just a essentially said “Screw being an accountable person,  I want to hurt people         (Beyond reasonable venting         parameters),          And possibly kill them,
    Yeah, no sympathy
    Young
     More so psychopathic,
      [Like pretty sure      she insinuated murder there,]
       What’s with the cell phone music?
         Seriously, look;   
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 She’s fine
  This,
  Also     geez she’s jumping right into the         baggage?
  Like poor Barrisse,        She just wanted to go for a walk      and get some tasks      done    and this person is bringing in the tox,
   [Like seriously you don’t just randomly launch into a rant about the abusers and the system they created,
    Everyone already          knows,
    Stick to the talking when there’s something actually good to    share,
   [excluding         rare     occasions,           - ]
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Dear frick      what have       I got myself.       into?]
   Damn poor Barrisse      is trying to get out of this            conversation..
     Like dude that’s against code...
     Dude..
    Haha, you’re so cool
   * through gritted teeth,           *please help me*,
      Genoisse
     * Dear god you’re bringing up that             terrible             situation*?
         -         
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        [Help ME]
             ?
            Oh yeah that’s not a completely weird thing to say to             someone after a               mur-der      
                  -    
                  ?     
            [Ahsoka’s           projecting fucking..  
              HARD
               Please                     Leave
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        Ha, ha , ha
        [that is a why-do-I-hang-out-with-you       ex       -pression-     -         Like Ahsoka clearly got the talent of starting a long rambling rant about random nonsense and subjecting the nearest person to it” trait from      Anakin         [Pre-quel]              -    
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[Here’s a reminder that Barisse just wanted a book or some   shit
   To do her    “tasks,”          And got       subjected        to that,       -    
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 [Wait this was an        all-call meeting-
       [Apologies for the           abundance of pictures           but I have a lot of thoughts             ,]
          [Why did Luminara and Barisse              get snubbed?
           How is Ahsoka?                  [there are                 -multiple things wrong                   with this-]
        Anyway-
           L-eto
       Because you’re a gosh             darn terrorist,             And out of the two Jedi she             probably knows-           Ahsoka is the least likely to go            {immediate death mode}.                    Probably             she is kind of death mody now,                         -                        Com-mander                             Tano,                        Really?                            -                                  Besides all the normal,                    not Jedi guards,?                                -             Because that smells of plot                      convenience,                           -                          Like she and Ahsoka barely had one conversation,            Where she enabled Anakin’s crazy assumptions and tyran          -ical ruling,              -            ?             -             [It’s-       a nice         shot-]          -          Whelp,            -           The      guarding system are real         weird here;           Sometimes it’s the      Centurions,         This is the real first time          we’re        see-ing           arc             -          Overly          competent,
        Also like      five people dude, chill
      Also the feck    are you telling her            this?
          Oh                —               Guilt?                 (Good)                     .                     ?                       .      [None of them have a red button            except for one,
                               Hm,     Oh yes it just completely open.    the door with no shields   and let the unarmed person go first,
     -           Also yeah      dick move       Ahsoka,
      You were     the Jedi to contact          -          Seriously,   not your attorney
      Oh heck even one of the older Jedi?
     The ap-prentice-            ?
      This is getting to               Mary Sue               levels                  of          “fecking unlikely,”.                   And             “unrealistic,”                   To establish how much of an      unrealistic unbelievable bad ass       Ahsoka              Is,
        Which, congrats,  I don’t believe it
       That a person living in subsequent poverty would know the name of one of the young to-be Jedis, Who reach-       ed such        renown       after            a few short missions,                Where not much was actually done,
             And she never had an official staring                   role, on her own,
      That’s pure wish fulfillment      and it’s pure bullshit
              [You know what would’ve made more sense?                      And I’m not excusing the story in any way                      I fecking         hate                it at this point,
            But,                    What if she was someone screwed over by some people                 smugglers?
