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#i really thought the game was possessed and decided to kill my controllers and then i would've spent $80 to replace them
b4b3tte · 4 months
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ʏᴀɴᴅᴇʀᴇ ᴊᴏʜɴɴʏ ᴄᴀɢᴇ | TW : ABUSIVE BEHAVIOR
My note — I hope you enjoy this! This may seem out of character of johnny, I wasn’t sure if he would be the love sick affectionate type of yandere or dark & abusive type but I just let my fingers typed away, if you want me to re write or write another one let me know! I have more yandere JC content so just hold on tight! You can picture MK1 Johnny Or MK11 since I know the lore more and played the MK11 Game I usually invision MK11 JC, but either way enjoy!! NOT PROOFREAD.
Warnings — Bruising, physical abuse, controlling, possessive, jealousy, forcefulness, use of guns, and cussing
Song — eyes don’t lie — Isabel LaRosa
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𐙚 Here you are, on the cold hard ground leaning against the wall crying your eyes out, having your neck bruised, and jaw sore, thinking how can you let this happen to yourself?
𐙚 Just awhile ago Johnny saw you talking to Erron black a little longer than you should have at Kotal Kahn’s Kolosseum, What you didn’t know was that Johnny staring at Erron black down with upmost jealousy and rage.
𐙚 then glancing at you with audacity and amusement on how would you let Erron talk to you in such a flirting manner when you know damn well you belong to him and not Erron.
𐙚 After your guys conversation was over after repeatdly declining errons advances , what you didn’t expect was to be harshly grabbed by the wrist and pushed to a corner, and grabbed by the chin being brought up closely to Johnnys face, his brows furrowed in anger and eyes as sharp as knifes.
“ really? Your fucking kidding me right? Over here prancing around like a fucking whore getting other men’s attention you know you aren’t supposed to. The fuck do you have to say about that huh? “
𐙚 The grip of his big hands on your chin getting more tighter and feeling your jaw swelling and burning, it’s like you had a lump in your throat wanting to come out but nothing came out, all in results was your eyes feeling an itch of water slowly becoming more visible in them, and your mouth not uttering a word, if it was sown shut.
𐙚 His facial expressions darken at the silence, both of his hands went to your shoulders pushing you harder to the wall, having his face close to yours
“ IM TALKING TO YOU. Is that man more interesting than me huh, i don’t give you enough is that it?….what are you stupid or deaf, or are you just plain out retarded, to not fucking answer me when I’m speaking to you. “
𐙚 The sudden yell from him caused you to flinch, and finally have a tear run down your right eye, the times you two have been together he never fails to make you fear him, you swallowed the so called lump in your throat and opened your mouth slight trying to push out words
𐙚 but only pathetic stuttering came out, which caused him to only ease his grip on your shoulders and raise his eyebrow in amusement waiting for your response
“ I-…um..i…uh- “
𐙚 You were cut off by him just rolling his eyes and chuckling and finally letting you go but still making sure you were against the wall, in frustration he ran his hand through his hair, and grabbed a Kimber Micro 9 Semi-Auto Pistol out of his gun holster,
𐙚 he chuckles in a manic crazedway and pushes it up against your chin, making your head go up, but still maintaining eye contact with him in fear
“ listen baby, I love you and you love me, but if you ever decide one day you don’t, I will kill you. You hear me? If I can’t have you…then no one can, okay sweetheart?“
𐙚 He says the last 2 words in a smile that sent chills down your spine, it’s like he thought this was something completely normal to do to someone you love. His hand roughly grabbing your jaw, pulling you closer to him, his lips meet yours and his free hand move slowly from your neck down your waist.
𐙚 When he felt you not kiss back, he chuckles within the kiss and brings the gun down to your stomach, having his index finger slightly press on the trigger basically threatening you to kiss him back
“ don’t be a brat, and kiss me back. “
𐙚 After he felt your effort in the kiss and how your lip quivered in fear, in satisfaction he put down the gun from your stomach, his soft and warm tongue slips into your mouth, grabbing your neck roughly making sure you have no intention on breaking the kiss first
𐙚 his breath feeling like a gentle breeze. he pulls you in closer, his hot breath almost burning against your skin.Both of you then heard someone call out Johnnys name, and audible annoyed noise comes out of his mouth as he pulled away from the kiss
𐙚 he then caresses the side of your cheek and says in a sweet tone despite his words pressing the gun further on your chest, definitely causing a mark
“ we’ll talk more at home alright love? If you even fucking remotely look at his way or any man that isn’t me, you’ll know what will happen. k? “
𐙚 he then kisses your cheek and holsters his gun then walking off, you feel your knees give out in pain, you slowly glide against the wall, and let a tear drop by drop, your hand softly going up feeling the burning sensation on your neck and chin from the harsh grasps of his, you don’t know how you’ll have to do it, but soon enough you’ll have to go back out there pretending like nothing happened and this is just the beginning.
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kolyasupremanxy · 1 year
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𝐂𝐚𝐠𝐞𝐝
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𝐅𝐞𝐚𝐭𝐮𝐫𝐢𝐧𝐠 : 𝐅𝐲𝐨𝐝𝐨𝐫 𝐃𝐨𝐬𝐭𝐨𝐞𝐯𝐬𝐤𝐲
𝐆𝐞𝐧𝐫𝐞: Angst
𝐖𝐚𝐫𝐧𝐢𝐧𝐠𝐬 : Emotional manipulation , Abuse , Gaslighting , Coercion , Control , Stockholm Syndrome , Psychological trauma , Amnesia as a plot device , Possessive , Controlling behavior , Physical and emotional suffocation , Disregard for personal autonomy and boundaries , Death , Hurt no comfort
𝐖𝐨𝐫𝐝 𝐜𝐨𝐮𝐧𝐭: 1.6k
𝐀/𝐧: This is very rushed , Forgive me. I hate this already.
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You were slowly realizing that Fyodor's love for you was all fake. All the affection, kisses, promises, and his touch were nothing but an act to keep you caged all to himself. Every time you tried to voice your doubts, he would twist your words and make you feel guilty for even thinking such things. But deep down, you knew the truth. You were just a pawn in his twisted game.
"What am I really to you?"
You asked Fyodor, your voice trembling as you stared at him with tears in your eyes. Fyodor's calm expression never faltered as he looked at you, his eyes cold and calculating. "You're my loyal servant, of course," he replied, his voice smooth as silk.
You couldn't believe what you were hearing. You had given everything to Fyodor, had followed his orders without question, and had even killed for him. And yet, he didn't see you as anything more than a tool to be used for his own gain. The realization hit you like a ton of bricks, and you felt like you were suffocating.
"But... what about everything you said to me? The promises you made?" you choked out, your voice barely above a whisper. Fyodor's expression didn't change, but his eyes glinted with something you couldn't quite place. "Merely tactics to ensure your loyalty, my dear. I knew how to manipulate you, to make you believe what I wanted you to believe."
You felt like you had been punched in the gut. Every moment you had spent with Fyodor, every touch, every kiss, felt like a lie. And yet, you couldn't bring yourself to hate him. You were too deeply in love with him, too loyal to turn your back on him.
Fyodor's response was cold and calculated, like he had been expecting this conversation. He twisted every word you said, making you question your own feelings and sanity. His words were like a sharp knife, cutting deeper into your heart with each passing moment.
Days passed, and you continued to act like everything was okay, but the truth was eating away at you from the inside. You knew you couldn't continue living like this, trapped in a web of lies. So, you decided to run away, to escape this cage that Fyodor had created for you.
But fate had other plans. On the night of your escape, you were involved in a serious accident that left you with amnesia. You woke up in a hospital bed, with Fyodor sitting beside you, holding your hand. You had no memory of your past life, no recollection of the lies and deceit that had brought you to this point. Fyodor was the only one there, and you clung to him like a lifeline, believing every word he said.
Days turned into weeks, and you began to notice the small things that didn't add up. Fyodor's reactions to certain questions, the way he would flinch at certain memories that you couldn't recall. It was like there was a whole other world that you couldn't access, a world that he was hiding from you.
One night, you had a vivid nightmare. You were surrounded by darkness, and a voice whispered in your ear, "It's time to wake up from all these lies." You woke up gasping for air, drenched in sweat. Fyodor was lying beside you, his arms wrapped tightly around you, and you couldn't help but feel like you were suffocating.
"Are you okay, my love?" Fyodor asked, his voice laced with concern.
You didn't answer him, lost in your own thoughts. The nightmare had felt so real, like a warning from a past that you couldn't remember.
Days turned into weeks, and you tried to piece together your past, but it was like trying to solve a puzzle with missing pieces. Fyodor was always there, holding your hand, whispering sweet nothings into your ear. But every time he touched you, it felt like a violation, like he was trying to claim you all over again.
One day, as you were walking in the park with Fyodor, you noticed a couple walking hand in hand. The sight of their affection made your heart ache, and you turned to Fyodor with tears in your eyes.
"What am I to you?" you asked him, your voice trembling with emotion. "Am I just a pawn in your game? A pet to keep you company?"
Fyodor's expression turned cold, and his grip on your hand tightened. "You are mine," he said, his voice low and dangerous. "You belong to me, and me alone."
You were lost in a sea of confusion and pain. The past was a blur, and the present was suffocating you. Fyodor's love had turned into a cage, and you didn't know how to break free. You tried to distance yourself from him, to create some space, but he was always there, like a shadow that wouldn't let go.
You spent your days trying to remember, to connect the pieces of your past, but it was like trying to catch smoke with your hands. Memories would flash before your eyes, but they were always fleeting, like ghosts that didn't want to be caught.
Fyodor watched you with a cold gaze, like a predator watching its prey. He would try to comfort you, to soothe your fears, but every time he touched you, it felt like a violation. You knew he was hiding something, something that he didn't want you to remember.
One night, as you lay in bed, staring at the ceiling, Fyodor came to you, his eyes burning with an intense fire.
"Are you afraid of me?" he asked, his voice low and dangerous.
You didn't answer him, lost in your own thoughts. You knew that you were afraid of him, of his love that had turned into a suffocating cage.
Fyodor's grip on your arm tightened, his fingers digging into your skin. "Answer me." he said making you feel terrified.
You flinched at his touch, but you managed to find your voice. "Yes," you whispered, your voice trembling.
Fyodor's expression softened, and he leaned in to kiss you. But the kiss felt like a violation, like he was trying to claim you all over again. You pushed him away, your heart pounding in your chest.
"I can't do this anymore," you said, your voice breaking. "I can't pretend that everything is okay when it's not."
Fyodor's expression turned cold again, and he stood up from the bed. "You think you can just leave me?" he said, his voice dripping with venom. "You belong to me, and me alone."
You tried to stand up, to get away from him, but he was too fast. He grabbed your arm and pulled you towards him, his eyes burning with a fierce intensity.
"You are mine," he said, his voice low and dangerous. "You will never leave me. I will make sure of that."
You tried to fight him, to break free from his grip, but he was too strong. He dragged you to the window, pulling the curtains aside to reveal the night sky.
"Look at the stars," he said, his voice softening. "They are all mine. And so are you."
You looked at him with fear and confusion, not understanding what he meant.
"Fyodor, please," you begged. "Let me go. I can't do this anymore."
But he wouldn't listen. He wrapped his arms around you, holding you tightly against him.
"You will never leave me," he said, his voice low and dangerous. "I am god, and you are mine."
You knew then that you had to get away, to break free from his grasp. You waited until he fell asleep, and then you slipped out of bed, grabbing your phone and your keys. You knew you had to leave, to get away from this suffocating love that was slowly killing you.
