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just-afreak · 2 years
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stagwhisker · 2 years
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Actually off the top of my head here’s some small stuff I’d keep or change in no paticular order. Most of it is first arc since I recently reread that and its fresh in my mind.
Graystripe stays in Riverclan until PoT. He’d return to Thunderclan when he returns to the Lake Territory due to both of his kits no longer residing in Riverclan. Also just make him a better father in general as well as have his loyalties run around his family. I also wanthim to be a positive force in Briarlight’s life later. I do want to keep Millie behaving the way she does but have it clear that you know that isn’t a good way to react and have her develop past it.
Also the Spottedleaf romance plot simply won’t exist I have had it nope not doing it again. In fact I have a better role in mind for her in TNP anyway so I may have someone else take her place though I don’t think there IS anyone to hmm. I just know I want to change Spottedleaf REALLY badly.
I think I’d still “canonize” Longtail being Robinwing’s son with Frostfur and Brindleface as his older sisters. PERHAPS have Cherrypaw and Chestnutkit come from the same litter as him. Ravenpaw would also still be Robinwing’s son.
Speaking of Brindleface, I know for a fact I don’t want her to be Sandstorm’s mother. I want to try to limit relationships that are incestuous which honestly is a tall order but god Ashfur and Squirrelflight is bad enough as is they don’t need to be related. On that note, Runningwind would be her father instead of Redtail. I don’t know who her mother would be and honestly it doesn’t matter I don’t think she ever appears as a kit in the series.
I’m so torn on Cinderpelt because on one hand I let her become a Warrior because she is completely capable of doing so but then I’d have to pick a new med cat and I can’t think of anybody off the top of my head around the time Yellowfang dies who could take her place. Maybe Cinderpelt takes it temporarily before returning to her Warrior duties but that doesn’t feel correct either idk I know I want to change something about it.
I’d like the Warrior Code to begin being challenged in the first arc starting with A Dangerous Path. I want it to lead to the events of The Broken Code to be a massive world changing culmination of every flaw present in the code as well as the resolution to the years of questioning. I would also change Dawn of the Clans to come out AFTER AVoS so we can see the formation of the code and it’s deconstruction back to back.
I want to make Leopardstar and Blackstar's motivations surrounding Tigerstar more clear to the reader. Everything we hear is ideas from Firestar which normally is fine but the way these characters are forgiven so easily when all we see is compliance from them it's.... strange. I'm not going to make them any more sympathetic/unsympathetic but I want the reader to have a better understanding of these two leaders. Furthermore I want there to be resistance from their own cats and cats from other clans because of their past allegiance to Tigerstar (and Brokenstar for Blackstar).
Piggybacking off the previous point I want the rancid undertones of the way these cats view each other and outsiders to continue through all the arcs. The first arc feels so separated from everythibg else and Tigerstar's reign is treated a s afreak eventeven though he was just taking advantage of the mindset of clan cats that have existed for decades and continues to exist long after his death. There will be cats who pin the blame solely on Tigerstar while others can see Tigerstar was a PART of the problems that continue to exist. Maybe have that cause conflict between these two groups over the years.
I have no idea how to word this but I want Cloudtail's aetheism to challenge the idea that cats NEED beleif in Starclan to have morals like the books imply later in the series. And I want that to be expanded upon by Mothwing who beleives in an existance of Starclan but doesn't beleive they hold power over the lives of cats and could be untrustworthy. Just the idea that faith does not equate to morality or blind faith can be a detriment to those looking to abuse that power.
Making a more religiously complex series overall. I want the Tribe, The Guardians, and The Sisters to be treated with FAR more dignity and respect by the Clans and the Narrative. I want to have the clans reconized as flawed by the narrative and not as the "Correct" way to live in the series.
Uhh I want more buildup to Bloodclan. I want Bloodclan's existance to be known before The Darkest Hour and have there be foreshadowing to the pain train of death that Scourge would turn out to be. First mention would most likey come from Barley.