                Who saw some serious crime getting committed,
                  And knew the name                     “Ahsoka,”
                    From stories of the other people that got screwed over                        by people                          smug                             glers,
                          Building on the past mythos;                                    Her adventures with the others
                           Esta-blishing herself as a                                smaller crime fighter,
                          Typically.                              asso-ciated with people smugglers,
                          And allowing her to get up a bit of reputation
                           Form her                               own name.                                -                                     Just                                  -a thought                                      -                                     Time
                                Wow Ahsoka’s a bitch                                               [derogatory                                                     non-identification)
                                  The animation...                                       is not helping,
                                         Mine,                                            Yeah you mentioned it,
                                                    Before                                                    She did                                               you fuckin watermelon,
Also,     
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[Apologies.         I meant     to make it    smaller, Didn’t;     Happen,]         But point      being she really         is trash; 
    Over - judgemental
     Willing to go farther than          humane
     Willing to assume           authority,
          And yeah lady did terrible            shit,  
      But it was         five        people,       in a            war;
      If that’s what set Ahsoka off, she’s really not up to hearing about the boomer war
        Because yeah        boomer is far from innocent,
        But these are         boomers this shit is expected,  
         And certainly didn’t         add or require that kind of tone                or behavior;
  That’s          A        “You        Suck,”        And         a trip           to      accoun       -tability
            Also yeah let’s talk about the              tone here for multiple reasons;
               The Boomer isn’t the victim either
                But by God, does it try to fame it as such,
              When we come in,  
                 [and I’m not            doing pictures for obvious                      reasons,]                         They are cur-led up in a corner-                           Tone just barely making it about childify                            -ication
                        And I got to say this                           tone is fucking backwards,
                       With the elder boomer criminal,                             Portrayed                               with a unsteady unsure                                  scared tone,
                          Meanwhile Ahsoka,
  For my complaints     of being portrayed         Too young       for her actions,           Too old         for the        -tone,
       Is now portrayed                 even older,                With cyn-                   icism and defen-                  siveness-                      -                           Which doesn’t make sense since the        present Gen doesn’t have anything to defend,                      And has the un-certain tone                          (Usually hope-ful)                              The tones are completely wrong
                                       Right after it being said that Ahsoka acts young in many ways
    Instead of        acting           Like an old person who’s already         done their thing                 And has something to be        defensive about
   [not even the most toxic person       in present Gen,         Loses the uncertain tone         until their time is up,]
        And continues a constant theme of the series not having any patience and not taking the time to develop anything
       They want to have   , Ahsoka be cool and bad ass and say certain lines but don’t have the patience to work-       To develop it         properly,
    Causing everything to fall        extremely           flat;
   Re;verse          (With      correct          Tone,          Ass-      uming this is a          trap,)
     O; What are you doing here?
    A:   What you?
          [Door             closes             behind]
      O; [crack      Guess you’re not the only one              les;]             to fall into their trap,
       A; [Lifts        Tell me or -or              up]
        O;         Or- or                        what?!
                     It’s not                   in your character                         ,child
        A;        Maybe         [Slump      not         Ing]                           -     -           That at least feels natural             and not like a              body switch,                - - -                [also now you’re playing the death theme after he brutalized several people?]
            Like,               [Wow that was quite possibly the most pointless set up I’ve ever seen,                With several                   easy resolvable instances -                        Play it straight                             with not a drop of self-awareness to drink,
                         And because Ahsoka acted like a complete jerk ass I have no interest,
          Especially when they can switch her tone to                old by gone enabler
             [Good job taking any tension                or suspension of               belief, out of                 your story]
             ...
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Clone Wars      Sabotage
       (Oh yeah Saltine Triscuit died)
      (I never cared about her as a character       I never cared about her as a person              (Difference being how others               react to her based on                   how she actually is                               (Vs.)             (She had one good episode before          her character-ization went inconsistent)
             And I surely never cared for             her inconsistent and            poorly             written romance,)
            On with it;
           Hey, new,
  (Random      Slow-mo                -)
                   The tone           got better                  near                    the                Beginning                     -                    Though had             a bumpy                  start,                      -                       Though the plot escalation as well as tonal, and particularly emotional escalation, was pretty off
                 Resulting in emotional responses that were way too rushed or intense, being painted as logical            By the narrative,                               (Not                 in the universe                   portrayed as a                     illogical,)
      Jedi spend the whole entire time profiling one dude and ignoring all other leads, a riot forms in one day with no      proof,  or    evidence,          The council      su.    ddenly cares about the      clones,       Some         how they were kind of       right,
     Also they totally invade his home, and do a lot of pretty problematic things that are not portrayed as troubling
         [or disturbing         abuse of authority,]
          [(more so             than the normal             authority assume)]
                 (Kinda)
                Seriously
                 Skywalker assumes the very worst of this random person      and will not let it go, gosh darn terrorizes another     per-son 
       (Skipping way to the accusations and false negatives      with no explan          ation)
   -and it only gets the serious          music,
       Not that this is       clearly        screwed up         music
     (And     portrayal)
   [Also oh yeah the Jedi terrorize a woman, then continues when she runs away from Anakin - Worst Law Enforcers Ever-                                 [Who only takes the    High ground when it’s ordering Ahsoka what          advantage point to attack her at:]
  Who was trying to pin the blame on her from the second they heard          LaRusso          And       uses very circumstantial evidence;
    “How’d you know he was dead,”
    [Literally told her five seconds ago that        nano bots were involved and that her husband was       MIA,]
       [Runn-ing away means          you’re hiding something]
         -Or don’t like Professor-Assumes-The-Worst-Ther-               e-
           [Like thank God they were right
           But still the heck was that not              portrayed a lot more terrifying?