You ran out of the apartment, not looking back, not caring where you were going. You just knew that you had to escape, to break free from the cage that Fyodor had created for you.
As you ran, your mind started to clear, and memories started to flash before your eyes. You remembered the fights, the lies, and the pain. You remembered the moment you realized that Fyodor's love for you was all a twisted game. But even in the midst of this realization, you couldn't help but feel a sense of relief. For the first time in a long time, you were free.
As you ran across the street, you didn't see the car coming. You didn't feel the impact or the pain that followed. You only saw Fyodor's figure in the distance, his arms outstretched as if to catch you. And then, everything went dark.
You didn't know how much time had passed before you regained consciousness. You didn't know where you were, or what had happened. But one thing was clear - you were dying. Your body was broken, and you couldn't move.
You looked around, and you saw Fyodor's figure standing in the distance, watching you. You wanted to scream at him, to ask him why he had done this to you. But the words wouldn't come out. You were too weak.
"Why?" you whispered, your voice barely audible. "Why did I even live if things will just go like this?"
A teardrop slid down your cheek, and you closed your eyes, ready to accept your fate. But then, you heard a voice.
"Your death doesn't mean you've escaped," the voice said. "It only means that your suffering has ended."
You didn't know who the voice belonged to, but it didn't matter. You were ready to go. You were ready to leave this world behind.
And then, you died. You died without feeling any freedom in your entire life. You died without ever truly knowing what it meant to be loved. And as you took your last breath, you couldn't help but wonder - what was the point of it all?
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Shadow the Hedgehog remake
So, shadow is my favorite Sonic character and, while I love the Shadow the Hedgehog game very deeply, it is, objectively, a bad game. This is my idea for a remake of it that could also really expand the Sonic mythos, insane as it is.
So, the game starts out much the same. Shadow has no memories and is trying to find out who he is. Then of course, the Black Aliens invade, but the invasion is slightly different.
See, the Black Aliens, rather than just invading and causing massive destruction, essentially lock the planet down, not allowing anyone to enter or leave. And unleashes several mobians, some male and female, but all of them powerful and they also look suspiciously like Shadow.
These mobians make up the majority of the bosses in the game. They are the Children of Doom, warriors created from the DNA of Black Doom, all of which are competing to be his successor.
During the game, Shadow will receive guidance from both members of the Sonic Team (including Eggman) and a mysterious figure who pushes Shadow towards violence and destruction. They are, unsurprisingly, Black Doom in disguise.
During the missions leading up to a boss fight with one of the Children, Shadow will get the chance to learn their backstories, and realize they are actually lost and full of pain, rather like him. In addition, as you go along, you’ll meet character who will provide clues to Shadow’s past. It’s laid out like a mystery, a lot of disjointed pieces coming together to paint a larger and more sinister tapestry.
At the end of each fight with one of the Children of Doom Shadow will have the choice of destroying them or sparing them. This will be important in the endgame.
Eventually you manage to put the pieces together. You, Shadow the Hedgehog, are also a Child of Doom. Created from Doom’s DNA and forged to be his true successor. But along the way, you also discover Dr. Robotnik’s true plan.
Robotnik, all along, planned to use Shadow’s DNA to create a new body for Maria, a powerful Mobian body that would not fail her the way her human body had. When GUN attacked the ARK, Gerald thought the body destroyed, hence his destroy the Earth plan, but it wasn’t. And Doom has taken it for his own purposes.
The final showdown come son the ARK, but not against Doom. Doom has taken control of the Maria-Mobian, using her as a weapon against Shadow. She is either the Final Boss or the Second to Last Boss, depending on the choices you made.
If you killed the Children of Doom previously, then that’s it. Shadow kills the last vestige of the only person that truly loved him, and he gives away the last of his humanity, becoming Doom’s heir and successor.
But if you spared the Children, Shadow can’t do it. He can’t bring himself to kill her. And the possessed Maria-Mobian goes feral, beating Shadow within an inch of his life. But, she can’t kill him either. Because, deep down, this clone has Maria’s memories, and can’t bring herself to kill Shadow.
The Children of Doom you spared then come in clutch with the Chaos Emeralds. Shadow uses them to go Hyper Shadow, and their power expels Doom from Maria.
This leads into the TRUE Final Boss, Black Doom himself, who’s decided that Earth is a Bad Job and is going to destroy it, but Shadow, with his Hyper Form, defeats him and uses the ARK’s Laser to destroy him.
The game ends with Mobian Maria waking from a dream and saying “I remember you,” to Shadow, who responds with, “And I remember you.”
Whaddya think?
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b-lightwalker · 8 months
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Michael is Cassie’s Dad AU
Long story short, I think Michael being Cassie’s dad is neat but I think the only way it could work is if Help Wanted 2 happens before SB and Glitchtrap claims another victim. His own son, ‘cause free real estate.
Michael survives the Pizza Place fire, unfortunately for him, and he figures the only thing left for him to do now is to make sure his father didn’t come back. (And find another way to die, but one burnt bridge at a time.) He takes Helpy, salvages anything he can, and leaves. Soon after, he finds Cassie, fails to find her parents, and takes her in. It’s a reason to live, if you will. Oh, and Helpy’s kind of her brother now.
The Pizzaplex opens and Michael tries to get a job as the nightguard but it’s already taken (somehow) so he gets a job as a technician. Soon after, Fazbear Entertainment starts making Help Wanted 2, and Michael signs up as a game tester. He has the time of his life reliving SL and surprise, surprise, Help Wanted 1 things start happening and Glitchtrap is here. (And maybe there’s another Jeremy who’s gonna slice his stomach open instead of slicing his face off, I dunno.) With William now also hijacking Michael’s mind, Michael and Vanessa start working together under William’s influence. They finish up Vanessa’s Vanny mask, Elizabeth’s new body, and the hideouts for Vanny to work in while Elizabeth carries out her act. Sometime during this, they nab Gregory and Patient 46/GGY happens or something.
I’m thinking that Michael is the one who makes the security/V.A.N.N.I. mask and Helpi system. He makes a more “tame” version that he presents to Fazbear Entertainment as something to make repairs and the like easier. They love it and use it for their Class V technicians since it’s expensive and would only really be needed for more advanced stuff. Then later, Michael gives them the V.A.N.N.I. mask and Helpi system we see in Ruin. And while the fact that it implants a chip in your head should be a red flag, Michael has yet to screw Fazbear Ent. over (to their knowledge), so they use the new design and system. (And Mike/William probably pulled a SL by answering yet dodging all the questions.) The security masks make it easier for Michael and Vanessa to cover their tracks.
For Cassie’s disastrous 11th birthday, Michael sends Gregory to keep her company. They become good friends which works for Michael and Vanessa. (I guess Gregory’s chillin’ with either Vanessa/Elizabeth, Vanny, or Michael if he’s not helping them ‘cause problems around the Pizzaplex.) Then whatever triggers SB happens and Gregory becomes a target. Princess Quest ending. Everyone’s now free to live their lives and Michael, Elizabeth, Vanessa, Gregory, and Freddy’s goals are to undo the damage done the best they can. (I am liking the thought of Michael still being under William’s control though.) Ruin happens and then everyone’s goal becomes finding Cassie.
Don’t know whether or not Cassie should be a robot child or not. I like the thought of Michael just finding her and being like, this is my life now, but I also like the thought of William having Michael create her to help in the lure and kill children thing, but then deciding not to to use her as leverage against Michael. Doesn’t take much effort to pull the ‘You’re Responsible for Your Siblings’ Deaths’ card so don’t do anything to cause this child’s death. Of course, it could work either way. If she is a robot, she may be possessed by Charlotte. Which in that case, GlamHenry. And I’m not sure about GregEvan. I like the thought of Gregory being a random child Mike and Vanessa nabbed, but I also like the thought of Evan also being forced to be a puppet for William. If these are the case, then I guess for Clara, William had Michael start building her a body so she can join the family of murderers.
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inkdemonapologist · 1 year
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Simple ask, how do you think a meeting between everyone's favorite ink cultist and the dapper little baby demon would go, if Sammy hadn't been stuck in that cell? That thought has been in my mind since the trailers.
I think this would answer some questions we don’t really have answers to. Does Sammy worship THE INK DEMON because he’s powerful and only use Bendy’s image and name because the Ink Demon responds to it, or does he worship BENDY, the cartoon, and simply understands that the ink demon is the manifestation of that cartoon devil? Can Sammy actually sense the Ink Demon’s presence? Can Sammy actually parse the Ink Demon’s desires, or did he just make up the human sacrifice stuff all on his own?
Because there’s so many ways it could go. Would Sammy be ecstatic to meet the truest form of his lord, or distressed that his lord has been diminished in this way? Would he even recognise Baby Bendy as the same creature he’s been worshipping? Would he obliviously follow Baby Bendy’s desires and end up playing trains for 3 hours, or would the Ink Demon’s wishes come through instead and have Sammy doing his best to destroy signal towers so his power can return? Or would Sammy just decide on his own what the Ink Demon Probably Wants (i bet it’s human sacrifice!!!) and just run off to do something ridiculous the demon never asked for?
I’ve actually recently been thinking WAY too hard about Sammy’s appearance at the end of the game, because like……. [massages my temple with a long sigh] Okay, correct me if I’m misunderstanding here, but it looks like… the Ink Demon intentionally merges himself with Audrey, being all sinister about how WE ARE ONE, and then after he does some light Joey murder Audrey’s like “cool im gonna go do end reel stuff now” and then she is SO in control of the body that the Ink Demon is just dragged along for the ride and his only recourse is to ask his followers to??? mURDER HIM???? Because he doesn’t actually want to do be doing what he’s doing???? LMAO????????? THIS IS SO FUNNy WHY DID HE DO THIS. WHY DID HE GET HIMSELF POSSESSED!!! THIS IS A SAMMY-LEVEL DUMB MISTAKE!!!
Anyway so like the reason I bring this up is…. Sammy has absolutely missed the memo here, yeah?
The Ink Demon: I don’t actually want to be doing this please kill me Sammy Lawrence: THE INK DEMON IS HERE YESSSSSS EVERYONE SURRENDER YOURSELF TO HIM!!! The Ink Demon: ……..can someone shoot that guy also please
I jest but liKE, “SURRENDER YOURSELVES TO THE LORD OF THE DARK PUDDLES” is VERY DIFFICULT TO INTERPRET as “let’s oust this blaspheming traitor who has stolen our lord’s form” – It seems like Sammy just escaped when the Cyclebreaker prison was broken into/out of and saw the Ink Demon running rampant and got really excited about it with 0 context? Can he not hear the Ink Demon’s voice, unlike EVERY OTHER LOST ONE APPARENTLY??? Or are the Lost Ones just under the demon’s control whereas Sammy is worshipping voluntarily so he didn’t get the memo because he wasn't compelled?
Anyway like, I think if you wanted to, you could use this scene as a decent argument that Sammy does not actually have any connection to Bendy, can’t actually feel him or hear his voice, and is genuinely still waiting to be noticed. So if he met Baby Bendy and recognised him as a form of his lord, it’s even-odds whether he’d do anything Baby Bendy seemed to indicate, or if he’d just do whatever he decided in his own head that Bendy probably wanted with 100% enthusiasm and confidence, regardless of how wildly incorrect he was.
