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tsukikoayanosuke · 9 days

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After many, many pondering and switching editing program, I can finally, finally, finish this intended video and cross this out of my WIP list. Not much to say but this song is one of my favorite vocaloid song. It just came on the right time when I have imposter syndrome and writer block.

The cover used and English translyrics source are in the video description.

OC used, specifically my Wattpad mutuals:

Astrid Lancaster ( @countessofwisdom )

Charlotte Luchessi ( @akemiozawa )

Andrea Williams ( @91062854-ka )

Jonah Argentum (mine)

Lynette Mitchell ( @sakuramidnight15 )

Rose Fall ( @isabellawaites )

#what do you mean it has been two years since that initial depressed wattpad kids?#i have love and hate relationship with video editing #twisted wonderland oc #twst oc #gacha club #rose fall #andrea williams #astrid lancaster #charlotte luchessi #lynette mitchell #jonah argentum (my oc)#twisted wonderland fanvid #twst fanvid #Youtube

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tsukikoayanosuke · 10 months

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Into the Yuuverse!

Decided to Gacha-fied the Yuu so far, including my main oc and yuusona. From left to right:

Yukiko Sekaihashi - my yuusona

Doesn’t wear jacket because the uniform shirt is already long-sleeved. Wears headphone or always hold her phone because “ew, social”. Purple hair and eyes based on my very first oc back in middle school and it stuck until now.

Yuuya Kuroki - main character of TWST light novel

There’s no visual for Yuuya, so this is very personal interpretation. Brown hair because it was said he has “dark” or “short brown hair”. Fluffy hair is a must. Dark pink eyes because he’s precious. Wears his uniform formally with jacket tucked in.

Yuuken Enma - main character of Heartslabyul manga

Doesn’t wear dorm vest because his old uniform doesn’t have a vest. Using creative liberlies to differentiate her with other manga protagonists. Hair is supposed to be bronze, the color of strength, stability, loyalty, and support. Red eyes because he’s the main character of Heartslabyul manga. Green shoes to match his old school jacket. Casual color and shoes will match Sophie from Howl’s Moving Castle.

Yuuta Mito - main character of Octavinelle manga

Gacha Club doesn’t have an official plus size design so I tried my best. Doesn’t wear formal shirt but still wear jacket over his shirt like in the manga. Using creative liberlies to differentiate her with other manga protagonists. Hair supposed to be Chartreuse, the color of acceptance, distinction, cheerfulness, imagination. Violet eyes because he’s the main character of Octavinelle manga. Dark blue shirt and brown shoes supposed to be a reference to Kiki from Kiki's Delivery Service.

Yuuka Hirasaka - main character of Savanaclaw manga

She wears the complete uniform, jacket tucked out. Using creative liberlies to differentiate her with other manga protagonists. Hair is supposed to be cobalt, the color of solitude, productivity, ingenuity, and enlightenment. Yellow eyes because she’s the main character of Savanaclaw manga. Casual color and shoes will match Nausicaä from Nausicaä of the Valley of the Wind.

Yuu Nagamatsu - personal interpretation of Game!Yuu

There’s no visual for Game!Yuu because of the self-insert nature, so this is very personal interpretation. Cooked shrimp color shrimp; ginger hair with white streak and gray eyes. Complete uniform but doesn’t buttoned up jacket. Has the basic ass Kirito-esque isekai/light novel main character personality. The surname is used as 長松 with 長 (chou, osa, naga.i) meaning "leader, long," 松 (shou, matsu) meaning "pine tree". Prefect of Ramshackle Dorm.

Jonah Argentum - main Yuu OC and main character of my fanfiction/novelization

When given option to wear a sweater, he would pick it. Jacket tied on his hips just in case he needs it for a formal meeting. Right arm has different color because it is prosthetic. Vice-prefect of Ramchackle Dorm.

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tsukikoayanosuke · 2 years

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“Shall we dance under the red moonlight?”

AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH

Looking at this still brings me joy! ROnAzul enchanted dancing, me beloved~

Raffle prize from @yanmaresu ! Please check her arts. Her yandere content is top tier.

Again, thank you so much, mate!