           And is dismissed as well clearly nothing more suspicious is going on despite there clearly being a loose end- about this              “goes higher than you think,”                   That’s just completely ignored
            [Like with the Zy-               gar-ian                 s.]
            Being a good case for why              assumed authority,               is terrifying, and excus          -ing it  -             not a good idea,
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Clone Wars     The Lawless
         (Gosh darnit-)
           [(I’ve talked about the                 particular                 ly bad faith of citing a                 dead coworker]
           Oh great                 and it has child soldiers                   (abominations)
                (I’m just tox-ing                      it and                     skipping,                        )
         TOX
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Clone Wars  Shades of Reason
      { Well.       (That got worse,)
          ?
         [Well they apparently over took a kingdom in under 22 minutes                               With the riot-ers of Puppet.                                                            ton-ia ]
                                             (Every concern I had about the pacing                                                   comes back to bite this                                                           episode,                                                       I’m not happy                                                             about it)
     It wasn’t set up properly, it wasn’t built up properly, it wasn’t executed well and the emotions were nonexistent,
                         [It was all the reason I hate the Mandalore                                                                                                 arc,                              [
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Clone wars    Eminence
      Okay. .    
      Hey emotion            ?
       ?        ?          Vsla
   (What is a        Vizsla?)
    Enabler          Vs           Aggressive          Non-         Compliant            Un-accou               n-t             able-               -             Enabler-
        Souls
      [Ok I’m trying to keep track       here;
      (Because I do try to follow the stories              in case they become           some thing              even when they are in the             -0              cate             -gory-
        - Yoda’s generation
       -Qui- Gon’s     generation             Dooku’s 
       -Obi-wan
      -Anakin’s generation
      -  Ahsoka
       [I am not counting the feckin young-lings”]
         Okay dude seems around Obi-Wan but below                   Both him and Saltine
         - Higher than Anakin though            So,
      -Yoda’s generation
      -Qui- Gon’s     generation            Dooku’s
      -Obi-wan
          - This dude                    (Pre Visla)
     -Anakin’s generation
     -  Ahsoka
     Now Maul;
        He seemed younger than Obi-Wan           but older than Anakin
     So;
      -Yoda’s generation
     -Qui- Gon’s     generation           Dooku’s
     -Obi-wan
         - This dude                  (Pre Visla)
          -Maul
    -Anakin’s generation
    -  Ahsoka
   So just for the record, Ahsoka’s generation        which is now an adult over 22,          Is dealing with      Anakin‘s generation           ....
       [Ok going to guesstimate regarding behavior,]
     Is directly Obi-Wan‘s
         [But they were two generations              under Obi-Wan
           Pre-Visla; acting as some kind a                Brother generation
                - Maul; Youngest                                    Brother   
               -Savage; ?