But setting BatDR canon aside, the thing that I really wanted to happen in BatDR after I saw the trailer was for Sammy to be the one to bring back the Ink Demon. I just wanted him to succeed in a way that makes trouble, even if it got him immediately tossed aside, and this would’ve been a really neat place for it to happen that could’ve set Sammy as something in-between an ally and an antagonist. We need the Ink Demon, and we want to end Wilson’s reign, but also the Ink Demon is dangerous and Sammy has his own reasons for bringing him back that probably don’t align with ours. So… I think that’s what would make me the most happy, honestly; for Sammy to meet the Baby Bendy, immediately understand something about him that we don’t, and become very intent on Setting Him Free.
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beevean · 1 year
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Retranslating parts of the Curse of Darkness script
I thought to replay the game again, this time with Japanese voices to change the experience a little
I’m not sure whether the translation was JP -> ENG or ENG -> JP: it looks like the latter to me due to the lip sync. Anyway, the two versions are surprisingly faithful to each other, but I wanted to check if there were any interesting differences... and there are :P
For reference, I used this playthrough for the Japanese cutscenes, and the English script in the wiki.
First cutscene
Many interesting differences in this iconic cutscene. Isaac sounds much angrier in Japanese than he does in English, and I think he’s quite less effeminate too, although they couldn’t change his body language :P
ENG: With this, the most forbidden of arts, a wisp of conjured matter can be transformed into a hellish devil! There are but two humans who possess this magnificent power: you and I.
JP: A forbidden secret art feared by humans. Creating a devil that serves you and you only, from a bundle of magical power! There are only two people in this world who have mastered this power: you and I.
Additional details provided by the Japanese version: Devil Forging is “feared by humans”, implying their tragic pasts as outcasts of humanity, and Hector and Isaac aren’t the only ones with this power, but they’re the absolute best in their field. I also like the description of “bundle of magical power”, although both versions are equally “mystical” in this regard lol. Calling the Devil Forging “secret art” also refers to the name of the track playing in this scene, Flattery With The Secret Arts (“秘術との迎合”).
(speaking of “you and I”, Hector and Isaac use ore for themselves and kisama for each other.)
ENG: Ah, but you will, Hector. And soon! You have no choice. Without it, I could crush you in an instant... but that wouldn't be very satisfying, now would it?
JP: What's the point of a boring oath? It would be easy to destroy you here and now. You, who gave up your powers and became the lowest of the low, nothing but mere scum.
I love how in the cutscene you can see Isaac rolling his eyes at Hector’s oath so his snarky remark in Japanese is even more fitting 😂 but also geez man, I haven’t taken control of Hector yet and you’ve already killed him.
(if in English the last part sounds clunky, the original phrase is “ただのカスと成り下がった”: I really wanted to convey as much of Isaac’s contempt in English as I could)
ENG: You deserve a most gruesome fate for the humiliation you brought upon me three years ago.
JP: However, even if I destroyed such a thing, it wouldn’t make up for the humiliation I received three years ago.
The wording is vague, this is the version that makes the most sense to me. The Japanese line sounds even more bitter, as if even Isaac understands that it’s all futile and killing Hector won’t restore his old life, but he has literally nothing left other than his hatred.
(and yes, he says “such a thing”, which is a very Japanese expression but I’ve decided to keep it because, just in case it wasn’t clear enough, Isaac may be a little peeved at Hector :V)
ENG: But in the end, the glorious vengeance you seek will not be yours -- t'will be mine!
JP: That's it. I'll be waiting for you, as the former strongest Devil Forgemaster of the Dark Lord’s army.
No idea why they completely changed the line here, but Isaac’s farewell in Japanese is slightly more condescending. As a note, he actually calls Dracula “Demon King”.
Yes, all of these are Isaac’s lines. It’s not favoritism: Hector’s lines in Japanese and English are nearly identical to each other. Except for this one:
ENG: Heed my words. I will hunt you down like the beast you are. I will have my revenge!
JP: Very well! I'll do as you wish! And I will corner you, without fail!
... man, poor Hector doesn’t sound nearly as raw in Japanese :(
(well, this fits the different voices: Takahiro Yoshimizu sounds much younger and softer than Crispin Freeman. I had no idea Freeman carried most of Hector’s badassery)
Also, in the Japanese version, the name is for some reason translated as “Abolition Castle”! But the kanji correctly mean “Abandoned Castle” (“廃城”).
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Creating an Innocent Devil
Minor, but Hector calls Isaac “polite” (“丁寧”) because he went through all the trouble of carving instructions on a stele, and after the previous cutscene I find it hilarious 😂
(actually, the whole mental image of Isaac taking the time to write guides for Hector is hilarious, they really used to be friends lmao)
ENG: O great powers of darkness! Release to me one of the tortured souls! Let me infuse him with my life-force and awaken him to the world of the living! Immaculate being... Appear before me now.
JP: O magical power, converge here! Play the melody of an irrational soul, under my command, a person who is not of the human world. Innocent soul, come to life here!
The Devil Forging formula was hard to translate. Yes, it uses musical terminology, しらべ (melody) and 奏でる (to play a stringed instrument). The most interesting part is how it specifies that Devil Forgemasters don’t belong to the human world, a theme quite pervasive in Hector’s and Isaac’s arcs.
(nothing interesting with the conversation with Zead. He simply calls Devil Forging “splendid”, a downgrade from “it’s enough to make your blood run cold”. He uses watashi and speaks rather politely.)
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“Baljhet Mountains” is spelled as “Balget Mountains” (“Baljit Mountain Range” in Japanese), which I prefer.
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Not much to report about the cutscene where we meet Julia. The most unique change is that she doesn’t outright say that she can envision the future in Japanese: she simply “has some knowledge” (“それなりの知識はあるわ”). To be fair, it’s not like we ever see her powers lol, although it ruins my headcanon about her and Isaac sharing powers :( As for her speech pattern, she uses watashi and often ends sentences in wa but she’s otherwise quite brusque. Hector calls her kimi, and most importantly forget about the Shakespearan style she and Hector use to talk to each other in English, here they speak like normal people :P
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St. Germain
ENG: I won't bandy words with you. I have an urgent request. Please refrain from pursuing Isaac any further.
JP: I'm here to ask a favor of you, it's a little thing. Please stop chasing Isaac any further. 
St. Germain is even more polite in Japanese, as expected. He uses watashi for himself and speaks in perfect keigo.
Hector also calls St. Germain “Isaac’s minion” (“手先”) specifically, and St. Germain says “adios” when he leaves lol. (sonic adventure 2 reference?)
Garibaldi Temple is also the Cathedral of Garibaldi.
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Trevor
ENG: For one that served under Dracula, you seem much too weak. It's been said that the Devil Forgemaster's power rivals that of Death.
JP: You’re too weak to be the only surviving Devil Forgemaster, who was said to be equal to Dracula's aide Death.
It just says that Devil Forgemasters are “equal to” Death, not that they’re specifically as strong as Death - obviously that’s implied, but the use of the word “同等” also implies that Hector and Isaac were equals to Death in rank. That’s pretty high up.
Also, “The only surviving Devil Forgemaster” makes Hector’s comment “Oh, so you’re hunting Isaac as well” flow a little better: you can see how he could make the connection that Trevor only knew about Isaac. In English the “surviving” bit was moved later (“Could he have survived? It cannot be”), and Hector’s comment feels more forced. (although it’s still odd because Isaac was into hiding all those years, so why does Trevor assume that one Forgemaster survived but the other died? oh well)
(of course, Trevor also uses ore for himself and kisama for Hector)
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The cutscene at the beginning of Mortvia Aqueduct is unremarkable, but the level is named “Mortavia Ruins” (“Mortavia Aqueduct” in Japanese). Why did they take out the A? It sounds better :(
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Zead vs. St. Germain
ENG: That's ridiculous. You have different rules for yourself--
JP: What a funny joke. Your objective--
Not only St. Germain comes off as more sarcastically polite (Zead calls him kisama but he reciprocates with the courteous anata), the dialogue hints more strongly at Zead’s suspicious nature. He has an objective that we aren’t allowed to hear, huh?
ENG: I cannot have you interfering any longer. 
JP: I won't let you get in our way anymore.
Yep, our way (“我々”). Just in case you didn’t find Zead suspicious enough.
Finally, not quite related to translation, but I find the name of the track playing here interesting: Those Who Desire the Resurrection (“復活を望む者”). I think it should be singular, for obvious reasons.
Also, please enjoy this utter mangling of “Jigramunt”:
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(technically it says “Jigrumunt” in katakana, but the English spelling is just beautiful)
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The siblings’ sad fate
Not much to report about the cutscenes with Isaac and Julia in Cordova Town (or “Town of Cordoba” in Japanese), except one line that hit me hard:
EN: And also... if you are the one to slay him... only then could I live with it.
JP: Only then I could accept it. Even if I lose my family...
I think we’re all sleeping on how much Julia was hurting through CoD, game itself included :( Michiru Yamane as usual gets it.
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Fight with St. Germain
Eneomaos Machine Tower is the even weirder “Clock Tower of Eneomaios”.
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Only one line stood out to me:
ENG: In this space, I may be partially freed of the fetters of time.
JP: If you are here, the shackles of time will be partially released.
Actually there is no subject in the first part, but I assume that St. Germain is talking about Hector because he just confirmed that he entered Zead’s “trap” normally. Again, I think it makes the conversation flow better.
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Trevor vs. Isaac
Similarly to Geclmunt, the name of Aiolon Ruins gets twisted into Iororn Ruins. It’s spelled correctly in katakana.
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And this line from Isaac baffled me for days.
ENG: You vanquished Lord Dracula by a fluke, a mere twist of fortune. Yet I grant, you are adept.
JP: Not for nothing you destroyed Lord Dracula, even though it was a fluke. But the game is just about to begin.
Other translations would be “no wonder you destroyed Lord Dracula...” or “as expected from the one who destroyed Lord Dracula...” (“ドラキュラ様を滅ぼしただけのことはある”).
While his voice still sounds angry, Isaac is much more impressed by Trevor in Japanese: in English he sounds like he’s tacking on the half-hearted praise by force, while in Japanese it’s the other way around, as if the “fluke” part is an afterthought. I am genuinely surprised. Isaac, hon, why are you being so flattering with the man who killed your Lord? So let me get this straight, you’re a complete ass to Hector, you called him scum, and sure I don’t blame you, but Trevor nooo, even though he ruined your life just as much as Hector did you’re standing there like “oh wow you’re awesome, now I know why Lord Dracula was defeated!”.
between this and the stabbing scene, i think i understand now why the japanese side of the fandom seems to prefer isaavor over isaactor. yeah. yeah i don’t blame y’all. and trevor ain’t kidding either, in english he says “you’re not without skill” but in japanese he says “you’re pretty good” - i’d say “just kiss already”, but isaac already got me covered so :V
ENG: On the contrary. To obtain the vengeance I seek, Isaac must be slain by my hand alone. Ergo, nothing was lost. 
JP: Not really. After all, I promised that I would defeat Isaac with my own hands. I’m rather relieved.
I like how Hector puts it as a promise, the one he made to Julia, and not just his own selfish sense of revenge. He cares and was touched by Julia’s sadness. On the other hand, he’s outright relieved that he still has the chance to kill Isaac himself, now that’s the badass Hector I know and love.
(this is also where Hector and Trevor switch to omae for each other, indicating that they’ve become closer allies, even if Trevor is still being a prideful asshole :P)
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Rematch against Trevor
ENG: “Oh, so that is why he fought me earlier!”
“What is it, Belmont?”
JP: “Damn it! The battle earlier...!”
“Why are you panicking?”
Trevor is more worried about the fact that Isaac stole his blood, and Hector notices it. I like how more serious this version sounds.