#i felt challenged to write a fanfic #smoothie for the captain!#twisted wonderland fanart #twst fanart #twisted wonderland oc #twst oc #jonah argentum (my oc)#riddle rosehearts #Azul Ashengrotto #serving mixberry #twisted wonderland #disney twisted wonderland #twst

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tsukikoayanosuke · 6 months

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Happy birthday to our dearest captain! Tried my best to make a good birthday art for him while rushing ༎ຶ⁠‿⁠༎ຶ

Here have some of my own rough sketches to a more older Jonah because you did such a good job on making me attached to him! It's not the best, but I just love drawing him sm 🥺❤️

Anyways I wish you gudluck on your writing journey, author Wendy <33

OH MY- IT'S HIM! IT'S HIM! MY SON!

Oh my... These are beautiful! You've done them wonderfully! I love the adult-Jonah interpretation! Oh adult-Jonah with bun will forever lives in my head rent free now 😍

Thank you so much! This is a wonderful surprise. And thank you for sticking around this writing journey for 3+ years of TW:OPT and Captain Jonah Argentum!

#smoothie for the captain!#jonah argentum (my oc)#serving mixberry #the captain is answering!#twisted-wonderland: our precious treasure

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tsukikoayanosuke · 2 years

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Welcome to the Evil Theater

The Evillious Chronicle set is finally done! I honestly happy with how this ended up looking. I might do like a Clockwork Lullaby 7/Seven Crime and Punishment video, but no guarantee.

Also I just wanted basically a summary of the whole series and, holy heck, mothy really just created everything by the seat of his pants. Very convoluted and that’s why I love this series.

#twisted wonderland #evillious chronicles #gacha club #twisted wonderland x evillious chronicle #Azul Ashengrotto #leona kingscholar #malleus draconia #vil schoenheit #idia shroud #jonah argentum (my oc)#jamil viper #riddle rosehearts

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tsukikoayanosuke · 11 months

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Walking around the beach one last time in their new uniform before the little ones go to school...

I realized that I've never made a Gacha design for the rest of my TW:OPT OCs, so here they are.

I guess twisted Disney characters under the cut for design inspiration.

Magdalena Killigrew, twisted from Captain Amelia.

Magda picks a classy academic look rather than a princess.

Because I found out that translating the initial school uniform into Gacha Club is hard, I had to revamp it, making it simple yet classy. Which for me means suspender and berret.

Also, this is following the Diamond Crown Academy 2021 redesign since it seems more casual for the school uniform. (Diamond Crown Academy created by @phoenix-manga )

According to the DCA dress code rule (hopefully, I didn't read it wrong), students are free to style their uniform, but the major color has to be the same as your princess dorm. Because she is in Chateau Bestiale, her major color is yellow, like Belle's dress.

The dark blue is an element from Amelia's uniform. The light blue beret meanwhile is an homage to Frozen's Elsa who is one of the inspirations.

Jacob Orion Columbus, twisted from Jim Hawkins.

Jake refuses to button up his jacket. In both his original and Interstellar Academy uniform he doesn't button up his jacket. So, he doesn't here.

The bits of orange on his belt and his shoes are from his art looks, to make it pop.

I hate that the Yu-Gi-Oh hair is the hardest part to make in Gacha Club. He's so silly.

Jonah Argentum, twisted from Long John Silver.

Jonah decides Jamil can't be the only one wearing a hoodie in the cast. Decided to take a more scruffy/casual look.

His jacket is tied around his waist. So, technically, he's still wearing the school dress code.

He has a similar armband to others in NRC with a black-and-white color, the color of Grim's ribbon (you can't really see it from here).

His right arm is now silver, matching Ortho's color.

Bridgette Eduarda Newton, twisted from B.E.N. (Bio Electronic Navigator)

Bree must have her capellet, yes even when the weather is freaking hot. Along with her noise-canceler headphone.

Also, can I just say I really like Three Wishes Institute uniform? It's just very classy. (Three Wishes Institute is created by @chessdaze )

Underneath it, her crystal is colored blue because she's from Lapinhole.

So yeah. Treasure Planet gang reveal I guess.

#twisted wonderland oc #twst oc #magdalene killigrew (my oc)#jacob orion columbus (my oc)#jonah argentum (my oc)#bridgette eduarda newton (my oc)#twisted wonderland: our precious treasure #gacha club

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tsukikoayanosuke · 1 year

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Nearly forget that my precious boy birthday is the same as Halloween. I’m not good at designing so this is Venti outfit with Zhongli’s color scheme and twin braids for special occasion.

I still have one more project to finish and then I maybe go back to fic writing. Have a special Halloween update or something.