     So,         [  -Yoda’s generation ]         [   -Qui- Gon’s     generation          Dooku’s ]
    [    -  Obi-wan                               - This dude                        } (Enablers)                  (Pre Visla)                           -Maul  
             -Anakin’s generation ]                    -  Ahsoka (Present)
               (Ok you know what       I’m breaking out the colored markers                   for this shit)
        -Yoda’s generation                    [Enabler]           (Progenitor                      to                Qui-Gon’s                        /                       Dooku)
                 |             -Qui- Gon’s    generation            Dooku’s                        (Progenitor                    To               Obi-wan)                     |
      -  Obi-wan                              |         - This dude  (Pre Visla)                         |             (Younger)                          |           [Brother gen]                         |                 To                     |            Obi- wan
               |           -Maul                       |             (You                     |                nger                     |                Gen)
               |        [As in born before not that they are the same species                    |           though if                  |        someone fecks up the galaxy-  everyone has to deal with it]
               |           - Savage                    |               [You                    |                nger                        |                  Gen]
      -Anakin’s generation 
     Ahsoka (How)
     note I am ignoring that bit about Plagueis            Because no
       And going on the direct            apprentice line-
         [which note          I am aware                may ignore           several possi-                 bilities-
              Including Qui-gon and Obi-wan’s                      Gen poss                        -ib                          ly,                         are                           bro.                              Because of                    convenience,
                       [Which is why I am ignoring the Plaguies           thing-
       Because if serious is that old it’s really implying that someone that is old enough to be Anakin’s Great great grandfather, did that,          The nonsense applied in the whole midclorians to create          life thing          (Consent??)                 And my general disregard for           anything that illuminates the opportunity of choice or             feckin’ realism;
       Now if you’ll look at the chart;
         [I NOW UNDERSTAND WHY THEY HAVE A             NO CHILDREN POLICY-  no                attach-ments-]
              Note that means there have been (at least)                   four [distinct] generations in play
              *are
               [ ANd NONE of these fuckers die of natural causes                       [Aka old age]
                Unless you count getting run through by a light sword!
                 [HoW]
                 [”oh yeah the galaxy’s un-balanced,”
                   Cause you have so many fecking kids-]
                  Apologies just had to get that out of my system                         [After making the damn chart]
                  We struggle                        at three,
      Like if I have to bring out the colored markers         I think that’s too many
           I mean you can try      but it’s going to be a hell of a time        [For the writers]             justifying         how the core-
     Point being           it’s a mess-
    [ And I’m doing this just to figure out a conversation           -The generational beef       - The morality           - because yeah while they’re both           enablers, The tox            instigator, clearly has lower ground to their          victim,
       Who was tox           first,
        Who has the advantage
         [One of the things that make a Narc conflicts,            a bit          of risk,               The only thing I can with our Narcs so poorly       established,         Including           their          excessives             And weak              nesses]
          And whether I should boo or               cheer,
             Or some thing as a good line or.             poor
             [because I honestly think the line they’re doing here can work and maybe I didn’t need the chart but it makes it a bit easier and gives an understanding of how I’m comparing,
             Because. .]
             “ if they are weak                  why do you wait,”
              Because from a victim or younger generation that’s a pretty                    potent/poignant line              
From an abuser        its tone deaf     and needs more        malician                  -              Personally I think they did a good job with        Pre-viz         -here
        He’s the right kind of tone of someone stuck in their glory days trying to get the      younger generation to enable him a bit more regardless of the cost,]
   [Power-ful allies
     Haha,
     What allies           [That didn’t-           Betray              Her,]
            -
       [Kenobi]
       [HaHa]
       [i’m sorry but regardless when the writers, pull it out of the        randomness hat,  he’s a punk ass bitch
                          [Excuse me                     for overuse of that term                                  I strictly mean it in the                             derogatory non-                                 identification                                                 Way                                 Meaning,                     Un accountable in terms of fighting and self-defense of his pro              -fessed expertise]
                     [and occasionally in self-determination against peer pressure and threats far above or below his skill level]
                     Specifically, the Jedi Council
[continu          ing        on,”        ]
                        [Ventress]
             Exile
  [you’ve been allegedly exiled      so many times it’s a bingo card,       ]
   (Also     instead of locking them up]
     (Like I might’ve missed a few points         due to tox           But,             She didn’t just send them back to exhile where they started fecking with the shit
    Did she?
    I got as far as the juice thing then
    Fast-pasted through the Academy
            (No skim)
     So sorry       if anything was missed
       (But tox)
         ?
        [that was a suddenly              softer tone,]
         But              fair,
          A-ll
          Count                 Dooku-
              Dude,                    he just didn’t [rabidly] support your small little fan club              that couldn’t do much
       And [last I checked],                  Just told             you not to do                    a thing,
            Like yeah      might’ve been      relatively        poor advice but what were you          expecting-
       -
     [Tone’s           a bit weird]
      But she       has a point,
      Despite the          uneven-                ?
   [that’s a strangely powerful way to keep him           intact]
         Though              not-               -
       To vote,
    Also,
     Who,
    Why?
