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hayatheauthor · 3 days
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Writing Rage: How To Make Your Characters Seem Angry
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Anger is a powerful emotion that can add depth and intensity to your character's personality. If you're facing issues realistically expressing your characters' rage, here are some quick tips to help you get the ball rolling. Whether your character is seething with quiet rage or exploding in a fit of fury, these tips will help you convey their emotions vividly to your readers.
Facial Expressions
Furrowed Brows: Describe the deep lines between their eyebrows, signaling frustration or intensity.
Tightened Jaw: Mention their clenched jaw, indicating suppressed anger or tension.
Narrowed Eyes: Highlight how their eyes narrow, showing suspicion, irritation, or anger.
Raised Upper Lip: Note the slight curl of the lip, suggesting disdain or contempt.
Flared Nostrils: Describe how their nostrils flare, indicating heightened emotions like anger or aggression.
Body Language and Gestures
Crossed Arms: Show their defensive stance, portraying resistance or defiance.
Pointing Finger: Describe them pointing accusatively, conveying aggression or assertion.
Fist Clenching: Mention their clenched fists, symbolizing anger or readiness for confrontation.
Hand Gestures: Detail specific hand movements like chopping motions, indicating frustration or emphasis.
Aggressive Posturing: Describe them leaning forward, invading personal space to intimidate or assert dominance.
Posture
Tense Shoulders: Highlight their raised or tense shoulders, indicating stress or readiness for conflict.
Upright Stance: Describe their rigid posture, showing control or a desire to appear strong.
Stiff Movements: Mention their jerky or abrupt movements, reflecting agitation or impatience.
Eye Contact
Intense Stares: Describe their intense or prolonged gaze, signaling confrontation or challenge.
Avoiding Eye Contact: Note how they avoid eye contact, suggesting discomfort or a desire to disengage.
Glaring: Mention how they glare at others, conveying hostility or disapproval.
Dialogue
Raised or strained tone with variations in pitch reflects heightened emotions.
Short, clipped sentences or abrupt pauses convey controlled anger.
Use of profanity or harsh language intensifies verbal expressions of anger.
Volume increase, from whispers to shouts, mirrors escalating anger levels.
Monotonous or sarcastic tone adds layers to angry dialogue.
Interruptions or talking over others signify impatience and frustration.
Aggressive verbal cues like "I can't believe..." or "How dare you..." express anger explicitly.
Reactions
Physical Reactions: Detail physical responses like increased heart rate, sweating, or trembling, showing emotional arousal.
Defensive Maneuvers: Describe how they react defensively if someone tries to touch or talk to them, such as stepping back or raising a hand to ward off contact.
Object Interaction
Aggressive Handling: Show them slamming objects, throwing things, or gripping items tightly, reflecting anger or aggression.
Use of Props: Mention how they use objects to emphasize their emotions, like slamming a door or clenching a pen.
Descriptive Words:
Verbs:
Roared with fury, expressing unbridled anger.
Snapped in frustration, indicating sudden irritation.
Shouted angrily, releasing pent-up emotions.
Glared fiercely, showing intense displeasure.
Slammed objects in rage, symbolizing anger's physical manifestation.
Grunted in annoyance, displaying impatience.
Raged vehemently, portraying uncontrolled anger.
Adjectives:
Furious and incensed, conveying intense anger.
Seething with rage, bubbling beneath the surface.
Livid and fuming, exhibiting visible anger.
Agitated and irritated, showing growing impatience.
Enraged and wrathful, expressing extreme anger.
Vexed and irate, indicating annoyance.
Infuriated and incandescent, highlighting explosive anger.
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vavandeveresfan · 2 days
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novlr · 2 days
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how do i write an established married couple that are out of their honeymoon phase and now theyre just cute and comfy w/ eachother??
Established relationships, in particular, require careful consideration and development to make them feel authentic and relatable to your readers. An established relationship is one that has a history of shared experiences and a level of comfort and familiarity between the characters and can take many forms, such as long-term friendships, romantic partnerships, or even familial bonds. Writing established relationships requires a deep understanding of the characters’ backstories, the dynamics of their relationship, and how their connection influences their individual arcs.
Understand the dynamics of established relationships
Established relationships have a history and shared experiences that shape their current state.
Power dynamics, roles, and expectations within the relationship have been formed over time.
Established relationships involve a level of comfort, familiarity, and trust between the characters.
Conflicts and challenges in established relationships may be more complex and deeply rooted.