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tsukikoayanosuke · 1 year

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Behind the Fic: TW:OPT - Chapter 157-162

The second part of Proposal of Destiny Arc is here! First and last triple update!

WARNING: This will contain a bit of spoiler for the newest chapters of my fan fiction Twisted-Wonderland: Our Precious Treasure.

Let's start by talking about why I chose to adapt Ghost Marriage. Looking back to the post where I decided to make everything into one year, Ghost Marriage was supposed to be a companion arc with Welcome to the Villains’ World. Timeline wise back in that very early post, Ghost Marriage was the only one so far that we don't have a clear cut when it happened. All we know is that it happened after Heartslabyul Arc just looking at Ace and Riddle's civil interactions. Because of this unclearness, I feel comfortable adapting it this early.

Chapter 157: And All of Her Friends will Work Together

The title for this and the next chapter is taken from the lyrics of The Wedding Song from Corpse Bride

Welcome to the point where I yell at Azul "I know you're simping at Jonah but please don't be redundant".

Look, I love Azul simping on Jonah as much as the next guy, but there will be the point where I'll ask "Is this too much"

I'm actually worried about how I will write Azul in the future. Unlike Riddle, who still has a lot to grow (as seen in the next few chapters), I feel like Azul's main emotional conflict is done. My biggest worry is I'll be accidentally reducing Azul into the love interest who has nothing to do outside of Jonah. I'll try to figure it out in the future but right now, his main mission is to save Jonah.

Speaking of saving the groom, I think by this point everyone knows that we're going to have a major divergence in the second half of this arc. I feel like if Yuu/MC is in trouble, more people will be onboard in saving them, since they're more involved with more characters, unlike Idia.

Honestly, I really like writing the tiny things, like for a second Kalim is the one being level-headed and Jamil understands Azul's position. And the many chaos attempts, obviously.

At this point, Riddle was the only one who hadn't let go of what Azul did in Octavinelle Arc. This will be addressed in a future chapter. But for now, we're stirring up an ancient drama once again. What is this? YouTube commentary channels drama?

The main inspiration for the plan is, as it's said, the short Goddess of Spring, the short that became a practice animation before Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs. Back when Ghost Marriage was very first run in the JP server in 2020, there were guesses on what is it based on (in a similar fashion as Fun and Fancy Free for Happy Beans Day). Some people suggested it might be the Goddess of Spring, which to an extent, was inspired by Hades and Persephone. Or Wikipedia said Proserpina and Pluto.

The three things Azul suggested as the groom's gift is based loosely on some scene from the short.

The "cake of an early spring" is inspired by Proserpina coming out from the Underworld and turning the world from winter to spring. The "crystal valued by the king" is inspired by the diamond Pluto given to Proserpina. The "waltz at the height of the wedding" is inspired by the song and dance Pluto's imps are doing after Proserpina is taken to the Underworld.

At this point, I realized I had an issue with the timeline in this arc. This arc technically only lasted one day in canon, but I think I had a problem with how long the plan would take.

Chapter 158: To Make It the Perfect Day She's Always Dreamed

This episode is in a similar manner to some of my filler arcs which is a collection of short with very vague connections. This time, it was the view of love from different characters' views. For Ruggie and Deuce, this is more familial love, while for Azul and Jamil, this is more romantic love.

How they were partner-ups was based on some of the cards. Ruggie paired up with Malleus is a reference to the Masterchef event. Deuce with Silver is from his Starsending Robes story. The light music club is pretty obvious. And Jamil being a singer is a call for his future NRC-Tribe main singer position.

Okay, to clarify. At the point of writing this, I decided to follow my headcanon of the family of other characters, in this case, Ruggie and Deuce. And those headcanons were made a long time ago, way before the birthday cards were ever launched. In his Birthday Boy card, it was said that his mom died during childbirth while his dad went to buy milk went to work, and never return so he was taken care of by his grandma. In my fic, Ruggie was a child his abusive mother didn't want while his dad died from overworking. Deuce's backstory was more simple to build on: his mother and father were in an arranged marriage but then got divorced from household abuse.

The reason why Ruggie and Deuce were talking about family love is because I just feel like there isn't that much talk about it. Deuce and his love for his mother is one of his greatest strengths, so we need to mention it at least once in the fic. For Ruggie, I mostly just because I feel like it because I like to explore my own headcanon.