      ?   [In all truth, while the expressions were         a bit off,  (I assume benefit of the doubt - illustrators       version-).         That that could’ve been a relatively poignant scene,          a (we totally      got him             To            Enable                  Our                War-              between              Two            Enablers.]
          How is      Savage taking less time than        Maul?
      [is it cause made out of             metal?
       Is it because        Savage is bigger?]
    [Also you know what would’ve been             interesting?]
       [Note, interesting              not better; it’s        perfectly serviceable                  as is;
       [Completely aesthetic]
      If Maul had been “threatened” into the            death watch,
         With Savage              as the chip,
      And feigned
            [Possibly having to be t-alked back into it                                                                      - cause                 I mean he                      died]
              Just interesting,
                ?
               Oh yeah that has been pretty fucked up for him considering the last time he was on anything resembling an operating table,
                [also I kind of like the idea of Maul as                     (for now) a nicer Sith Lord than                    his master,             )
        ?          ?            [Despisi ng                    the                  enabler,                     But other than my       assum.                  What is actually their in-              tention?
            Because they don’t seem to really have a plan                   other than               destroy things,
             And even that is inconsistent
             Too late. .
              (I understand murder. .
               But that wasn’t really set up)
    )
             ?
              Oh yeah approaching the clearly       ag-gressive             per-            sion              -              With an entourage               -                In the hospital              -                 With his             injured brother/                 mor-alty                      pet)
                 Good                       job                      smart                        guy          this would in no way put him on                          edge,
                      E-r                      [Not                          sure                         about                        that,                               ]                              ?                            -                            [that was kind of                     funny]                     ,
                “Name                  -s,”
                 [They going to make something         up ?]
                “Brothers”                            - that was a very                           specific                               word                            choice,
                      Duc-hess
                        (Oh -yeah             he brought that up in the conversation-
                        “Army,”
                        [Please                          no more                            pirates,]
                      (Also yeah                          trying to force peoples opinions to change  (for                       (Corr    that always works out                               upt)                        well,)
                          ?
                      (Are we going to get     dr     -oids)
                    “Black sun,”
                      Aight-                           Gang,
      “But there a crime syndicate,”                  Whin-                  ed the guy,                     Leading a (death)                       cult,  
                    (Like I’m pretty sure they have done worse in this originated as some kind of crime syndicate/                        Espionage within                      the government-                           -]                     ?
        Dude            they’re cannon           get it together,                    -                  Oh so just             black dealing]
                   ?
                    -                                         ?
                  [Is                       prisoner                           ]                      
                     ?                   Attack,
                      -                           Or                        Assemble/                         En-tourage                              -                                ?                               - -                         -?                             [Ok so just a show of                                 strength,]                                      -                                         ?                                      -                                “ what a                        stupid crime syndicate,’                                      .                               Like;                                 “I want to talk to your boss                       about possibly becoming business partner(s)                         lucrative opportunity for both of us,                                    doing business                                        but sketchy,”
                                   [Willing to participate in your     black market              op]
                                “ he’s gonna                                      kill you,”
         ? ??
                                      [Like you do       realize that’s like going to a        - bank, [for a loan] and the            door              guy                   Threate-ning you             with                 death                 -                      Like how do you stay in           business?
      [Like, don’t care     much for either practice,
     Just don’t see why they don’t go to the non-threateny guy      over there-
      ?
    [Like I’m sorry but that was just a laughable way of         establishing         t         hrea            -t            -           Bad-assery             -           And I think [it got let off-      way         too light-        -”          -             ?           -          Okay              -         seriously-         [’ The One-      species              evil,’ is really starting to grind my gears       One whole generation of a species decided to go into purely only      crime syndicate,
   Al-one-
     :            The background
      Kind             -a             Hot-             -            Now             -     -                -      This is some nice        sc         ene          r         y-         -             I like the       Gold-
       -            The          the outfits-
       What?              -           [
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                       [How does this-]
                    [excuse me                        while I go into                          depth on this]
   This guy works, crime syndicate  
   AKa organized      illegal dealings,  
    Behind       the government(s)     back-
    There are multiple ways you can do this            (clothing wise)            1. Bure-aucrat;
         Aka the dude’s in the Italian suits,
          Which not only denotes they are dealings of               off brand goods                    (Typically                 not in the country                   of origin]
                  [Place]
                But also                   as their                     role;                    As a bureau               cratic brush                   over-
              Typical-                ly                   Find                     - ing                       this guy                    cover-ing                        up,
         2. Ragg                   -ed
               Dude in                 brown                over               -coat                  Torn-                     -                     His whole thing is looking like an unimpressive citizen allowing him to move with ease-
              With the disadvantage of being                   underestimated-
               Possibly                   works-                   -cargo-                          -                          (That’s also just basic civilian that is generally associated with extremely chaotic and unpredictable allowing you to go more                ways story wise)
                     Point being,                       some function,
                     Mean,
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     This dude is gold and gaudy and speaks more of a        barbarian then a black-      dealer
       Crime         Syn-          dicate,
         [and it’s not even gold as in the “I’m better than all you smugglers/crime lords           come at me bro!”