ENG: This is your reason! Defend yourself! 
JP: No arguing! Let’s go!
I’ll just point this out because Trevor says “問答無用”, and when I searched it to double check if it had any other meaning, I discovered that yes, it does. It’s a porn genre, apparently. Just wanted to share.
But yeah, the English version is funnier this time :P
ENG: For now, hold the image of Isaac in your mind. Think only of defeating him. Hector... Hunt him down. And when you have him, show him no mercy.
JP: I want you to concentrate on defeating him now. I’m depending on you, Hector. Make sure you catch up with him.
Uh... well, the two versions say the same thing, but Trevor’s tone feels weird to me. I can’t quite put my finger on it, so I’ll just leave this here. In general, I never understood why he’s taking Isaac so personally.
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The Infinite Corridor became the Corridor of the Inferno, wow! Interestingly, the first part of the Japanese name, “無間”, means “ceaseless”, but is also associated to the Buddhist Avici Hell (“無間地獄”), or Hell of Uninterrupted Suffering. Welp.
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Nothing to report in the Stabbing scene, as much as I wish it was, except that listening to it in Japanese is an experience that needs to be had. this is the point where cod officially becomes an animated yaoi audio drama
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Before Dracula’s Castle
I just wanted to show how much better the dialogue flows in Japanese :P
ENG: “I know not what happened to you in the past, but there is no time now for regret. We must try to cleanse the castle and dispel the vile curse...”
“If the curse from demonic power, I may be able to find the source! Indeed, I must, for this is something only I can do.”
JP: “I don't know what happened, but there’s no time to regret it. At the very least, we have to stop the curse somehow...”
“If the source of the curse is magical power, I might be able to do something about it. No, it’s something that only I can do. ”
Is this your idea of flirting, guys? :P
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Rematch against Isaac
Much like the first cutscene, this one is juicier than the previous ones when it comes to dialogue changes. I don’t know why it’s Isaac in particular who changed so much in translation.
ENG: You want me to regain my powers. Now I see why. I fell right into your plot... After 3 years of peace, I'd lost my edge.
JP: You must feel good about yourself, don’t you? I fell right for your scheme. You’ve fallen so low... and so did I.
Finally it’s Hector’s turn to have a completely different, intriguing line. In English, there’s almost an undertone of... respect, for how Isaac played him like a fiddle? In Japanese, Hector sounds more biting (and tbf Isaac is even more of a little shit here lol, he’s like “Thank you so much for resurrecting the castle <3″) and much more disappointed in himself. No reference to his powers and how he was rusty: he doesn’t care about Isaac’s plot, he cares about the guilt he’s feeling. Then you remember how he was ready to die in the ending, and well...
The last line is “落ちぶれたものだ、この俺もな”. “落ちぶれる” means “to come down in the world; to fall low; to be ruined; to be reduced to poverty; to fall on hard times​”, or "a person's social status and standard of living deteriorate, and they become miserable”. Very... interesting choice of word, to say the least.
ENG: And I've sharpened mine. I've been waiting quite a long time to plot my revenge. Not only did my Lord die because of you -- you stripped me of my pride, my home. Now I shall make you suffer as I suffered. You shall die a most painful, gruesome death!
JP: It's merely an entertainment to me. Three years ago, you defeated me. And then I lost my Lord Dracula... my pride, a place to return to... Everything, yes, you took everything away from me. Have a taste of the same hellish torment and die in despair!
Obviously Isaac’s response differs, but that’s not the main point.
His final words hurt. “Have a taste of the same hell” should be the anthem of every tragic villain lashing out. Both versions are good, but I feel the Japanese one really points out how much Isaac suffered because of Hector’s actions: notice especially how “I plotted my revenge for a long time” (emphasizing Isaac’s role as the villain of the story) was replaced with “I was defeated by you three years ago”, originally in passive (emphasizing Isaac being a victim).
I wish they kept his scream at the beginning of the boss fight, though. That’s just raw :(
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Not much to say about the “Zead is Death” scene, although TIL that in Japanese “black curtain” is a way to say “mastermind”. A bit of a different nuance, Zead doesn’t say “Devil Forgemasters alone are suffused in my master's magic” but “Devil Forgemasters are always [constantly] with my master's magic”. Hector calls Death “close associate” (“側近”). Death doesn’t say that Hector was the favorite but Isaac will do - thank you, I think my man was humilated enough :V
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Dracula
For some reason, this cutscene feels like a bit of a downgrade in Japanese. For example, Dracula doesn’t greet Hector calling him “the traitor”, shame.
ENG: Why did you unleash your hatred upon the humans? When you began slaughtering them indiscriminately, I had no choice but to disobey you.
JP: Three years ago, when you showed your hatred for humans... I just couldn't allow it.
The Japanese version is vaguer, both in describing Dracula’s genocide and Hector’s reaction.
ENG: You side against me... for the sake of humans? Humans are not worth the air they breathe. I was simply cleansing the world.
JP: Is that so. But you must have realized... Human beings don't even deserve to exist. That's the truth of the world.
“Humans aren’t worth the air they breathe” deserved to be translated faithfully :(
ENG: The powerful always judge the weak. The humans made their judgment of me, as well. Thus I sentenced them... to extinction. Sympathy is merely a form of weakness. You betrayed me, Hector... And for that, the punishment is death.
JP: The powerful have the right [to judge humans]. The humans who destroyed me with their power... Yes, as if they were brandishing justice. But now I grow tired of this nonsense. Traitor... I'll make you pay the price of what you did three years ago.
See what I mean? It doesn’t feel the same. “Sympathy is merely a form of weakness” could have been kept.
(Dracula uses watashi for himself but speaks plainly. Hector doesn’t speak with respect to Dracula, but he still calls him anata.)
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Dracula’s death
To compensate for how flaccid the previous cutscene was, Hector tells Dracula “rest in peace and perish” (“安心して、滅びるがいい”), and I think that is the rawest thing he has ever said in the Japanese version.
ENG: The struggle has ended. I feel I can let go now, and die in peace.
JP: It's all over. Am I going to die like this? That wouldn’t be bad...
For some reason the Japanese version feels sadder, like Hector just accepted in that moment that it would be better to die :(
(“That wouldn’t be bad” gets echoed at the very end, when Hector accepts to live with Julia, and that is enough to mend my heart lmao)
ENG: You see through it all, don't you?
JP: I'm no match for you, am I?
Okay this is cute lol
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And that’s it! The last two cutscenes are very straightforward.
This was very fun to translate :D overall, I prefer the Japanese script in its changes, although the English script is iconic in its hamminess lmao. If the Japanese version is the translation as I think, they did an excellent job, and I appreciate how they adapted Hector and especially Isaac.
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darkwolfgoddess · 5 months
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Hey, everyone!
So, FNAF movie's finally out, huh? After the original plan to go watch it on 31th October cos HALLOWEEN was ruined by Corona, I went to watch it this week. And seeing it after waiting for months, I'd say it was worth it. Was it the best movie I've ever seen? No. Where were some flaws that could've been easily fixed with a better script. But you know what? The movie's still awesome and I get why fans went crazy for it.
Similarly to Paw Patrol movie review I did some years ago, here are some of my thoughts put together more clearly:
My goodness, the animatronics looked PHENOMENAL
Mike and Abby's story is honestly a tragedy if you think about it: Garrett got kidnapped when Mike was still a kid and Abby was most likely meant to be the "replacement kid" his parents decided to have as a way to "make up" for what happened. But when Abby didn't manage to "fill" that hole, their father killed himself, adding even more to the tragedy that happened.
Adding onto that, Abby's "odd" behavior of not talking to anyone, being mean to Mike and drawing all day is definetly a coping mechanism. Because while her parents provide her with food, a room, art supplies etc, they don't engage with her enough. As such, she's learned not to trust her older brother, doesn't engage with others likely due to distrust and fear and buries her sadness and anger into her drawings(kinda like me during high school due to bullying hehehe....moving on). While she still loves her older brother, provided by the drawings around her room, she prefers to be distant because that's how her family has been, so she is distant as well cos she's learned that's how she's safe.
This could also be the reason Abby liked the animatronics so much and called them her friends: they were nice to her and engaged with her in her games.
Mike was also a good character. He's really, REALLY trying to take care of his sister, but is also stuck in the past trying so hard to figure out what happened that he unwillingly neglects his sister, who needs him to be there, but he doesn't understand it. I'm glad he understood his mistakes in the end and became more apparent in Abby's life. While some writing choices in his arc were a bit weird(such as inviting Aunt Jane to babysit Abby while he could've maybe ringed up someone else knowing Abby doesn't like Jane, as well as accepting giving Abby to the animatronics in exchange for being killed so he can stay with Garrett in the afterlife or something(like, dude, didn't you realize Golden Freddy kid was manipulating with you?!)), it was still a satisfying arc and I'm glad he and Abby are on better terms now.
Fort scene was honestly adorable and, in my opinion, introduced more tragedy to the whole possessed animatronic situation: in FNAF games there's more focus in the horror and anxiety of animatronics finding a way to you and stuffing you in a deadly springlock suit. But in here we get to see a more sad note to it. Yeah, kid soul possessed animatronics are creepy, but at the same time they're still KIDS. While under Afton's control and pissed about their situation so much they murder people, they still retain their playful side and want to do fun things. And so when Abby came to Freddy's and wanted to build a fort, they got to be kids again. Yeah, they still planned on offing her, but you get the point.
Speaking of kids, those child actors, especially the blonde boy, did a PHENOMENAL job. If anyone who worked on the movie production sees this, please buy them the biggest sundaes possible.
Before this movie came out I had zero idea who Matthew Hillard was. And honestly I feel sad about it cos he also did a PHENOMENAL job. Upon seeing the first trailer the way the office scene played out with him sitting there, hands under his chin, it already gave me bad vibes. And later on when he's at the pizzeria and removes his mask, the way he tried to make Afton look with those wide, crazed eyes and that small smirk was so good.
The "I always come back" scene was FINE. Like, had Afton said anything else, the fans would've been disappointed.
Also, maybe Afton knows something we don't? With the second movie coming, we could get more info about his backstory and learn something new. ALSO ALSO, it was a genuine threat. That even if Spring Bonnie suit gets destroyed, he'll never stop trying to find ways to return.
Vanessa was another good character. Yeah, maybe a bit too secretive at times which, as said before, could've been fixed with a better writing, but still good. The idea of her being Afton's daughter was, in my opinion, quite a surprise, but welcomed nonetheless. If you think about it, her being Afton's daughter as well as an police officer helps Afton cover up anything that could lead the law to him. And since he's an asshole of a "father" who abuses and shelters her(Headcanon that he's threatened her with Torture Freddy and/or exposing her as his daughter and a second hand at covering up murders every day since the Original Kid Murders), she doesn't really have anything she can do.
Not that many scares? Honestly not such a big problem people make it up to be. FNAF mostly relies on the terrifying envinorment and jumpscares for the horror. Balloon Boy was still a bastard though and I swear I'll burn him one day and not feel sorry about it.
And I guess that's everything. So, in final conclusion, the FNAF movie is FINE. Yeah, some rough edges could've smoothed out a bit more, but otherwise had a pretty well thought out plot, cool animatronics and a satisfying ending. It's clear they wanted to tell a different story we've grown used to from the video games and comics, which isn't bad cos let's be honest, had it been more similar to the video games, people would've complained about it being "too similar". Will definetly be an experience FNAF fans won't ever forget.
Aaaand that's all. Hope you enjoyed and if you've read the whole thing though, congrats! See you on the flipside!