More headcanon, Valley of Thorn is an old-timey kingdom. Guillotine still exists there. Malleus, while might understand technology, might also not understand that much of human custom because he's a sheltered prince. Just not that innocent. He's just a bit confused.

Malleus vs cake. The battle of the century.

Oh, the Chantilly cake recipe I based it on here.

Return to the Dwarfs' Mine. This can be a call back to the Prologue or a reference to Camp Vargas.

Now, let's talk about Kalim and Jamil. I ship them. I still do. However, at this point in the fic, I feel like I'm not ready to pair them up again, especially fresh from Kalim Disappearance Arc. Yes, they've forgiven each other however that doesn't mean they're healing just yet. Both of them still has a broken heart, they still need to change.

I think Jamil's POV of this chapter is the most different. I think this is the first thing I wrote for this chapter. So I think that's why it more focuses on Jamil's view of changes rather than love.

But you can count Kalim's changing love as well. Mind you, Kalim is still in love with Jamil. He accepted that Jamil won't return his feeling so this is a one-sided crush. Whether or not Kalim or Jamil will fully mend their bond, Kalim is still in his breakup era. So, until then, I can't pair them up just yet.

A Shrek reference here. Remember, this will be important.

Oh, and Lilia's power to make a space for them to practice, is built in similarly to what Malleus did in the Endless Halloween event. I'm actually gonna use this more, especially in Jonah's rewritten backstory.

We see more of Chubby being protective of Eliza here.

At this point, I do hold on to Chubby and Eliza being childhood friends to lovers, especially after I changed a lot about Eliza's backstory.

Originally, this was supposed to be Chubby's POV with his own flashback. However, it didn't flow well so I changed it to Azul's POV. His flashback will appear in a future chapter.

The whole idea of the Surprise Proposal, while also taken from the actual Ghost Marriage event, is actually more in line with the Project Sekai event called A Song Of Vows For You, Dressed In White! There the bride planned to have a fake objection scene as proof that the groom is the most loyal to her, almost similar to the Ghost Marriage event.

Also, we still keep Idia bitching about the failed rescue attempt because it's just too funny to be left out.

Chapter 159: The Courtship Tactics

This chapter is an adaptation of the Ghost Marriage event story and the Suitor Suit story of Riddle with some mentions of Rook (in the first half with the poem) and Epel (in the second half with the borrowing horse).

I'm actually pretty torn when adapting Riddle's story. The thing is I really Riddle and Malleus' interaction in that card, but in the fic, Malleus was nowhere near Riddle because he was baking cake with Ruggie. That was when I decided to have Crowley interact with Riddle instead. Because I need more Bird Dad agenda.

This is where I started to play around with Riddle. And I realized "man, Azul had it rough" XD. Here's the thing. In the fic, everyone made an attempt to do something to make up post-overblot. This includes Riddle and Azul. However, how come Azul getting more backlash compared to Riddle?

This is where I started to get worried as well. Because, in the center, there was Jonah. Back in Heartslabyul Arc, Jonah was not the center of attention, Ace was. Jonah was the side character. However, in Octavinelle Arc, he was the main player, but this time he had more friends, thus Azul getting a heavier judgment.

I guess because Heartslabyul Arc was more about Riddle and Ace that they can solve their issue quickly, and you can say that for Octavinelle Arc as well. But maybe the time spent with them and all of them getting closer can also be a factor. Well, the one that held the biggest grudge were Ace, Deuce, and Grim, with Riddle added post-Heartslabyul Arc.

Honestly, my biggest worry is making Jonah the center of the problem, which unfortunately I'll continue because of Ramshackle Arc. But hopefully, I can maneuver it better.

At this point of writing, Crowley had his own canon-diverged backstory, and his motivation maybe different from canon, thus this might seem OOC of him, I can admit that.

Now, let's talk about Crowley and Riddle's talk. I'm sure not all of you have the same view of forgiveness and second chances. Because I wrote this based on my beliefs as well. My biggest worry is making this sound like preaching and doesn't sound like I'm guilt-tripping Riddle.

I do really like writing Riddle's growth here.

Chapter 160: I Need a Hero

The title is obviously taken from I Need a Hero. This chapter specifically is based on the Shrek 2 climax.

I remember back then people would often joke about how the Ghost Marriage finale should be like Shrek 2. Well, I'm riding the trend and made it like that.

The first part didn't change much. It only started in the second part with the rescue.