        It simply does not have the       slickness for that,
      No the      scheme,
   [and fine        if you want to do alien fashion you do        alien fashion    but you how to establish that,        (And it’s still really comes back to that        pre-established logic         ,).          Excluding the horn       which I’m assuming       is part of his head,
     Again this is speaking more      War lord than       crime lord,        He really       DOES give off that         Aura,”              -          [Ok yeah this is really the most        out of tune scene,        Giving        me a headache from just the         plain inconsistency,”           -           ?            -       Yeah...  
      no idea what just happened              ...        Pre               Viz-la;                Was staring,                Then Savage was             laughing,  
           Just feckin              holding the             guy-
           And now            there was someone on the floor.                 . .                  [??]                 - -                 Whelp, guess the other        g-uards just stood around and did nothing-                   -                    “Black sun,”                    -                    Despite there being no black in your outfits and 
               we haven’t even seen                  an      in-    signia,
           And I’m starting to think       n-e-ither in their operation
       Seeing as they’      re,          guardy obvious,
     [ pretty          damn          blatant,             Too
       Aigh         h-t-         -          [Again that’s behavior more befitting of a      [War        ]      lord,         -           ?           -           Oh, yeah 
    that bodyguard was just straight up chilling
    No ser-         ious.             -ly;      
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 Well,       shit
   [Frank       is having a shit        day,             ]
     Like
    (That is.             A.          [Wait       murder’s illegal!,          Exp             ression,    
   [What the hec         -k,
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   Well,         Shit,     
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 No hesitation
     (Bob is           having a shit           ,day
      [He’s           a       greeter,                 ]               .               -              ?
        Really, because we only saw four guys that you killed and that greeting party,
         (That’s still            guerilla warfare             at best;)
         [like seriously unless the               Mandalorian(s) only have like five guards         you’re still going to be        over-powered-                 - -                    <
          Saltine
          ..weak
           So much so that we haven’t even really seen the army-             Just some guys carrying cargo
         And cargo              crat                 e(s?             )
           F-o
        Y-eah,                   One             Vis              -i                on-                 -             C-l
       [H-e’s righ       t   -  dude has no actual       commitment to killing        Sal-        tine,
      This is just some       game,           he’s playing,          While    Maul actually seems interested            in    kicking his abusers               ,               -      Dep-th               -          I mean              -       do either of you?
      [like up to this point       I thought this was some                  Gen beef,                But dude           Talks to         Pre-       Visla-          Like-             -   In that           line,        Like he’s         same Gen,
     Which doe      sn’t match the tone they’ve been         projecting    up to this point,
      Of          Pre-Vizla,           robbed              of        something,
    -
     “Cri-minals,”
   Seriously when did these guys have any qualms about mingling with other petty demeanors?
     For that matter 
   and I don’t usu         -ally sin       compet         ency-
   But this was      right after the        episode where      Darth      Maul    got his ass kicked,
   And continues the major      theme of    inconsistency,
     There is no scale of       escalation-           (Which is fine if you want to do      non-sequential if        you want to do          un-attached          short stories,)
         [Though you should probably have some reference in order to keep the emotional tone con-      sist-      -ent- 
     And approp           -riate,)
    There’s            no        scale         of      power,
      As in I have no idea      who        can beat      who,
    (Not in, ‘they’re equally matched        so it’s up to fate,” tension,
     No,               It’s the writers haven’t established anything
     And whoever wins just wins because        author favoritism,
      Seriously 
       The only two consistent things;
         Obi-Wan constantly gets his ass    kicked,                                                                                                  Unless                                                                                                   the                                                                                                  writers                                                                                                   play                                                                                                 favorites
       And author’s hand is almost always           very clearly shown,
                                                                                               Which                                                                                                     you                                                                                                    don’t                                                                                                       want                                                                                                      me                                                                                                     to see;                                                                                                    As the                                                                                                       audience;
Note; I’m not saying there can’t be    luck; Or that something      existential can’t unbalance       The      circumstance,
    Say one dude is trained in        anti-gravity situations,            One is not,           And the gravity          is flipped off,         Having them flop        around is a          decent          enough     representation,          Setting it       up beforehand       is even better,
    But that’s not       what’s done             here;
    (Not only is there no explanation to the sudden        rise in competency,
     But there’s no          set up)
     And there are          several scenes where it again relies on the concept of        (over) negative assumption,        Believing        the tropes         will carry             it,           Enough to sustain
[Particularly with the Maul      scenes. .]