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yulgurr · 6 months
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a random thing i actually want to complete so it can collect dust in my folder afterwards!
so there was that fe heroes oc Astrid and she has 5 brothers (4 older brothers that are quadruplets and 1 younger; 2 of the quadruplets "went missing") and I wanted to doodle all currently present brothers and then never touch them again (I drew 2 of them before once)
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and a lore dump
Currently present brothers are:
The oldest of (ex)quadruplets Aster. He's a musician and plays piano. He also can fix string instruments and that's needed for the plot point when Elm shatters Audun's violin. Aster is also Audun's future partner.
The third of the (ex)quadruplets Torsten. Their father is minister of finances and Torsten is to inherit his father's title. He is a sweet guy but his standard face expression is just >:( this. He is closer to Astrid than the other two, but he's not an overprotective type (he may seem like one, but he's not).
And the youngest Brynjar, pegasi actually like him and he'll be a pegasus knight in the future. Pegasi bring him flowers and he always has some in his hair.
Pegasi like Brynjar because he inherited the blood of Geirskögul, which usually manifests in women of their family.
Geirskögul was a valkyrie from Jötunheimr, who came to Askr long long time ago to assist her friend Líf to establish a kingdom, and she liked it there so she brought her beloved pegasi there too and decided to live in Askr. Geirskögul was a jotun and her pegasi were also big and strong, and with time they became popular among rich people of Askr, and that's how the pegasi knights training grounds were established. Geirskögul and her children would teach the pegasi knights, and a few generations later, long after Geirskögul's death, her children would raise and sell the pegasi.
With time, Geirskögul's descendants lost their jotun power and became like an average Midgard person, with an exception of hair color, tiny valkyrie wings on the head (not everyone has them though), and jotun blood. They did, however, find out that the jotun power can be reawakened, and for that the blood has to be spilled. Once the blood is spilled, the one with blood would gain a part of Geirskögul's power, which is basically just strength and a shield, preventing them from dying. In game terms, the less HP a unit has, the harder they are to kill + a broken Miracle with healing as a special. Also, the whole "jotun blood" thing is not known to general public. The blood mostly manifests in women, and extremely rare in men (Astrid's aunt has no jotun blood for example). Just having Geirskögul's blood makes it easier to approach and train pegasi, and Geirskögul claimed to actually understand what her pegasi were saying. The pegasi of that breed are not hostile towards men (like the Hoshido ones), instead before they are properly trained they are hostile towards everyone without the jotun blood.
Astrid is 1st in line to inherit the pegasi business, as she is the only daughter, and she was raised to honor the family history, even though some parts were not the brightest. She was allowed to assist the Order of Heroes on occasions, as her mother thought that actual fighting experience would teach Astrid to control the jotun blood better.
The 2 quadruplets (that later went missing), after learning that their youngest possessed the jotun blood, wanted to research it and "make it accessible for everyone" but their research was a bit unethical and they ended up kidnapping both young Astrid and Brynjar, but luckily were both caught before they could do anything. They were then disowned and banished, but Astrid's parents covered it as "went missing". No one knows where they are now.
oh wow thats a lot but i really wanted to talk about all that. if you read to this point, thank you you are so cool! if you noticed any mistakes then in my defence english isn't my first language haha
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freakshowrefugee · 1 year
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I be venting about B3. Again.
The camera tracking in Bayo 3 is HORRENDOUS bro. I didn't fully grasp just how bad things are until I played some Bayo 1 to remember the Good Times™️. And bear in mind that the camera on the Switch version of Bayo 1 is objectively worse than the previous versions (had it bug out on me during the first phase of the second Jeanne fight) so... yikes. Even outside of the combat the camera in 3 is... wrong. Again it feels more Astral Chain than Bayo 1 & 2, which to me is an objective downgrade because the camera in Astral Chain was bad on multiple levels (too close to the character, no stable tracking of the enemies OR the player character, general inconsistency).
Enemies can hit you DURING CUTSCENES in Bayo 3 and BEFORE YOU CAN HIT THEM. The boar enemy is a perfect example for cutscene damage and most large enemies apply for the second point while they are forming out of jelly. Like, really?
The "kaiju battle" segments play like pulling teeth. Controls are painfully sluggish and attacks are poorly designed—RNG decides how the fight goes, which is very frustrating.
While I was playing Bayo 1 I realized that 3 has by far the most inconsistencies when it comes to style. And with how important the style is to a game and character like Bayonetta, once you see it you are never able to unsee it. Visual design has always been one of Bayonetta's greatest strengths and I have no idea what possessed PG to make the design decisions they made... actually, that's a fucking lie. I think Bayonetta 3 is a Frankenstein monster of various scrapped ideas and designs (people already know the Scalebound thing, but I think PG really wanted to make Astral Chain 2 but they couldn't because Astral Chain was mid at best and its sales and staying power reflect that. Like, I had a but of fun with Astral Chain, don't get me wrong—the 3 times I played it. Does it compare to my years of playing Bayo? Fuck no. As for the Scalebound thing... feels like there's a reason why it got canned, you know?) TLDR they really built Bayo 3 from the design trash can huh?
This is just a personal theory but I feel like PG purposefully kneecapped Bayo 3 in order to kill the franchise. The amount of character assassination (literal and figurative) that happened in 3 is mind-boggling. Maybe they are just misguided, I don't know, but I just have this gut feeling that it is more than just that. 2 still held the spirit of Bayo 1 in spite of some shitty gameplay design, but 3 just feels... hollow. I think this will be obvious to anyone who's first experience with the franchise was the original, pre-Nintendo release (XBOX/PS3). I don't know why they would do it. Maybe they thought that Bayo's presence was casting a shadow on their other endeavors. Whatever it is, it feels like we're living the worst time-line.
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FNaF AU
I am currently somehow back in my FNaF phase, so I decided to try to write an AU for it. I guess this is more of an experiment, to see if I can write something like that. This does partially follow the lore of the games, but not completely, I guess it wouldn't be an AU if it did.
Chapter 1 Beginning
The dim light of the workshop revealed several dismantled or unfinished animatronics, some of them nothing more than endoskeleton prototypes. “Why the hell aren’t you working?” Michael growled and looked into the empty plastic eyes of his newest creation, a brown bunny with a black hat and a light blue bowtie. Michael stood up and looked at the lifeless robot, he sighed, maybe it was for the best that the bunny animatronic didn’t work. After all, the golden bunny has always been his father’s favorite animatronic. It’s been a few months now that he planned to open his own pizzeria, it was after he got out from his fathers ‘circus’… after the scooper. He gritted his teeth at the thought of that thing. “You won’t die.” The words of his sister haunted him, but she was right, he was alive, or at least not dead, his body rotted, and parts of him are still mechanical, parts that the weird clown lost… His right Hand, the bone was completely replaced with a wire-claw, so was his foot. Michaels neck and his teeth were also not really human anymore. Now he had those pointy robot teeth, he had to be careful when speaking, because if he opens his mouth too wide they were clearly visible. He was sure that he has some more robot parts, but he really doesn’t have much feeling in his body anymore, well he still could feel pain to some extent, but definitely less then when he was ‘normal’. Interestingly the metal parts he was aware of didn’t hurt, so there was no reason why parts that are unknown to him should hurt. He saw his reflection on a shiny piece of metal, his skin purple underneath his make-up, his one empty eye, the other one an unnatural purple as well. He took the gloves from his hand and ran his ‘fingers’ over his neck, he grimaced when he looked at the point where his skin was supposed to be, now there was just metal. “I’m lucky that I don’t have to eat anymore, this would be difficult.” He murmured, Michael still hasn’t gotten used to his new ‘life’. He took a last glance at the bunny and then gave up for the day “I guess I’ll use you for spare parts or something…” He put his glove back on, wrapped his scarf around his neck and opened the door. “I wonder if Leon sees me through the cameras right now.” Leon was his nightguard, though his stage animatronics had a nightmode and are, not possessed, as far as he knew, he still wanted to have someone look over the place at night. Of course, Michael learned from his experiences as nightguard and has doors that won’t run out of power, so Leon was safe, even if his robots would get out of control. He waved at the camera walked past the corridors and stage he had three animatronics at this point, a kangaroo named Jumper, a fennec fox called spotty and a flamingo with the name Pinky, he was planning more animatronics, another one he was working on was a racoon, but building him would take some more time. The animatronics were still on their stage, no one wandered around or tried to attack him “Feels weird to wander around without the risk of getting killed by haunted robots.” Michael said to Jumper, the kangaroo didn’t react, neither did one of the others, they were just machines, nothing more. Michael remembers Freddy, Chica, Bonnie and Foxy, if one of them were here, he definitely would run out the pizzeria, instead of normally walking. “I wonder what happened to them…” he thought and left the pizzeria.
Back at home, Michael turned on the tv, it’s not like he had to sleep much, so he spends most of his nights working in his workshop in the pizzeria or watching tv. After a while he went to the bathroom and washed off the make-up which made him look, at least a bit, like a normal person. He brushed the strands of his brown hair, that covered his one missing eye, away and once again saw the mess those robots, and his sister, made of him. “They could put me in a horror attraction, and I would fit right in.” he smiled dryly and kept washing of the make-up. Tomorrow is another day…
Thank you for reading chapter one
Sorry if my writing style is bad or something, I usually don't write stories in English. If you find spelling or grammar mistakes, please tell me and I'll fix them. I don't know if or how long I will continue this, at this point I have written three chapters. I have fun writing this, maybe you have fun reading this too.
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Sup, this isn't really an idea, but more of an explanation of how the possession worked in my idea list. I thought you might be interested in reading it!
Prelude: How the possession my outlines worked
I have noticed that a lot of people are a bit confused on how the possession here works, so I wanted to clarify it with this little addendum of sorts. My version would have Vanessa initally black out occasionally for the first month or so after her initial possession. They would happen more specifically when she has her therapy visits. This is also where GlitchTrap/Afton attempts to rewrite her childhood memories to include an abusive father figure (presumably like him) to try and make her more obedient.
This is contrary to Vanessa's actual childhood, which was fairly standard and had 2 normal loving parents. It should be noted that in this universe they died in a car crash the year before the events of Help Wanted. All the therapists would play along as a way to diagnose her (or something idk) before eventually telling her that her memories don't line up with what her patient report sheet (or whatever they use) says about her childhood.
This gets rid of all the work Glitchtrap puts in and Vanessa original memories come back the overwhelming shock of which causes her to freeze up, and during this time she blacks out and Glitchtrap takes control of her and kills the therapist. He would then get her back to her apartment where she would regain consciousness and be none the wiser to her therapists fate. Controlling Vanessa directly takes a lot of energy from Glitchtrap and tires him out since he isn't intended to "control" humans just be manipulative. This is why he can't take direct control of Vanessa and has to resort to attempting to mentally gaslight her.
This happens 5 times before Glitchtrap says "screw this" and decides to create Vanny. He doesn't really want to do this, as he will be creating a different persona. This persona will be "programmed" to be subservient to him. However there is always a risk that since they are effectively their own person, this seperate personality can decide to not listen to the instructions correctly or do them their own way. They can also have their own goals that conflict with Glitchtrap's (something that you see in idea 6). He doesn't see any other way however, and is getting impatient and wants to start being evil again quickly. So he creates Vanny out of his own agony power thing and some of Vanessa's emotions. He uses ones that are still hurting from her parents death, duplicates and then corrupts them beyond all recognition.
Vanny is "made" (for lack of a better word) to control things directly, unlike glitchtrap. As such, the experience is now completely different. At her last therapist visit, Vanessa is forced to watch herself kill someone for the first time, starting off the worst 6 months of her life.