I was trying to think what else should I do with the rest of the rescue squad, so I decided to give them a role in the dance, especially Ruggie and his unique magic.

Originally I wanted to have Epel using his unique magic in this chapter, however, I looked up again and found out that Rook helped a lot in Epel awakening it, so I decided not to write it.

There’s also a brief Epel’s Suitor Suit story moment.

The chapter ending with Ace screaming is reminiscent of the end of chapter 130 in which Ace saved Jonah from falling in the Scarabia overblot battle.

Chapter 161: So Say the World's Being Turned Against You

The title of this chapter and the next is the English lyrics of Ai no Scenario sung by JubyPhonic

This chapter, believe it or not, went through some changes.

Firstly, originally this chapter was going to be a battle between the Chubby and the Suitor Suit team similar to canon. This includes rolling everyone away like a log.

(Actually, sometimes I forgot there are other people here XD)

But, for some reason, I didn't write that. I think it was because of both Chubby and Eliza's backstory changes, the rest of the comedic nature of the finale was erased. Leaving us with a more somber finale.

The next was the dialogue. While most followed canon, I kinda tone down Ace's rudeness. Because, again, thanks to the changed backstory, Eliza's position is now as a victim of an unhappy marriage. Thus, Ace screaming that Eliza should just move on sounded way too cruel even to Ace's standard.

With that, Rook and Riddle had extra dialogue. Hammering own on Rook because, you know, he's the love expert, so, of course, he's allowed to give his words.

Now... *deep breath* Chubby's confession. Whoo-boy... It is actually based on the (inappropriate) confession scene from Mo Dao Zu Shi. I can't give the manhua because of the Everyday means Everyday chapter, but I can lead to the audiobook version. Listen. I had that danmei stuck in my head. It changed my life. I will make a reference whenever I can.

This is followed by the flashback scene. Now this flashback scene was kinda iffy because I think this is the only flashback that I can technically count as 'tell not show' (as in usually just narration) that has dialogues. Usually, my flashback is in italics with the exception of Eliza's retelling. Chubby's flashback counted more like flashes. So, I'm explaining in a weird way: my usual flashback is colored scenes with faded borders, Eliza's flashback is just a full-on OVA, while Chubby's flashback ran behind him like a grainy movie. Does this make sense...?

The flashback itself has a bit of inspiration from Daughter of White by mothy. Originally this was going to be a full Ai no Scenario, but I was like “Tsuki. You did Ai no Scenario before. Be creative.” So, Daughter of White was chosen. But also, the main reason why this flashback exists is really just to show Chubby’s puppy love crush. Knowing they are leagues away, I kinda want a scene that will establish their dynamic along with a reason why Chubby would be very devoted to Eliza. Thus, the tree scene is written.

Originally the flashback scene was supposed to be longer, perhaps retelling Eliza’s flashback from Chubby's point of view. But, perhaps from tiredness or I just didn’t know what else to add or I thought it would be way too long, this is the end result instead.

And because of this heavy change in pace, the battle with giant Chubby is cut completely for a fluffier ending because Eliza and Chubby deserve it!

Chapter 162: You'll Always Be by My Side

Despite being the last chapter of the arc, this is actually the first chapter I've ever written during this triple update.

More specifically, the funny process in writing this was I was writing backward. I started with the JonAzul scene before going back to Idia's best-man speech. And then to RiZul dance before finally finishing the flower boy talk.

The JonAzul talk was actually written way before I started this triple update.

The scenes in this chapter are mostly around Ace and Jonah's Suitor Suit card.

Like the previous chapter, there are some changes in the scene.

Originally, there was supposed to be more talk about Ace's past girlfriend between Ace and Deuce during their dance and maybe a slight hint of their crushes. However, I feel like it would be redundant, so ADeuce talk was cut off.

Riddle was supposed to talk about his fiance when Ace or Epel mentioned being betrothed. But that scene was also cut.

Rook's talk meanwhile was an addition. It was also a Mo Dao Zu Shi reference to two couples. Rook's parents were inspired by the relationship between Lang Wangji and Wei Wuxain, while Rook's grandparents were inspired by Qingheng-Jun and Madam Lan.

Rook also said that his family only love once. This is also a well-known Mo Dao Zu Shi fanon term of "Lans only fall in love once". But I feel like someone as romantic as Rook would believe in a soulmate.

Originally, during the walking down the aisle scene, Chubby was supposed to have his flashback sequence. But I ended up moving it to the previous chapter.

