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theowllhouse · 3 years
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the night sky in the boiling isles is awfully pretty
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johannesviii · 6 years
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The Adventuress of Henrietta Street
Some highlights of the last EDA I’ve read (The Adventuress of Henrietta Street).
I took these screens while reading, along with my reactions. As usual, this is full of spoilers.
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“Let’s wish for something simpler next time. I need a break.” (me, right after reading Grimm Reality)
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OH SHIT OH PLEASE NO NOT NOW. NOT. NOW.
This is not what I wanted.
I’m not going to make any friends here, first because I’m sure this book has a ton of fans, and second because I don’t dislike it for the reasons you might expect. Sure, it sidelines Fitz and Anji, sure, the ideas aren’t as numerous or groundbreaking as the ones in Alien Bodies and Interference, sure, the pace is extremely slow, sure, it does some debatable things with the internal logic of the series, and yes, sure, it mostly takes place in a brothel. But while these things can be considered problems, they’re not real problems to me. Some of the most creative things in this story are actually possible thanks to them.
No. I have a problem with the way this story is written and framed. And I can already hear someone saying something like "what, is the academic style too much for your small brain?", but I actually think it doesn’t go far enough with its fake academic style.
By all means, write a fake pseudo-academic paper! Invent a ton of fake sources and names! Write horribly long digressions in footnotes until they eat up the rest of the page! Analyse this story like a bad history student and put on paper some really weird conclusions about it- most of them probably wrong. Even if you don’t go all out and write House of Leaves lite, at least write Jonathan Strange & Mr. Norrell lite, please. Have. fun. with. it.
But it’s not written like a fake master thesis, because there’s no sources, no footnotes, no actual goal or real analysis (right or wrong), and in the end, it’s mostly written like a normal novel, except it has a very flat tone and often digresses to talk about historical events. Reading Henrietta Street is not like proof-reading a badly organised master thesis written by a dispassionate student: it’s like trying to read a novel buried under piles of gratuitous infodumps. And that’s a real shame, because there’s an interesting story somewhere in there. 4,5/10
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Okay, this is interesting.
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That’s VERY cool.
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That part made me laugh pretty hard.
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Apparently the biggest danger that sex workers face in their line of work is accidentally summoning demons, and that also made me laugh pretty hard.
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I’m not sure this is supposed to be funny, but it sure is.
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Aaaaaaand she actually summoned a demon by accident and that guy was killed. Okay.
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That’s very nice but there’s a distressing lack of footnotes and fake references in that pseudo-academic book. Also if there’s no quote from the dream journal (or if there’s some, but boring), I will riot.
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Okay, first, I have to say Scarlette sounds incredible.
Second, I immediately pictured her like Mylène Farmer’s 18th century libertine persona, except with black hair.
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This is probably a bad thing.
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Oh my god
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Ah, I was starting to wonder where our main idiot was.
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Please tell me Eight is fencing with Scarlette. PLEASE.
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YESSSSS Oh my god what a wonderful mental picture.
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SCARLETTE, NO.
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WAIT WTF EIGHT HAS A BEARD NOW?!
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Ooohhh, he has finally discovered where he was from and probably what happened to Gallifrey! Interesting!
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We already kinda knew that was what made The City of the Dead and its magic possible, but it’s always nice to have a clear confirmation.
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I’M HOWLING
"Hello I’m the Doctor, can I stay here" "Sure"
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So he’s looking for magicians. And clearly doing some research. I have to ask, though: where are Anji, Fitz and the TARDIS?
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Meanwhile, on "The Doctor Is Asexual", episode 75647
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These books have recently acquired a strange taste for tarot reading.
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Wait, the Doctor is sick?
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That’s all very interesting but could you please hurry up a little bit?
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Again, I wish this kind of fake document had fake sources and/or footnotes to accompany it.
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Again, I wish there was a fake drawing and a fake source there.
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Interesting.
Also... is it bad if I’d like to read that book instead of the one I’m currently reading?
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So the demons actually look like apes. Uh.
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How much do you want to bet these creatures were inspired by this painting?
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I love this dialogue.
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What is your plan and what the hell are you trying to do.