I hope that cleared up some confusion. If it didn't, let me know!
so you think vanessa is both patients? i always thought it could be a new character for the dlc, but split personality could be fun to play around with, its also a popular idea that i dont mind getting behind.
also the memory thing kinda helps with whatever confusing crap the were doing with those dvd, calling her dad bill- wth was that mess.
with how little the game gives you youre kinda forced to make your own law, i dont mind i have fun reading
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everythinginbooks · 2 years
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July: reads and ratings
The month of July has been a slow one for me, and once again I have come into possession of more books than what I read this month. I definitely liked the books I read, and so this post will encapsulate my thoughts on each book.
All of my July reads were fantasy.
Reads and ratings is a way for me to express my feelings about the books I've come to read, and at the same time give you guys (whoever reads this) motivation to read some of these.
These reviews may contain spoilers.
As always check trigger warnings and goodreads for more information.
Cinderella Is Dead by Kalynn Bayron (2020)
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This book was recommended to me by a close friend, and when I finished my last June read, I asked her which book on my unread list I should begin. The one she chose was Cinderella Is Dead.
I personally liked this book, though it started off a bit slow for me, I eventually grew entised by the developments in the story, though they were a little predictable. To me it is not a book which stands out too much in my memory, as I only remember the main character's name. The worldbuilding was quite odd, as far as I remember, and I would've loved to know more about where it is this story takes place. The main character, Sophia Grimmins, was alright, she did rub me the wrong way a few times, but she seemed human, and I enjoyed reading about her struggles. I liked the pun the author made on her surname, and ode to the original authors of Cinderella.
I believe the problems that arose within the story could've been fixed more satisfyingly if this was written as a longer book series. It's hard to overthrow a king AND become more emotionally mature in 300 pages.
To me, this book was 3/5 stars.
Rebel Skies by Ann Sei Lin (2022)
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This one brought my spirits up after reading the first one, and i enjoyed it more than I thought I would. I came into possession of it due to the fact that I liked the cover and decided to buy it. It isn't that popular, but I hope some of you will give this one a try.
Set in a world with flying cities, giant paper spirits and crafters who can control paper, Kurara is but one person in a giant world she hopes to see. Being a crafter, a person who can control paper at will, she has to hide her gift as to not get drafted into a war, or becoming a source of entertainment to the mad scientist princess.
This book is inspired by ghibli, and I could certainly see it while reading it. The world was colourful and the characters were fun, though many brutal things happen on Kurara's journey. I quite enjoyed seeing the story come together and read about this interesting magic system and how some of our main character's memories are missing.
I've decided to rate this 3/5 stars.
Blood of Elves by Andrzej Sapkowski (1994)
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You may have heard of the hit fantasy series The Witcher on Netflix, well, this is the book series it was inspired by. I must say I quite enjoy the world of The Witcher, both as a TV-show and as a game, having played Witcher 3: The Wild Hunt myself.
This first book predominantly follows Geralt of Rivia (the man on the GIF) and Princess Cirilla of Cintra (the girl on the GIF) and their story after they met, which can be linked back to season 2 of the show, in case you're wondering. I really loved how Ciri and Geralt's father-daughter type banter came to light in this book, as well as how Ciri handles her adolescence and her powers. Geralt, as always, is still a quiet brooding guy with incredible skills when it comes to fighting and killing monsters. Whenever he succeeded at his current objective I found myself cheering and remembering the "quest complete" sound effect from the game.
Although the book was mostly dialogue, I quite enjoyed it and could still vividly picture the world they were in. There were a few details where I thought, this book was definitely written by a man, but it didn't hinder my enjoyment of it too much.
I've rated this book 4/5 stars.
Caraval by Stephanie Garber (2016)
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Caraval found me while I was touring around Texas with my family this summer. It was the fun story I needed while boiling in 45°c weather for almost the entire month.
Scarlett was an interesting character to follow in this fantastical world, as she's more laid back and empathetic towards others, as well as being filled with fear for most of the book. She reminded me quite a bit of myself at times.
Julian and Scarlett's relationship was incredibly intruiging to read about, and I was convinced that Julian was Legend since the very beginning (I still haven't read the second and third books, so who knows). Tella was really interesting too, though I found myself disliking her for most of the book due to her personality and actions. I'm still not quite sure what I make of her, though I no longer dislike her.
The magic was incredibly interesting, and the book was really well planned and written, which made me have a good experience while reading it.
I rate this 3/5 stars.
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bezdddakota · 3 years
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My ps4 controllers wouldn’t sync up and I had already went through the 5 stages of grit before I realized I just needed to unplug the console for 3 minutes.
I was so ready to fully hate The Last Of Us 2 and work on my letter to Naughty Dog because ever since I bought that game, my ps4 hasn’t been acting right. 
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urwelcomeforthis · 3 years
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Alex’s tattoo shows up the day after she punches Marcus Hinkle.
He had been picking on Kara in the hallway, dangling her math book above her head, taking advantage of his summer growth spurt.
Kara still doesn’t know what possessed Alex – Marcus Hinkle had been a thorn in her side since she had landed on Earth and started school a year ago, but whatever the reason, today was the day Alex couldn’t take anymore.
Eliza had been furious. Jeremiah had been (not so) silently proud.
Kara didn’t know what she had felt, really. Especially not when she asked Alex why, and the older girl had just shrugged and said “You’re my sister. It’s what we do.”
Up until this point being sisters meant fights in the hallway over the bathroom and ignoring each other at the dinner table.
Apparently, things were changing.
Kara is just waking up when she hears Alex’s hushed “What the hell?”
“What is it?” She asks, groggily sitting up and wiping at the sleep in her eyes.
Her sister is holding her forearm up, frantically scrubbing at a spot right in the middle, her eyes frantic.
“I don’t…. I don’t know! It’s like a tattoo but I didn’t get a tattoo! Fuck, Mom is going to kill me.” Alex sounds panicked as she continues scrubbing at the spot, and Kara feels her heartbeat speed up.
“You had a tattoo just appear on your skin?” Kara asks slowly, her mind suddenly far away on a planet that doesn’t exist anymore, in a culture she had been forced to leave behind.
Alex stops scrubbing and looks at Kara with a piercing gaze. “Yeah. It’s some funny symbol too, like the way you used to write before you learned English. Did you do this to me?”
Alex leaps off the bed and crosses the room in two quick strides, arm held out like an accusation.
Kara shrinks in on herself a little but nods. “I think so. I didn’t know it was possible here, but well, on Krypton when your soul mate reveals themselves, a tattoo linking you appears. I should have one too, somewhere, if you do.”
Alex stops dead in her tracks, her eyes wide. “Soul mates? But we’re sisters! That’s so gross!”
Jumping up from the bed, hands held up in surrender Kara hastens to explain further. “No! Not like that, I promise! Back home, people had different kinds of soul mates. Sometimes it was the romantic kind like you talk about here on Earth, but other times it could just be a compatible soul, someone who was meant to be a part of you.”
Alex still looks wary, if not relieved, as she tentatively holds out her arm. “So, what does this mean? What kind of soul mates are we?”
Stepping forward Kara delicately traces the symbols on Alex’s forearm. “It literally means “sister of the soul.” Je shesur. The symbol after it is unique, the way we would know we were linked. If this had happened on Krypton it would mean we were soul sisters. Not from the same parents but family just the same.”
Alex nods. “And here on Earth? What does it mean here?”
“The same thing. At least that’s what it means to me.” Kara refuses to meet Alex’s eyes, not sure she wants to see what waits for her there.
There’s a long minute of silence after Alex takes her arm back. The clearing of her throat brings Kara’s eyes up from their place on the ground.
“Where’s yours?” Alex asks, eyes burning with curiosity.
Kara shrugs. “I don’t know. It’s not on my arms like yours is. It must be hidden. Can you look on my back?”
“Sure.” Alex nods. “Lift up your shirt.”
Kara turns and tugs her shirt up and over her head. It takes a moment, but she hears her sister gasp followed by the feel of fingertips against her left shoulder blade.
“It’s the same as mine.” Alex says reverently, and Kara closes her eyes against the emotion welling up there.
Who would have thought she would get to have this piece of home?
“So, I guess I’m stuck with you. For like, ever, huh?” Alex smiles once Kara has turned back around.
Kara grins back. “Yeah, I guess so.”
Alex shrugs. “Could be worse. But you have to tell Mom about this, because she’ll never believe me, and she is going to be pissed that I have a tattoo.”
“Sure, I can tell Mom.” Kara grins, a piece of her heart settling in place. She hasn’t felt at home on Earth, not really, but at this moment she feels like it isn’t all that bad.
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The next person to get a tattoo is, interestingly enough, James.
It doesn’t come when they’re dating, or whatever it was that they were doing, no.
It comes after he has revealed himself to be Guardian, and he and Kara have the biggest fight of their friendship.
Kara wakes up the morning after tired, groggy, and more than a little cranky. Its as she’s stripping down to get in the shower that she notices it – the Kryptonese scrawled along the inside of her right bicep.
Throniv Shesur. Protector of the soul.
Kara heaves a deep, deep, sigh and grabs her phone.
She meets James at the DEO, both tentative around each other after the yelling match of the day before.
“So. I woke up with a tattoo. Kryptonese. Any idea what that’s about?” James looks smug, like he’s won some kind of battle with Kara and god, at that moment she wishes they were in the training room and she could just punch him.
“Yeah. I did too. It means “protector of the soul.” She crosses her arms against her chest, desperately trying to hold onto her anger from yesterday but the wide grin on James’ face is making it hard.
“I know. I asked Clark first thing since I figured you’re still pissed at me. He was a little surprised, but he translated it for me.”
“Where’s it at?” Kara asks, still pretending to be upset but truthfully it was hard given the glaring message from home telling her that James was meant to be Guardian. That they were meant to protect each other. Protect others together.
“I’ll show you mine if you show me yours.” James says with a waggle of his eyebrows and that’s what finally breaks Kara, a laugh ringing out across the room.
It wasn’t who she expected to have a tattoo, not in this way at least, but if it had to be anyone, she’s glad it’s James.
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Mon-El doesn’t get a tattoo. Kara wishes she were more disappointed.
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The last person to get a tattoo is someone Kara had desperately hoped both would and would not get a tattoo.
For a long time, she feared what that tattoo would be, if it were to happen. She feared having to explain it, having to explain herself.
She had checked with Clark a few times, when paranoia would get the better of her.
No, he always told her. Lex did not have a tattoo. They were enemies, yes, but it hadn’t been decided by destiny or fate. It just was.
That mollified Kara because she couldn’t stand it if she and Lena were to become Clark and Lex. She would fight against it, fight against fate to keep it from happening.
And then, well. It kind of happens anyways.
They aren’t enemies, not really. Lena just hates Kara and aims a few Kryptonite cannons at her and tries to mind control the entire planet, but really everyone is allowed a brief lapse of their sensibility, right?
And what matters is she came around, in the end.
It did take time, however, for them to build back to what they once had. It was different now, but in the way that things once broken and fixed usually are.
It was better, if anything.
They were back to shared lunches and dinners, quick breakfasts and coffee breaks. They were back to game nights as partners and movie nights as friends, and the occasional sleepovers as best friends.
Things were finally back to normal, so of course Kara had to go and absolutely, irrevocably, mess it up.
It was Alex’s fault, really.
If she hadn’t said anything, if she hadn’t asked Kara what was up between her and Lena lately, Kara probably never would have stopped to think about it.