So with the flashback moved, we left with an empty sequence. But I was like "Hey, remember that wedding scene from Crazy Rich Asian? what if Jamil sings again?" And thus, another musical number.

The vow said by Chubby and Eliza was actually from Happy Sugar Life. Though I'm warning you about the maybe uncomfortable scene because this is the only scene I can find so far that had the full vow.

More Idia shitting on others during his best man speech. But we love him for that.

The second half of this chapter is fully in Azul's POV despite shifting slightly to Jonah/Jade's POV in the middle.

Originally, during Riddle and Azul's dance, it was supposed to be in Riddle's POV. However, I thought it would flow better if everything happened in a single take in Azul's POV.

However, it didn't lessen Riddle's arc of closure. The path to growth starts with admitting one's mistakes.

(Can you tell I really like writing about Riddle's growth?)

This leads us to our last JonAzul moment of the fic. Riddle joining Jonah and Azul's hand doesn't mean he would stop crushing on Jonah, it's just he trusts Azul again to take care of Jonah along with him.

Well, if Azul got a lot of shovel-talk, Jonah deserves one as well from Jade.

Jonah and Azul's talk was pretty straightforward, mostly around the reincarnation stuff.

And the last part... Woo-boy... I was very gushy when writing it. I was like squealing to my brother whether I want a full-on kiss or not. Because while Azul had admitted multiple times, and this is Azul's POV, it feels like this is not the time for a full kiss mainly because Jonah hasn't made clear his feeling. So we ended up with two kisses instead; on the hand and on the forehead.

The kiss on the forehead is a call back to the ending of Azul's memory maze.

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tsukikoayanosuke · 2 years

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I Finally Figured Out Jonah's Relationship Chart for the Rewrite

One of the biggest regret I have when writing TW:OPT is not having more side character moments outside of canon plotline. While we do have Christmas Arc, Kalim Disappearance Arc, and some filler episodes, I still kinda want to expand some stories (Cater former Heartslabyul prefect and relationship with Trey, Vil and Rook from fans to friends, Ruggie's life in poverty, etc).

So, for the rewrite, we might have something similar to Genshin Hangout Event or Story Quest: a one, two or three episodes centered about TWST boys and their life or past (probably not canon). The people on the red, orange, yellow, and green are events where Jonah would probably featured in together, highlighting their bonds. Meanwhile, people in blue and purple are events that Jonah may or may not be appearing, so their spending it other boys. But some in the first four line might have multiple moment where Jonah doesn't featured as well to bond with other boys. This can be as simple as adapting a card story or make an original lore.

One of my biggest grip in many fics is why everyone so attached/simping to the MC, like don't you have a life or something? But again, reverse harem fics, what can you do about it? But that's just me. Like as much I want Jonah to be friends with everyone, I know he can't. Plus, similar to Kalim Disappearance Arc, it'll be a challenge to write outside my MC which can be fun and frustrating.

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tsukikoayanosuke · 2 years

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Hmm... What if I canonical give Jonah a learning disorder?

Canonical, Jonah sucks at school, like he really has trouble is studying and often forgetting what he had learn. Mostly because I also sucks at school, so my main OC usually has trait. And there is not much MC that has this problem, at least from the ones I read. This is also a play around game!Yuu who knows nothing about TWST in addition to Jonah's amnesia. A friend actually ask whether Jonah has learning disorder or not and I can't confirm it.

At the same time, however, I still want to keep the concept of "Jonah represent glutonny". If Grim represent the traditional concept of gluttony (eating the black rocks), I want Jonah to have the non-food version and leaning toward the self-centered/self-indulgent in seeking knowledge. Playing around of how curious Jonah can be (which I admit never show in the fic, we gotta fix it in the rewrite).

I might be able to play around these two concept if I can find a connector. I really want to keep the whole "Jonah really sucks at school" but also "Jonah seeking too much knowledge". But I don't want it to make it feels like "oh, Jonah's learning disorder cause him to be a glutton somehow". That's the last thing I want to do.

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tsukikoayanosuke · 2 years

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Long Live the King - Harmonious Kingdom (TWST OC Royalty AU)

It’s always a young prince and princess’ dream to be kings and queens one day. Jonah was one of those prince. Looking down at his small kingdom by the sea, he was often being reminded that one day he would inherit it and he would have to protect it.