  Where it’s like they’re saying            “And...
    And what?
   You didn’t       establish       anything,
     There’s       nothing there for you to fall back on
    And,       your menacing moment falls flat
    [When no you have to actually        set that up,]
     You didn’t earn that scene         otherwise,
       [Empty tropes           make for           e-mpty           s-tories-                ]
       Why..?
  [also didn’t he just tell you to       fuck off with      your         plan..       ?
   Well...
  The characters are no longer drywall            the set up and the consistency on the other hand...
          [still damn shaky,]
             Plot wise,
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Clone Wars   Point of No Return
Blue!
  Ai-ght           ?
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Clone Wars  Missing in Action
 Also      Blue         -
Al-ight
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Clone Wars       A Sunny Day
        It’s Fucking BLUE
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                                                 Why?                                                       Tho
Up date         It      was      aight
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Clone Wars       Secret Weapons
  [An actually plot important episode]
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[Kinda]
 Hey are we focus on something besides that weird youngling’s        [thing]
     Oh fuckin’ dammit
       [I honestly think they            ran out of ideas]
        Seriously this is not     empha     sizing anything good
        Seriously,    why are we dealing with these guys?
       They’re not the main group up to this point;               (Obi-Wan Kenobi, Anakin,                                               Ahsoka,                    The Jedi Council,).      They’re not         emphasizing anything important,
    These are         not an accurate representation of children
        [Nevermind             ,child soldiers]
           They are a child abominations                and nothing good comes of that,
         [I’ve     gone over              it before but              if            your            moral                 is                  Un - applicable                and           useless-                 “               So is your.            story-                     -                   As such I am skipping the          feck            over this.                   -       [Because if they can put the effort in to make a good story,  I can’t [ensure]      I, put the effort in to make a reviewer’s thing of it,
   [that and I’m pretty sure that despite this going on soft tox, as par for the course on writer tips [Ex-      cessive]
         They still “owe” me several      good stories
      *No            En-            -
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[Great, are we going to see more of Yoda attempting to endanger un-child like abomination’s life and it being     painted      as a good thing by the      narrative]       
      Yep.
     [A quick          note on         why       I hate this;
        Suffering for               Good                    is Bullshit,
                 No [good] story                   requires suffering
                  Life doesn’t need suffering
  [Implying that inflicting       suffer         ing            on anyone              is      Necessary]
    Implying that causing distress         or pain to anyone          is          Necessary,
      Never mind, to           children]
      [makes you anything than an asshole]
    [Yoda            is         an      asshole]
                  In order for good
                [That is some straight up                 Narc Bullshit]
                   And for entertainment;                        A field that requires artificially stimulating the senses                      without causing physical harm                         [or actual distress]                          That’s a damn insult 
                to normalize
 [Insult       to   humanity]
   [also yeah Yoda was totally about to let a kid  
                       DIE
      Like yeah they say oh no you only trapped inside your head      
      But.    
        If that kid wasn’t an abomination,                        They will be dead  
        ,five times over
            [Tu-               mblr                     Sp                    ac-                     In                        g]                        -
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Clone Wars      The Gathering
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  Child soldiers!
  (Also yeah this is really     contrasting/confusing it with imagery from both better episodes and not so much-
   Grooming!
  [So yeah making the world such a       dangerous place and           grooming them to believe this is the only option!
        [Yay!]
       [Violence]
         -           Oh no
   “Hey you are most        effecti-vely             order             -ed     
    Your groomers’         Ordered you to be the least irritating to our          social standard,
     So we’re awarding them            [The gro           -omers]
         [Not you because all kids want us to eat and sleep [as well as you know a stable environment]                and pfft,
         You’re entertainment!