Characters in established relationships have a deeper understanding of each other’s strengths, weaknesses, and quirks.
Established relationships involve a sense of commitment, loyalty, or even obligation.
Develop their backstory
How and when did the characters first meet, and what were their initial impressions?
What significant events or experiences have the characters shared that have shaped their relationship?
How has the relationship evolved over time, and what challenges or conflicts have they faced together?
What are some of the defining moments or turning points in their relationship?
How has the way the characters have grown and changed as individuals affected their relationship?
What are some of the inside jokes, shared references, or traditions that are unique to their relationship?
Show the depth of their connection
Use dialogue to reveal the characters’ familiarity, comfort, and understanding of each other.
Show the characters engaging in shared activities or rituals that demonstrate their bond.
Describe the characters’ nonverbal communication, like knowing glances or subtle gestures.
Reveal the characters’ ability to anticipate each other’s needs, thoughts, or reactions.
Show the characters supporting, comforting, or challenging each other in meaningful ways.
Demonstrate the characters’ willingness to make sacrifices or compromises for the sake of their relationship.
Explore conflicts and challenges
Identify the underlying tensions, differences, or unresolved issues in the relationship.
Show how the characters navigate and cope with these challenges, both individually and as a pair.
Explore how external factors, such as family, work, or personal goals, can strain the relationship.
Demonstrate how the characters’ individual flaws or weaknesses can affect the relationship.
Show the characters working through conflicts, compromising, or finding solutions together.
Illustrate how the challenges and conflicts ultimately strengthen or change the relationship.
Develop character arcs
Show how the relationship influences each character’s personal growth, decisions, and actions.
Explore how the characters’ individual journeys affect the dynamics of the relationship.
Show how the characters learn from each other and inspire growth or change.
Show how the relationship evolves because of the characters’ individual development.
Illustrate how the characters’ shared experiences and challenges shape their shared future.
Reveal how the relationship ultimately supports or hinders the characters’ individual goals and desires.
Craft authentic dialogue and interactions
Use inside jokes, nicknames, or references that are specific to the relationship.
Show the characters finishing each other’s sentences or thoughts, demonstrating their deep understanding of the other.
Use subtext and implication in dialogue to reveal the characters’ unspoken feelings or concerns.
Demonstrate the characters’ ability to communicate effectively, even during conflicts or disagreements.
Show the characters engaging in playful banter or teasing that reflect their comfort with each other.
Illustrate the characters’ ability to have meaningful, vulnerable conversations that deepen their connection.
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words-on-pa-per · 2 days
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“People always say that they’d burn the world for the people they love. Sweetheart, I would fix it for you.”
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kingofthering · 3 days
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thinking about Valentino being a cat lover and Marc being so cat-coded and the possibilities of those AUs were people can turn into animals when they’re stressed/anxious/injured/tired
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For the love of God, STOP MAKING SENSE!
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Nothing has to make a lick of sense!
Go fucking nuts, write all kinds of bullshit! Have fun! It doesn't matter!
If it's awful (which it isn't, I swear), you can delete it if you find something good edit it! Beauty is in the eye of the beholder, or whatever, I don't know, I'm so tired.
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authorisedgardian · 1 month
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I probably put way too much thought into it but I do enjoy making a more in depth story rather than winging it. I like to actually think about the worldbuilding, make sure things actually connect and make sense. I am a big history nerd and I feel like it's the closest I can get to writing my own history.
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things to ask yourself when designing a female character:
how much blood is she covered in
are her eyes filled with madness
can she rip things to shreds with her fingernails
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writing-with-sophia · 8 months
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Poison list
While it's important to approach writing with creativity and imagination, it's crucial to prioritize responsible and ethical storytelling. That being said, if you're looking for information on poisons for the purpose of writing fiction, it's essential to handle the subject matter with care and accuracy. Here is a list of some common poisons that you can use in your stories:
Hemlock: Hemlock is a highly poisonous plant that has been used as a poison in various works of literature. It can cause paralysis and respiratory failure.
Arsenic: Arsenic is a toxic element that has been historically used as a poison. It can be lethal in high doses and can cause symptoms such as vomiting, abdominal pain, and organ failure.
Cyanide: Cyanide is a fast-acting poison that affects the body's ability to use oxygen. It can cause rapid loss of consciousness and cardiac arrest.
Nightshade: Nightshade plants, such as Belladonna or Deadly Nightshade, contain toxic compounds that can cause hallucinations, respiratory distress, blurred vision, dizziness, an increased heart rate, and even death when ingested.
