And what, precisely, were you doing in the garden?
Smashing the padlock and trespassing
Eating the apple and getting into trouble
Looking for answers from the gardener
It is like three different people talking at the same time
And every word means three different things
He was answering too many questions too quickly
And they were stacking up in my head like loaves of bread in a factory
Like being corrected by three mathematicians and still not seeing my mistake
Found poem source:
Haddon, Mark. The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-Time, Vintage Books, New York, 2003. pp: 7-8, 31-33, 59-63, 85-6, 134
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National Poetry Month 13/30
Apology:
Dear Friend,
I considered writing you a broken sonnet
but I do not feel like rhyming.
I apologize for my timing.
Ten years ago, I left you behind
out of sight, out of mind
and now I find
friendship
is not what I'm seeking
I only care now about talking shop
but between two struggling writers
what's the difference,
really?
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it’s getting dark. i don’t know if you’ve noticed. i noticed—i always do, i feel the loss of light like it’s a loss of air, it’s like the world ends when the sun goes down. i don’t know if it’s the same for you. i hope not.
every night another story closes out. it’s unhealthy to let yourself die every night, i think, just to be born again in the morning, but i have to let things go. i have to let this fade to black.
i have (had) many friends who loved winter, loved the dark: and when i said my favorite season was summer, they couldn’t understand. that’s alright. i don’t understand a love of the last cold vestiges of the year. i’m clinging to long days like a lifeline (and i think the short days were a relief, for them. a refuge.)
it’s getting dark, dear. i know you’d like to continue living, i know it’s the time for you to come alive—but i have to lay my head down on a pillow, now, and lay a weary soul to rest. it’ll be someone different in the morning, maybe. but it’ll be in the morning. always in the morning.
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Drained (Poem #24, NaPoWriMo 2024)
By Daniel Paiz
Sometimes you just need to chill out, relax, take a break, because you are drained. Too often these days there’s an obsession with being busy, with being “productive”. If you’re tired, you aren’t always going to create something that turns out how you wanted to. This NaPoWriMo entry is going to dig into this just a little bit.
Drained
Palest white you’ve ever seen to the point…
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Hello interwebs :3 It’s day 3, but prompt #2 because school is a thing and I am still behind. And exhausted. I’ll get Day 3 up tonight though! This prompt had a few parts to it, but I am SO OBSESSED with the final poem. Let’s just get to the poetry!
Prompt: Surrealist Question poem inspired by Romanian-born poet, Paul Celan. Pick 5-10 words from the following list and write a question for each word. Make a one line answer for each question. Logic not required, these are surrealist answers after all. Place all answers on a new page and see if you can create a poem with just the answers.
Chosen words: thunder, ghost, fog, salt, miracle, song, river
I Was a Magic Tree House Kid
Rolling anger from the Pantheon’s court room
The last whisps of energy from a stubborn soul
A smoky, misty, wet mystery
The key ingredient to not passing out
A Disney Princess happy ending full of hope
A Southern comfort staple including the ingredients:
Sugar
Spice
Rythym
Symphonic peace
A rushing flow of water leading you back home
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People think computers are different from people
But I was frightened in two different ways
And they were in inverse proportion to one another
So that the total fear remained a constant
A new force altogether like electricity
A fixed pair of crossed spanners
I should pull my stupid self together
Found poem source:
Haddon, Mark. The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-Time, Vintage Books, New York, 2003. pp: 99, 107, 115, 136
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30 Prompts for NaPoWriMo
Taken from my article on having a successful NaPoWriMo :)
Write about an object that has a lot of nostalgic value for you. As a bonus challenge, try to write about this object without directly stating what it is in your poem.
Write a poem about your hometown: how you feel about it, the connection you have to it, how it has shaped you (for better or worse).
Collect scraps of “junk writing”—spam mail, credit card bills, newspaper clippings, billboard text, etc. Stitch those texts together into a poem.
Write a poem about a piece of clothing that reflects something important or essential about who you are as a person.
Find something dark and hidden inside your brain, your body, your heart. Shine a light on it. What do you see?
Think of a memory where the details aren’t clear. Fill in the details in a poem.
It’s spring! Write about coming out of a long hibernation—either literal or metaphorical.
Flash of lightning. Crack of the baseball bat. Stoplight turns green. Write about a time when a seemingly mundane event created a stroke of inspiration.
You look into the lens of something—a camera, a telescope, a pair of binoculars, etc.—and something strange peers back at you. What do you see?
Write about an event that you might interpret as a sign from a higher power. This higher power could be a god, aliens, the universe, etc.
Write a poem in which two people begin as lovers and end as enemies. OR the other way around.
Write a poem about what keeps you warm. Perhaps it’s a hot cup of tea, the glow of a happy memory, or the light at the end of the tunnel.
Write a poem that involves diametrically opposing views about something simple. For example, two people might bicker over the proper way to brew coffee, or whether a hotdog is a sandwich.
What do you see in the mirror? Write a “self-portrait” poem.
Spend some time listening to other people talk. It can be in a public space, a voice on the radio or TV, or outside listening to your neighbors. (Just don’t get caught!) Use a line from someone else’s conversation as the starting place for a poem.
Write about two opposing yet co-existing realities.
Write about an important realization you had, at a time when you felt particularly alone.
What’s something you’ve seen hundreds, even thousands of times, but has never lost its beauty? Write an ode to this thing’s beauty.
“Apophenia” is the human tendency to see patterns in random information. Write a poem about patterns that seem to be connected, even if they’re completely random.
Write a poem in the form of a letter, addressed to a specific person.
Write a poem from the perspective of a detective. They’re not solving crime, necessarily—you might write about a detective for lost things, for past emotions, for new opportunities, etc.
Explain something to a younger version of yourself. How to survive heartbreak, solve differential equations, drive, avoid bad people, etc.
Write about a mundane task that (secretly) doubles as a magical ritual.
Smells are one of the most powerful triggers for memory. They also make for impactful imagery. Write a poem that begins with a smell. Let the smell waft into memory, then write from there.
Write a poem that uses all of these words: chartreuse, guide, safe, sweat, wall, presentation, manor, perfume.
Close your eyes, flip through a poetry book, and put your finger on a page. Whatever word you’re pointing at, use it as a title for your poem, and write from there.
Write a poem about family traditions: keeping them, breaking them, or anything else you can do with them.
Write a poem that begins at the end of something, then moves backwards.
Write a poem inspired a certain genre of music. Try to write in the style of that genre—for example, pop is rhythmic, rock alternates in staccatos and riffs, etc. (You might be interested in Jazz Poetry for inspiration. Learn about it here.)
“If _______ didn’t exist for a day.” Fill in the blank, and write about the results of something not existing – but only for 24 hours.
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