         [We could reasonably put             our selfish desires aside                  And reasonably               decide                    Whether we have the             temperament,                    restraint and            commitment               [As well              as maturity]               To not only create a society                conducive                   To allowing children to grow up as        their own person                 [instead of entertainment kept under watchful eye and       subjected to our very well]                 Never mind                 If we personally                     could                     Put our sense of         personality behind
        [Acknowledge              ,with great maturity,                 That our time on this planet is                       drawing to a close,
                      And willingly                        Giving up our place                          in the world                          (Including all                          access to entertainment,                              And personality)
                         To ensure                            a new being,
                          Grows up                              knowing that is not alone,
                            But grows up in a stable                                environment,
                              Knowing said                                 past will not change to hurt it
                               Much like the                                   sun,
                                Not being over-                                    involved and                                     burn-ing-
                                   Nor neglectful                                        [And distant] and leaving them in the  dark to stumble                                       for the basics                                       -stability-]
                                 [Moving just enough to know they are not in a cruel                                      uncaring world]
                                   [And so that they will always remember the                                             light                                               ~the warmth~.                                       no matter where they go,
                                     [Nor speak of a lack of resources for                                          they will not have to                                           beg]
                                     [Continuing on;
 I know this is a different        arc:
   TOXIC        (Very lightly as a series has already been          burnt but I will never hesitate to throw it further into the       incinerator-]
    What it constantly implies is      dis-       -turbing,                  With no matter how many times the boomers try to justify it as            “it’s just for kids,”.              -that my generation not only did not want to and did not ask for generational overstep, but did not want this toxic under brand unaccountable garbage either,
            If excessive should make something, it should make it for them       -self,
           If it is toxic to them, it will be toxic to anyone else
            And generational overstep to present this tox will not work in                it’s favor,
             (Nor has it ever been viewed favorably by               non-enabling generations to recall-ed it upon                age,
               Tox is Tox regardless
           [There was no story that has not been made better by not including                  un-child like abominations,]
                Committing more acts of        toxicity does not make it better
                (Two rights,               still whole lot of                    feck-ing wrong)
                 And they were attempted to overstep the boundaries in order to get power and satisfaction from those that can do nothing against it
                  [is noted]
                 And we calmly asked them to take the foot out of the mouth                        (As well as the boot)
                And stay on that side of the accountability border                                With any dedication they have to                accountability or       the faith in basic human decency,
              With the only exception being           validation,             Complete acknowledgment of guilt              to those that they have harmed                               (Millennials)
                 -not apologies
                 -not excuses
              - Complete acknowledgment                    of the harm they have caused                       of the validity of their                         victims’ emotions                         And the full realistic                          consequences of what they have done
                 -Being left at the victims own choice                     and not being forced to take them                      for none are required to forgive them
                  -As well as simply healing of the harm                        and trauma they caused
                        - Without thanks                              anticipated or                                 expected
                                -                   The Future                          - does not                            want your                             bull                            -shit,
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Clone Wars      Tipping Point
And with this continuation of the arc
    The continuing disturbing moral; Yes absolutely enable these positively over involved narcs they are totally different than the normal abusive Narcs, totally continue to be complicit       bend a knee,        capacitate,          make             room           for,           Despite how much accom-odating harms, inconveniences everyone
        And how much they do not seem to give any con-sideration to the airport and harm they themselves have done or any even the minute even thought of helping,
    Which they could’ve done      several bits before,
    Especially if the damage is       largely thanks to it in to their enabling        And direct             Influence
      With them only moving when they see a “Worser,” enabler,         a designated instigator, be held to any modicum of            res               ponsibility,
   Totally not a performative attempt to       avoid accountability,
     Gas-light those who did the work,
       And         (Dodge) the consequences      from the toxic environment from the created
       Nope just keep making excuses after them after it’s gone a long past the point of reasonability
        And has caused on irrefutable harm to you and everyone around you and possibly your environment
        Keep       ignoring the emotions
      And insis-      ting that this guy is going to magically fix the problem
      (Despite his time being long up ahead he decided to do        that-)
     Especially if every circumstance and consequence you’re feeling and that is harming you is a directly due to the responsibility of your refusal to       hold this person accountable and get rid of the misery and suffering in your life,
    (Absolutely do not do this          This is said with extreme Sardonism                  (And a comprehensive of understanding of enablers           and abusers..)       
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