She never would have stopped to think about the way her heart sped up when Lena entered a room, or the way her palms got sweaty when they hugged, or the way she just could not stop staring at Lena when she laughed at game nights.
But now she had thought of it and had come to the very scary conclusion that she was in love with her best friend.
Her best friend who didn’t have a tattoo.
She would, after all this time, have a tattoo, the tattoo, if they were meant to be together, right?
Kara mulls it over for weeks. It haunts her. She asks Lena about tattoos, and if she has any.
She learns that yes, in fact Lena does have tattoos and boy howdy one of them is on her lower back and it is seared into the back of her eyes now that she has seen it.
But she doesn’t have any kryptonian tattoos, which is really what Kara was aiming for.
Much like it was Alex’s fault that Kara even realized she was in love, it’s also Alex who reminds Kara of one important detail.
“Well I didn’t get my tattoo until after I punched what’s his face. Maybe you have to tell Lena how you feel and then she’ll get the tattoo.”
Kara feels dumb struck, right there on her own couch, because of course, Alex is right.
The tattoos always come after the person has already revealed themselves.
Then of course comes the true fear: what if she tells Lena and she still doesn’t get a tattoo?
That’s the question she’s mulling over the next night as she and Lena sit on her couch watching some documentary that had been put on Netflix.
Lena looks beautiful, face bare of makeup, hair piled on top of her head in a messy bun, glasses slipping down her nose.
She’s eating a piece of pizza, a rare treat after a long week of work, and Kara decides that it doesn’t matter if Lena doesn’t get a tattoo.
She’s hopelessly, desperately in love with the woman and she can’t let a tattoo that may or may not come dictate her life.
“I’m in love with you, you know.” Kara blurts out, like this isn’t a life changing moment, like it’s the easiest thing in the world to say. (It is.)
Lena chokes a little on the bite she was swallowing, her hand coming up to her chest as she sets down the slice.
“Excuse me?”
Kara laughs. She’s never felt more free than in this moment. “I’m in love with you. I just thought you should know.”
Lena looks at her, shock written all over her face. “Oh. I guess that’s good.”
“Just good?” Kara nudges Lena’s thigh with her knee.
Lena shakes her head. “I mean it’s more than good, considering I’m in love with you too.”
“Yeah?” Kara could float up to the moon, she thinks.
Lena smiles, nose crinkled. “Yeah.”
It’s the next morning that Lena calls and asks if Kara can stop by. She has this tattoo she didn’t have yesterday, right on her ribcage, and it looks like it’s Kryptonian.
Kara frantically searches her own body, finding the script on her hip, on the left side.
Zhao Shesur. Love of the soul.
It took them five years to get to this point, but Kara knows, this moment was more than worth the wait.
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buckyownsmylife · 3 years
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I’ve Told You Now - Bucky Barnes smut
The one where alpha!Bucky fucks you in front of the other avengers
Warnings: smut, a/b/o dynamics, public sex, oral (f), p in v, possessiveness
Word count: 2.3k
A/N: Thank you to my lovely @wakingbeauty​ for giving this a read for me! This is strictly the product of mine and @navybrat817​‘s belief that public sex should be more common in A/B/O dynamics, so there you have it 😊 Also, I used a prompt the sweet @jbreenr​ gave me ages ago for a headcanon and I asked to save it for this story since it made such perfect sense! Hope you guys like it! I might write more public sex A/B/O smut in the very near future!
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Bucky’s P.O.V.
Everyday was the same. I’d wake up and join the rest of the team for breakfast to find out that despite the fact that someone had saved me a seat, that same someone had thought of a new joke to make at my expense.
If I thought Tony’s nicknames were bad, this was a whole new level. It’s like she wanted to find all the little ways to annoy me, while still remaining mindful of my recovery process and triggers.
I’d never met an omega like that before. Back in my time, omegas were mostly prim and proper, almost shy around alphas, even if they were starting to show a little more skin and entertain the possibility of staying closer to us for longer periods of time.
I wasn’t used to someone who felt so comfortable with my intimidating aura, and the alpha in me definitely couldn’t grow used to seeing so much of her skin all the time. By now, I was sure she was doing it on purpose.
She knew how it affected me, she could smell it - every omega was able to identify when a nearby alpha was aroused. And I knew it turned her on in return. I was also biologically wired to sense that.
It was basically a game of who would break first. And I knew she thought she would win, but my resolve still wasn’t broken.
“Ah… What a lovely day. So full of possibilities… if you’re not a hundred years old,” she quickly added, throwing me a glance that had me rolling my eyes. “What do you say, grandpa? Feel like going out for a run?”
Who knows what I would have answered if she hadn’t decided to pull her hair up right at the second Wanda opened the window to look out into the field? The smile that had been on my face quickly dropped when I was hit with a heavy wave of her scent and my knees buckled as I tried to hold myself back from just jumping on top of her.
Unfortunately, because awareness was not something she seemed capable of having, she did not realize my struggle. “What’s wrong, old man? Can’t even keep up anymore?” The growl that escaped my chest at her joke was all the warning she needed to finally understand what was going on.
“I’ll show you what I can keep up.” I was on her in a second, my consciousness of our surroundings reduced to absolutely nothing. It was only her and me, and the way our lips moved as I guided her back to the couch, until we both fell on top of it.
“Is this what you wanted, huh?” I asked as I tore her shirt with a simple flick of my wrist. “Is this how you wanted it to happen? For me to lose all control and just take you right here?” All that left her was a garbled sound, her hands clawing at my back as I easily got rid of her jeans until they were nothing but scraps on the floor and then exposed her pussy to the tower’s living room.
“Fuck yes,” I growled, immediately leaning down to get a taste of her. Sweet and wet and mine, all mine. I had no idea where that possessive instinct had come from, but I would be crazy to ignore it - especially since it felt like I’d kill and die for her at that very second.
Her hips jerked up, instinctively searching for my tongue, but a breeze of clarity seemed to brush over her and make her sit up on her elbows, looking down at me. I knew what was running through her mind before she said it, and I wasn’t having any of it.
“You better lay back down and let me savor my meal,” I warned, knowing the rest of the team had gathered around to watch the show. I didn’t have to take my eyes off her debauched state to know it, but her gaze was on them, even if the rest of her body was still spread open for anyone to see, uncaring of the fact that we were being watched.
“You poked the beast, now you’ll entertain it,” Steve warned, shaking his head as if to scold us, but when I met his eyes, I could see the glint of desire in them. He wanted to be in my position, he wanted to have his own tongue shoved deep inside my girl’s pussy, and it only made me eat her more hungrily.
“Eyes on me, ‘mega,” I called out to her once I saw her eyes linger on Steve. “Let them watch, that’ll keep them away from you.” She groaned at the possessiveness in my words, but it was the sounds of someone who was relishing in it. And I was relishing in her juices.
“Fuck!” She cursed when I buried my tongue as far as it could go in her, something deep inside of me desperate to be drowning in her scent. “Should have gotten you mad before.”
The thought was amusing to me. Did she really think this was only the result of pent-up anger, and not months of desire and lust that had finally spilled from my weakened resolve?
“Well…” I started, pushing two fingers inside of her to scissor her open for me, although my scent had already made her body as prepared for an Alpha an Omega could get.
I was a bit larger than usual Alphas, though - courtesy of the serum - so I wanted to make sure she wouldn’t go through any pain whatsoever. “You keep me mad all the fucking time, kitten.”
Y/N’s P.O.V.
“With desire or anger, it doesn’t really care,” he continued, like it was any ordinary day and we were chatting in the living room, our usual teasing banter taking over the conversation, instead of him eating me out on the couch in front of all of our teammates while I was spread out for their eyes to take in.
“You’re always a tease to me, in one way or another.” His huge hands massaged the inside of my thighs as he finally lowered himself to suck on my nub again, making me instinctively buck my hips up in search of his tongue.
“Stay…” he ordered in his Alpha tone, and the whine that broke free from my chest was more animal than human now. The way he used his mouth was nothing short of sinful, licking me from ass to clit with an eagerness I had never expected the former Winter Soldier to have.
But I guess today I was discovering all of my fantasies about Bucky had been a bit misplaced. For one, I never thought he’d be the type of Alpha to take me in such a public environment.
In every dirty dream I’d had, Bucky was far too possessive to allow anyone to explore what was his - even if it was only visually - but what I’d come to learn was that while he was definitely dominating, there was a hint of exhibitionism in his craving.
He liked to have people see him break me into a million pieces only to glue me back together with a lick of his tongue. He liked that they were seeing his talent - and I had to admit, by what I saw in his friend’s stare, that they were also admiring me too.
And he got off on that. I didn’t expect it would make me get off too.
“Delicious,” he hummed when he finally pulled away from my cunt, having brought me to my release and licked it off of me. Still, an overwhelming amount of wetness covered the lower part of his face, prompting me to raise myself to my elbows and lick my own juices off of his lips, the omega in me begging to scent him as mine.
“You’re a nasty little bitch, aren’t you?” He chuckled once the surprise faded away, easily manhandling me onto my stomach, the sound of a zipper being opened denouncing that he had undressed.
“Keep fucking me and you’ll find out.” I heard him spitting behind me, a shiver running up my spine as I realized he was playing with himself while looking at me presenting for him.
“Oh, I’ll do much better than that.” That was all the warning I got before I felt the head of his member poking my entrance, slowly but surely sliding in until he had bottomed out.
My whines became intensified when he pulled me up by my hair, his free hand covering my breast to rub my nipple as he whispered, “I’m gonna claim you, sweetheart. You think you’re ready for that? Think you’ll be able to take it?”
I was quickly realizing I had severely underestimated the man inside of me, even if not to the extent he thought I had. I was not ready for that. I don’t think I ever would be, but fuck if I wasn’t gonna take it anyway.
Because it was so much better than I ever imagined it to be.
“No more playing hard-to-get,” Bucky continued, finally starting to move and immediately settling on a punishing pace. “No more teasing me with your short skirts and tempting scent. You’ll be mine now, ‘mega. Forever. How does that sound?”
God, I wanted him to do it. I wanted him to keep exercising this complete control over my body that he had so easily managed to take. His cock was stretching me in ways I’d never been stretched before, his inflated knot slamming against my opening with each thrust.
“Always mocking me… Am I too old for you now?” I shivered as he licked a stripe up my neck. I knew he wouldn’t actually bite me in front of everyone - a claiming ritual was a sacred ritual, even the most feral of Alphas respected the intimacy of that. But the way he was taunting me was all too arousing, I couldn’t deny it. “Tell me.”
His hand squeezed my hip, looking for an answer. I tried to open my mouth, but nothing came out. His palm slipped further down, finding my clit, and as two fingers rubbed my own juices, around it, I screamed.
“N-No!” Bucky chuckled against my neck, body continuing his onslaught against mine as he nuzzled my scent gland. “Y-you’re not too old for me. Take me, take me please.” His coos were too provoking, making me cry out loud at the mocking sound.
“Aw, kitten…” His warm mouth breathed the next words against my ear, “I already did.” He turned my face towards his with his fingers tangled in my hair, engulfing my mouth with his.
“Alright.” A familiar voice spoke from not too far, startling me for a second as I once again was reminded that we were still very much surrounded by our team. “You two might just be the sexiest mates I’ve ever seen fuck.”
A growl escaped Bucky’s chest at hearing someone refer to us as mates for the first time, and I panted in need, desperate to cum, desperate for him. “Seen a lot of mates fuck, Romanoff?” He nibbled at my ear, hands roaming over my body as if to make it very clear to every person watching that they could look all they wanted, I was still his.