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"When Scarlette asked reasonably what on Earth she thought she was doing"
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I laughed out loud at this awful, awful typo in French. That should be "par les couilles" and the level of sheer incompetence on display here is worse than any misused French ever printed in these books (yes, even the non-sentences of The Turing Test).
If you don’t speak the language, don’t pretend you do & send it to an editor anyway. You already know I don’t speak English very well, but you don’t see me trying to get my English typos printed in a book costing actual money and bought by actual people.
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What are you trying to achieve.
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Well you’re not wrong.
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FINALLY
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This is a wonderful little scene.
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"It’s worth stopping" YEAH YOU THINK
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WAIT WHAT, THEY DIDN’T ARRIVE WITH THE TARDIS
WHAT’S GOING ON
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Another wonderful mental image.
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Okay so I think that’s an important character. I don’t think anyone spoiled me anything too important about this book, but I’m pretty sure this guy comes back later.
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The fact I didn’t stop to consider how awkwardly Fitz would behave in a brothel is all you need to prove how innocent minded I tend to be
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This would be so much better if it was either written completely like a fake academic work or completely like a novel, because this weird hybrid thing isn’t working.
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CUTE
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How much do you want to bet he did a James Bond impression.
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Fitz no.
Also this is a pretty great scene.
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Is that a compliment or an insult
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Oh. So he was looking for magicians of sorts who could act as a replacement for the Time Lords?
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Anji as a prophet and a force of nature is a marvellous thought.
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"But they had a tendency to giggle every time [Fitz] walked past"
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Okay, I guess Sabbath is bad news, then.
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 Is Sabbath actually human? Because if he’s a Time Lord survivor, that would explain a lot of things.
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Probably panic.
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It’s not a real EDA until someone is coughing up blood
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Or because this book is clumsily organised.
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And here’s another typo in French (éventrés).
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Also who is that random guy with a rosette and why is he, like, metaphorically eating popcorns in the background?
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Is that battleship a TARDIS?
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It’s completely anachronistic, so it could very well be.
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A question you could be asking yourself in quite a lot of these books, Doctor.
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Take a shot every time an adjective reminds you that Sabbath is fat.
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I’M HOWLING
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Ohhhh is it his fault because he destroyed Gallifrey? Is that it?
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What the fuck are you two talking about.
So the wedding is some sort of ritual? What?
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What inspired the author to sit down and write this book also remains unclear.
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That still sounds wonderful and I’d gladly read that book if it existed. Although it’s easy to picture it like some sort of Codex Seraphinianus variant.
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A strange way to talk about regeneration, but a pretty cool one.
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Of course, Doctor, of course.
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Why is the author so fucking terrified by this very mundane detail about women.
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"Assassin" as a noun doesn’t have a feminine equivalent so this is yet another typo in French.
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Ohhh, is he trying to rebuild a TARDIS? Where is the real TARDIS, anyway?
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You really don’t want Anji to have any kind of major role in that story, do you?
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So this is what the ‘horizon’ is like. I like the black sun thing. Well okay it’s a bit of a goth cliché, but still.
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I SPAT OUT MY TEA
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DON’T MAKE ME THINK OF BETTER STORIES
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And I’m pretty sure this would be a lot more dramatic if this book was written like a novel OR like a cold academic piece, but it’s neither, so it just sounds disinterested.
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At least we have excerpts from the dream journal mentioned at the beginning!
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...we know. It’s a very, very mundane thing, dude. It happens when a lot of women are living together. It happens in nunneries too. There’s nothing magical or evil about it, and this is getting very ridiculous.
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Recently, in one of these liveblogs, I was wondering how many stories had living planets in Doctor Who and particularly in the EDAs... so I’m glad somebody else thought it was a recurring theme as well.
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No seriously who the fuck is this guy.
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Okay okay I laughed pretty hard.
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I seriously doubt that.
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138 PDF pages, and next to nothing has happened yet, apart from a lot of exposition.
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Yes okay but could you please do something with this idea instead of just exposing it layer after layer?
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A bit too meta for my taste, but still enjoyable.
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Again, more explanations for this very cool concept, but nothing new.
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Okay. Now do something.
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We knew this already. Now do something with it.
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An interesting parallel but the book still refuses to do anything with its ideas at this point.
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Meanwhile, nothing happens.