Ricin: Ricin is a potent poison derived from the castor bean plant. It can cause organ failure and has been used as a plot device in various fictional works.
Strychnine: Strychnine is a highly toxic alkaloid that affects the nervous system, leading to muscle spasms, convulsions, and respiratory failure.
Snake Venom: Various snake venoms can be used in fiction as deadly poisons. Different snake species have different types of venom, each with its own effects on the body.
Digitalis: Digitalis, derived from the foxglove plant, contains cardiac glycosides. It has been historically used to treat heart conditions, but in high doses, it can be toxic. Overdosing on digitalis can cause irregular heart rhythms, nausea, vomiting, and visual disturbances.
Lead: Lead poisoning, often resulting from the ingestion or inhalation of lead-based substances, has been a concern throughout history. Lead is a heavy metal that can affect the nervous system, leading to symptoms such as abdominal pain, cognitive impairment, anemia, and developmental issues, particularly in children.
Mercury: Mercury is a toxic heavy metal that has been used in various forms throughout history. Ingesting or inhaling mercury vapors can lead to mercury poisoning, causing symptoms like neurological impairment, kidney damage, respiratory issues, and gastrointestinal problems.
Aconite: Also known as Wolfsbane or Monkshood, aconite is a highly toxic plant. Its roots and leaves contain aconitine alkaloids, which can affect the heart and nervous system. Ingesting aconite can lead to symptoms like numbness, tingling, paralysis, cardiac arrhythmias, and respiratory failure.
Thallium: Thallium is a toxic heavy metal that can cause severe poisoning. It has been used as a poison due to its tastelessness and ability to mimic other substances. Thallium poisoning can lead to symptoms like hair loss, neurological issues, gastrointestinal disturbances, and damage to the kidneys and liver.
When incorporating poisons into your writing, it is essential to research and accurately portray the effects and symptoms associated with them. Additionally, be mindful of the potential impact your writing may have on readers and the importance of providing appropriate context and warnings if necessary.
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hayatheauthor · 3 days
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Writing Different Emotions: A Blog Series
I decided to create a series of easily readable blogs that showcase how to portray different conventional and unconventional emotions in your writing. I aim to cover everything from body language to voice, adjectives & verbs you can use, etc. in these blogs.
Interested? Click on the read more to explore this blog series.
Writing Rage: How To Make Your Characters Seem Angry
Future Emotions: writing tears, writing jealousy, writing disgust, writing joy, writing numbness, writing sadness.
Want to add any emotions to the list? Comment it below and I'll be sure to create a blog accordingly!
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so-many-ocs · 1 month
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editing your own writing is like woah you really like commas........ maybe ease up on those commas there, pal........ maybe Fewer commas would be nice
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novlr · 3 days
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I've recently moved from the city to the country with my family and want to write a memoirs based on my experiences with nature. Do you have any tips on nature writing? I don't want to write fiction, but i'm not sure how to make non-fiction interesting.
We've actually got a great series of resources in the Reading Room on all types of non-fiction writing, created for us by a commissioning editor from Penguin Random House! Here's the one specifically on nature writing:
The entire series is well worth reading, and she also created a completely free non-fiction book proposal course for us too, which will teach you what a book proposal needs to include for you to best pitch to publishers.
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16woodsequ · 8 months
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words-on-pa-per · 2 days
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“Aren’t you tired of anarchy?”
“Aren’t you tired of working your ass off for those ungrateful idiots?”
“I would join you if I could.”
“What’s stopping you?”
“They wouldn’t allow their precious hero to leave alive.”
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jaynovz · 7 months
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if yall ever want like serious advice from me about how to solve burnout as a creative it's like...
literally ignore it. stop pushing. go do something else, enjoy your life, fill it with other things, do what brings you joy in the moment if you can.
go to the gym, take a walk to touch grass and look at dogs and smell flowers, cook dinner, watch tv with your friends, talk about your feelings as needed with ppl you trust, take a drive and blast your music, do the chores you need to do, the job hunting slog you need to do, read books that aren't for research, stop cordoning off your brain for The Craft or The Draft or whatever the fuck
forget about the project, stop thinking about it for as long as it takes to be excited again.
fuckin rest, basically
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Fanfuckingtastic writing advice!!
Beating yourself up about your writing DOES NOT HELP YOU WRITE! Cut that shit out, be nicer to yourself, take breaks, and remember it's a marathon not a sprint and also nobody likes running ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
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