“You have no idea.” Looking over a bit to the side from where she was seated, there rested Sam’s almost limp body, a hand curled over his boner as his eyes never wavered from the place I was connected to the man behind me.
“Well, I know what I’m gonna think about tonight.” Something between a laugh and a moan escaped me, making Bucky growl again, hands pushing me back down onto the couch as his hips picked up the pace with which they’d ruin me.
To say I was soaked was the understatement of the century. I could feel it, running down my thighs, drenching the couch underneath me. I don’t know how we’d be able to use it again, but that was the least of my concerns in the moment.
“I am begging you to let me lick her pussy after you guys are done,” came Tony’s voice, and I knew Bucky would growl in his direction just from the way his fingers pressed tightly on the flesh of my hips. “Not that type of Alpha, sorry, I got it.”
I heard his footsteps retreating quickly, probably scared of what Bucky would do to him once we were done, but in the Alpha’s defense, Tony seemed to disappear from his mind the second he left the room, all of his senses directed to me and his goal of making me cum around his cock.
“C’mon, kitten,” he whispered, fingers easily locating my clit to play with me as he pulled me up to rest against his chest one more. “Come for me, milk me dry.” That was all I needed to give him what he wanted, and although I was anticipating to moan loudly as I creamed his knot, his mouth covered mine to swallow all of my sounds in a deep kiss, hands protectively covering me while pawing at my breasts at the same time.
“Steve,” Bucky called after he managed to catch his breath, having fallen on top of me on the couch once his knot popped open. “I won’t be able to work out with you today.”
I looked up as best as I could to find Steve already staring at us, although red from head to toe. “That’s understandable,” he spoke in a thick, rough voice that I barely recognized as his. “You seem to have worked out enough already.”
Bucky stopped running his nose against my cheek at his friend’s attempt at teasing, a slow smirk taking over his face as he joined me and stared at his friend. “Oh, I’m not nearly done,” he warned. “You’re more than welcome to join us for some cardio, if you want to.”
The soft smile Steve sent our way told us everything we needed to know about his plans for the evening.
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Everything Weird About Deltarune!
Spoiler Warning for Undertale and Both Chapters of Deltarune! Really! I Literally Go Through Everything I Can Remember About Them!
This is a long post so get comfortable. Also note that my brain doesn't process thoughts into words very well so some of these might not be worded in the best way. :)
Deltarune. The first teaser chapter was released on October 31, 2018, and it came out of nowhere. We've all gone through this, but I'll try and go through every single painstaking detail I can remember. Feel free to reblog and add/correct things.
The weirdness begins right off the bat. The title is an anagram of UNDERTALE. We all know Toby likes to use anagrams when he wants to indirectly tell us when things are related, so it's no surprise that when you go to download DELTARUNE, it warns you that the game is designed for people who have played UNDERTALE. You think, "Cool, so it's a sequel? Or maybe a prequel? A different perspective of UNDERTALE perhaps?" You were wrong; so terribly, terribly wrong! I'll elaborate on this later.
Before you download the application, the terms of service that you must agree to beforehand reads simply and plainly, "You accept everything that will happen from now on." This detail was kinda brushed off in the beginning, because, hey, it's Toby Fox. He does weird stuff all the time. But even in the first chapter, it's apparent that the concept of choice, or more accurately, the lack of it, is a very present theme in the game. I would like to remind you that Toby has announced that there will be one ending in the game. One. I'll elaborate on this later.
The program (as in, what the game is called in your files) is named SURVEY PROGRAM. Why not just call it Deltarune like it is when you download chapter two?
The game launches you, without a title screen, without any setting adjustment options, straight into a reference to the theme of the entire franchise: the lack of choice. A strange formless voice guides you through "making a vessel", with what we know now as a fountain in the background. You have the option to make some very disturbing choices in this character creator, such as making its favorite flavor "pain" or expressing your feelings about it with options such as "fear" and "disgust." You name your "creation," tell the formless voice your name (which is different from your vessel's name) and watch as said formless voice muses over your name at an agonizing pace. It thanks you for your time and tells you that your wonderful creation, (cue music cutout and background removal) will now be discarded. "No one can choose who they are in this world." The screen slowly turns white as the voice says, "Your... name... is..."
It gets weirder. The next scene appears from the whiteness and showcases Toriel calling "Kris" out of bed. Kris' area of the room is very bare in contrast to the other side, which we later discover is Asriel's.
It's Toriel. Why is Toriel here?
Kris is kind of an anagram of Frisk (the protagonist of UNDERTALE) but without the F. I highly doubt this is a coincidence.
Speaking with Noelle is the only reason you can proceed (see what i did there?) while finding a partner in the classroom. This means you can't go through the 1st chapter without knowing who she is. Is it because of the Snowgrave route?
Ralsei is just suspicious to me. There's no way he was just waiting in that castle his whole life alone without some mental toil. So either he's insane or he wasn't alone the whole time. What happened? Is it related to how he can close his eyes and see what Susie is going through when she's apart from the party? Was he just watching everything? Is he related to the formless voice?
Susie's icon is the only one without color in the Dark World.
Jevil's fight is more difficult than Sans'.
Your actions have little consequence in the first chapter. If you choose to go genocide, the only difference in the ending is being run out of the kingdom, and this doesn't carry over to the next chapter. Again, lack of choice, people.
If at the end of chapter one, you walk around town, it's mentioned (notably by Noelle) that you're usually not this talkative. If you go to the hospital and speak with the receptionist, they mention that you used to play the piano in the corner. If you decide to attempt to play the said piano, an out-of-key bash can be heard and the receptionist comments on how you used to play beautifully. If you try this in chapter two, the result is the same. All this is confirmation that Kris is acting noticeably weird.
When you leave the Dark World and walk around town, you can find Sans. He "pretends" to recognize you, and if you tell him you recognize him, he tells you it's funny, considering that you two have never met before. He winks. I'm pretty sure he knows that the player is there.
The mention of Papyrus in both games, but the purposeful lack of him. Like he's avoiding you.
If you go upstairs while inside Asgore's flower shop, there are flowers in glass cases resembling his SOUL collection in UNDERTALE. There's a red flower.
You can't enter the church.
The clock in the storage closet shows a different time than all the others in the school.
If you go all the way south in town and into the woods, the music stops and you come across a rusty, double door is in a hill covered in crass. It's locked. If you go this way in chapter two, however, you watch a cutscene where you and susie happen to find Monster Kid from UNDERTALE (or someone resembling them) and an owl kid in front of the door. The owl kid is pressuring Monster Kid to (presumably) break inside, telling them that they don't want to be a wimp like Kris. Does this imply that Kris is connected to this strange door somehow?
The ending. You know what I'm talking about.
Did Kris actually rip out the SOUL (I say "the" because I'm not entirely sure it's Kris') and knife because they wanted to eat the pie? Did they only eat the pie because Toriel caught them?
Why did they look at the player? Are they sick of being controlled? Is that why they freaked out after the Spamton fight? (later)
Anyway, now we're at chapter two.
DELTARUNE Chapter Two was released on September 17th, 2021. 17. Entry Number 17. Sound familiar?
Asriel's part of the room is different from the last chapter. I don't think this means anything sinister, but I think it means Kris notices different things about the room as the story progresses. My theory is that it will become more sinister in each chapter.
Ralsei getting super excited to see Susie and Kris after a day. As in he has separation anxiety and it breaks my heart. not anything suspicious but it makes me sad so it's on the list.
Kris and Susie's rooms. Ralsei REALLY doesn't want them to leave. Seriously get this boy a therapist. Or a stuffed animal. SOMETHING.
Kris having to gather everything from the storage closet so that people appear in the Dark World????? Why??????????????? They had to do the same thing for the computer lab too.
The golden door. I don't trust it.
How/why the heck did Noelle and Berdley go into the Computer Lab Dark World? I don't see either of them just walking into pulsing void doors without Susie.
Apparently the knight has been gone for a bit and can corrupt people's minds? The king in the first chapter doesn't seem like he can be redeemed but Queen just seems,,, not bad, but a little crazy. I wonder what happened.
Then again, name ONE person in this franchise without trauma.
Spamton.
Horror doesn't bother me. Spamton? Spamton bothers me.
SPAMTON. ENOUGH SAID.
A Kromer is a type of hat invented in the '70s. Nobody named Mike is associated with it, that I can find.
SPAMPTON. HOW DO I EVEN DESCRIBE IT.
HIS SONG IS THE ONLY ONE WITH WORDS.
The way he asks Kris is they want to be a heart on a chain their whole life. Like, dude, no wonder they were screaming after the fight.
WHERE DID THE YELLOW HEART COME FROM. YELLOW MEANS JUSTICE. WHY DOES JUSTICE APPLY.
Kris screaming after the fight and the player not being able to hear it. Don't you dare tell me that's just how the game is designed. There are sound effects characters make throughout the game. None that I can think of apply to Kris, apart from when they rip their soul out.
Ralsei brushing off the Spamton fight. Either that's his coping mechanism or he was trying to shut Susie and Kris up to protect them from... something. I'll touch on that in a minute.
According to Queen, DETERMINATION is a key factor in creating a fountain.
Also according to Queen, Kris, Noelle, and Susie all have DETERMINATION SOULS.
Ralsei freaking out about Berdley making a fountain implies that he may also have DETERMINATION. Why I'm bringing all this up will make sense soon.
How was Noelle able to cast Snowgrave... a spell that she, according to her, didn't know?
The Snowgrave route is so twisted.
You manipulate Noelle into killing Berdley and then, when you get back to the computer lab and investigate his corpse, the text box says that he doesn't seem to be awake. As if you're in denial?
Burgerpants recognizes you. Not Kris. As in the player.
The ending. I don't think I need to describe it. Kris is very methodical without the SOUL. (I say "the" because, again, I'm not 100% convinced it's theirs.) I'm saying this about how they left clues that someone broke into the This proves that they are NOT a mindless, vengeful husk.
HOW DID THEY MAKE THE FOUNTAIN WITHOUT THE SOUL INSIDE OF THEM. DID THEY FEED THE SOUL TO IT AFTERWARDS? IS THAT WHAT THAT WAS?
Another point I would like to make is my theory that Ralsei knows much more than he would have us believe. I might put this into a different post because I have yet to gather my points into a coherent bullet point list, so keep an eye out for that.
Anyway apart from Toriel and Susie being VERY heavy sleepers, I think I've gone through everything. I have a few theories.
1. Kris is possessed by the player and figured out that they could make a fountain from Queen and related to Spamton freaking out about freedom. They then decided to make a fountain going by the logic that "this would tick the player off." This is one of my top theories that assumes that the SOUL is theirs.
And 2. Kris is possessed by both the player and the knight. I think the formless voice at the very beginning of the game is the knight, and they somehow needed the player to possess someone with DETERMINATION. If so, then why Kris? We know from Queen that Noelle and Susie, and maybe even Berdley also have DETERMINATION. The most plausible thing I can think of is the fact that human souls are stronger than monster ones.
I do think that the popular theory (about the one that suggests that the Dark Word is nothing but a figment of a child's imagination, and the events that occur in said Dark World are simply children playing with toys) has been thoroughly dashed due to Berdley's murder in the genocide route of the second chapter. Unless he's not dead. Regardless, how the events (or lack thereof) that occur in the second chapter play through the next will be interesting, especially considering Toby's announcement about how there will be one ending to the game. So either Berdley isn't dead, or he will be.
Aaaand I think that's it! Sorry for the long post; let me know your thoughts and if I missed anything!
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