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YOU DON’T SAY
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OH. Okay. At least we know the purpose of that wedding thing now.
It’s… very weird, honestly. I mean, the Doctor never really had ‘roots’ with Gallifrey, he hated the place (in Classic Who, at least – and in New Who as soon at it existed again) and tried to get away from it as soon as he could. But hey, fluidity in canon and all that, so why not. Can’t say I like it, but yeah, why not.
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Meanwhile the Doctor gets worse and worse and Fitz finds yet another girlfriend "out of boredom"- which is understandable at this point.
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Usually I would be like "OH NO" but since something is happening at last, I’m like "OH MY GOD, FINALLY"
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Wait wait wait.
You know I try to avoid spoilers for these books but I couldn’t avoid this one. So.
Is this the book where Eight loses a f█cking HEART
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I WISH
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And now the Babewyns have a leader, since you persisted to do nothing.
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Again, I wish this book was full of fake sources for this kind of things.
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Good description of the TARDIS’ sound!
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Finally, someone’s doing something about the Babewyns! Go Scarlette!
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I like this detail.
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WAIT A F█CKING SECOND
IS THAT THE MASTER
IS THE MASTER JUST CHILLING IN THE BACKGROUND OF THIS STORY WITH POPCORNS WHILE WAITING FOR THE SHIT TO HIT THE FAN
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Okay, so the wedding plans had to be changed and now the bride will be Scarlette.
And the Master is drinking in the background, like:
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Eh eh, so Moffat wasn’t the first one to think about this!
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Take a shot every time an adjective reminds you that Sabbath is fat.
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Holy shit, Scarlette rules.
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And this is very sweet.
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Well you’re not wrong.
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Eight you are literally dying, there is no shame in using a wheelchair, okay
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This is a great mental picture.
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I’m pretty sure "howl of laughter" wasn’t the intended reaction, but I’m sorry, he kissed Scarlette and instantly started the apocalypse, I can’t stop laughing
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You know what, just for fun, I am going to pretend this is a post-apocalyptic version of the Library of the Serpent’s Hand from the SCP mythos.
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Ooooooh boy.
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YEP. YEP, YOU ARE THE MASTER. YOU LITTLE SHIT.
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At least he’s being reasonable for once.
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How very convenient for you.
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Yes I was about to ask, could you please hurry up and die already?
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OH SHIT JULIETTE HANGED HERSELF.
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YEAH YOU THINK
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ISN’T THAT OBVIOUS WTF
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Wait for it.
Wait for it.
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FDSDFGHFDSGHFDFH I KNEW IT
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To be honest, this book is FINALLY getting intense and interesting.
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WELP, FITZ ISN’T THE LEADER ANYMORE, BYE BYE FITZ
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YOU DON’T SAY
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Bye bye, Master.
You weren’t very useful, were you.
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YOU DON’T SAY
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This place looks terrifying in my head.
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Finally, FINALLY, this book is gripping.
But it took the Doctor, literally dying on the floor, in a pool of black blood, in a post-apocalyptic dimension for it to become gripping.
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Or just a self-insert.
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OHHHH HERE IT COMES, FOLKS.
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Ah yes, one last typo in French, just because.
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YOU DON’T SAY
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Hey, isn’t that the cover?
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SFSDFGHGFDHHHH ONE OF YOUR HEARTS WAS LITERALLY TORN AWAY FROM YOUR DYING BODY FIVE MINUTES AGO, CAN YOU PLEASE SIT DOWN FOR A SECOND BEFORE CHALLENGING GIANT MONSTERS IN A FIGHT TO THE DEATH
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Hi happy Eight, we missed you!
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YES BUT SCARLETTE WITH A SWORD IS AMAZING
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Holy shit, Eight.
Holy shit dude.
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I hope Scarlette isn’t really dead.
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Apparently she is. F█ck.
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There’s hugs, though. Hugs are always good.
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DOCTOR WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING
COME BACK HERE THIS INSTANT
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OH SHIT SCARLETTE FAKED HER OWN DEATH
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And she’s still pretty great, too.
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How very convenient for you.
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EXTREMELY OMINOUS.
Phew. I’m glad this book is over. It was just as exhausting as the previous one, although in completely different ways.
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