#the note i just added to my outline doc is uuuuuhhh very funny

[jacqcrisis]

me: so now the lead up to the ending isn’t dramatic enough. it just kind of happens, albeit satisfactorily, but this broader point of contention here will just fall flat unless...

*has 1 idea*

me: oh there it is.

#jacq writes #i gotta remember this #should add it to the outline doc #im so HAPPY with this new idea #it makes good good sense considering small town #and a certain facet about charon #some times those synapses just do the thing in the correct way #gotta make sure THAT gets resolved #and THAT #this resolves TWO THINGS #amazing #but now chapter 21/22 (if i split it) is gunna take 70 years to write cause I have to go with the *gesture vaguely* scene #the note i just added to my outline doc is uuuuuhhh very funny