Jonah took the advice by heart which is why he didn’t join the war when the horn was blown. Despite worrying about his father and friends in the army, Jonah knows that he’s a precious asset to the kingdom. Losing him would cost the fall of a heirless kingdom.

And he was proven right. When the army came back, less than before, bringing his father’s corpse, Jonah knew his childhood was done. Preparations went down quickly, for his father’s royal funeral, for his coronation, for the restoration after the war. The economy was shambled, diplomacy needed to be done, ignoring every snickers because ‘can a child really rule them all’?

It wasn’t like he had a choice. He had to stand up for his kingdom or else his legacy will die with him.

It’s always a young prince and princess’ dream to be kings and queens one day. Jonah was lucky to be one of the princes whose dream came true, even if the timing came to early.

The throne felt too big for him. The crown felt too heavy for his head. But he still raised his chin, looking down at his people who looks at him with the highest expectation.

For he is Prince King Jonah Argentum of Radiant Haven. Long live the king!

#Harmonious Kingdom #twst royalty au #twisted wonderland royalty au #It’s supposed to be vent fic #Mostly I just want to do some angst with Jonah because I’m not tired of torturing my boy #seriously being crowned at the age of sixteen sounds suck #jonah argentum (my oc)#twisted wonderland oc #twst oc

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tsukikoayanosuke · 1 year

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The temptation to change Jonah’s main color to white is strong

from the Pretty Cure wiki (yes, Pretty Cure because why not)

from this website

Which, now that I think about it, kinda suit Jonah. At the start of the story, Jonah has amnesia. He's literally a blank/clean slate, is open to changes, has therapy/self-reflection place, and mostly a hero.

But the thing is, Jonah is a villain like many. We rarely see Disney villain in white. Two I can count are Cruella and Hans. Mostly because white is the symbol of everything pure and innocent. Villain in white are usually someone in high authority or an aristocrat, the wealthy with is a contrast to their black evil villainy. This is really fit Jonah who is seen as a good guy who saved the overblot, and yet in the end will overblot himself.

I mean, I also have some things that make my reasoning stronger.

I mentioned something about Ventus and Vanitas last time and the plan is to make Jonah and Grim connected more than just MC and Mascot behind the screen. Grim has black fur with blue eyes (Vanitas' bodysuit, Ventus' eyes), which would make sense if Jonah as dominance white outfit to compliment his one yellow eye (Ventus' clothes, Vanitas' eyes). In addition, in BBS, Vanitas is extracted from Ventus, making Ventus a pure light and Vanitas pure darkness, but they compliment each other. I kinda want to play around this and connect it with the whole Jonah and Grim being the two different kind of gluttony.

Also more Treasure Planet reference. Jonah with the new white color would match Jim Hawkins' interstellar academy uniform which represent a changed young man after his swashbuckling adventure. Jonah's losing his memories can be count as "change" as he is now so different from his quirky past self. So, if the change to white from Jim Hawkins is a positive thing, the change to white from Jonah is a negative thing. And it fit with the whole reverse Treasure Planet thing that had been going.

#the captain is rewriting opt #jonah argentum (my oc)

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tsukikoayanosuke · 2 years

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"How about making a wish?"

Picrew

"A wish?"

The moonlight that shone behind her gave an eerie aura. "I can grant you any wish you want, with a cost that is. If you want to be a magical boy like your peer, then I can give you that power. I'll even teach you how to control it."

He tilted his head to the side. "What's the cost?"

"It's up to you,” she chuckled, “a life, a memory. Anything you can give me. You’re the one you need it more.” She raised a hand, offering him to take it. “So, do we have a deal?”

It was easy for him to escape. There was only the two of them in this silent library and the door was unlocked. He could just walked back and forget this very conversation.

But he was a child. A naïve and greedy child.

To stand in front of his crew as the leader, to be able to protect them. He needs this power.

So, he took the hand.

Rose petals bursts everywhere and his vision became dark.

He never knew what coming next (or would he remember them). The chain that binds him. The cage that holds him. The slimy hands that keeps him to close to the thorny rose.

Like a little star trapped in a glass container, and the witch that caught him wouldn’t let him go that easily.

Captain lore... captain lore... captain lore...

On another note. I still cannot spell Rose Lady’s name without looking it up XD

#twisted wonderland oc #twst oc #twisted wonderland fanfiction #twisted wonderland fanfic #twisted wonderland fic #twst fanfic #twst fic #jonah argentum (my oc)#serendipity rogers

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