That's what I have off the top of my head I have more in mind but I have been fighting with this for 2 hours I need a break if yall want me to elaborate further (to the best of my ability) on anything specific then yall can shoot me an ask but for now that's all
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maskedghostmicha · 2 years
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dsmp fandom needs less fics with cwilbur being this weird villanous manipulative terrorist Or sickly sweet brother and more fics with him being a pathetic wet rag of a man. A boyloser if you will..i want a scene in a fic where he goes to tommys room to hug him and tommy calls him afreak and he gets kicked in the face and it concludes to a sibling fight and theyre swearing at each other I want him to try and explode something and accidentally hurt himself and others he cares about in the process and be angsty and sad about it and see how one of his mistakes somehow fully ruin his reputation and how he gets to heal from it with tommy and realise he's more than that I want a fic thats just cwilbur nice. cwilbur pathetic. cwilbur misunderstood but awesome. Yeah.
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mikeysantoss · 11 months
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seventy days clean.
i opened up to nik about you today. about the things you used to say to me when i was growing up, your problems with drug dealing, about your suicide. he held my hand the whole time i was talking, and yeah. i cried.
he didn't ,ake me feel like an idiot tho, just wiped my tears away when i was finished and said he was sorry.
i never thought i’d ever tell anyone besides verity, cause i didnt want anyone's pity.
but if there’s one person i trust with my feelings, it’s nikolai. felt really hard to cry in front of him but im glad i did,. he said he understand s me more now. then he just kissed me and told me he was glad i trusted him with my past. 
it felt really good to have that weight lifted off my shoulders. we made pasta together later that night. i was scared things would change between us, that he'd look at me like i was afreak.
but nah. he treated me the same.
can't believe i lucked out with this dork.
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tgttos · 2 years
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thereare sooo many mutuals i interact w.& id LOVE2 dm more often but i feel like itd be aFreak to just start rolling up in dms daily like Hey whats up hello...............But i do want to
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roughentumble · 2 years
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btw making the sister in ngnl so young, making a point to mention that it makes her too young for Ecchi Content, only to lean into it anyway, is the worst possible decision
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s1x-s1x-s1x · 4 years
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GUESS WHO CHANGED THEIR PICREW AGAIN CUZ THEY’RE A GODDAMN MORON:
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ME
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The tinhats are now that Mia isn't doing red carpets with Darren and she's not attending events with him? They are saying it looks bad on him to be out and about without his pregnant wife going to all these concerts and screenings and even his own performances without her "hanging around". But then when someone mentioned her being at one of those events, just not in any pics, they complain that Mia of course "can't stay away" from free promo. Because going to an event and avoiding cameras is how she "makes people talk about her". My brain hurts trying to make sense of their contradictory complaints.
And people are STILL believing their bullshit ?!!!!!!! They're literally demonizing Mia for doing one thing, then its opposite. Like O.o . Are they INSANE ? No seriously they all need to stop the sshit at onepoint in their life ... Or even better get afreaking lifeinstead of obsessing and living their life to insult someone they don't like ... for litterally living her life in peace
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fruitchouli · 2 years
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obsessed with how taj from swv was on survivor season 18 and they never acknowledged she was in afreaking grammy award nominated group ,they just said she was a “former pop star” LOL 🎶 i get so weak in the knees i can hardly speak i lose all control and something takes over me 🎶
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justloveskins · 7 years
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Who do you most relate to from skins or any other character from a different show or movie?
good question right here. i can relate to effy in some ways, mostly of the time. then i’ve some issues like cassie or even franky (from season 5 only). but about the other shows i watch i can relate to rae from mmfd so much it hurts. also, my funny half make me feel like stiles from tw, because i’m a weirdo who likes to make other people laugh
URL: nope | alright | good | great | amazing | flawless
ICON: nope | alright | good | great | amazing | flawless
THEME: nope | alright | good | great | amazing | flawless
POSTS: nope | alright (waiting for autumn too) | good | great | amazing | flawless
OVERALL: nope | alright | good | great | amazing | flawless
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just-afreak · 2 years
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God what a life indeed
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