I’ve been reading some craft books and online posts about the world building because my story is an urban fantasy set in present day US, in a fictional town, and theres not a secondary world where the fantasy happens, it’s all in the real world, except the magic is a secret that only certain people know about, but all of the resources I find about world building only talk about fantastical worlds that exist by themselves and not the kind of more subtle world building that I’d have to do. Do you have any tips?
Guide: Creating a Fictional Town in the Real World
Step 1 - Choose Your Location - There are two ways to go about choosing a location for your fictional town. One is to go the "Springfield U.S.A." route, ala The Simpsons, and be vague about the specific location (borough, parish, district, county, region, state, or province) and instead give a broader geographic region... "the East Coast," "the Pacific Northwest," "Central Canada," Northern Scotland," etc. The other option is to go ahead and put your fictional town in a specific location. Just figure out where (for example, somewhere outside of Des Moines, Iowa) and go to Google Maps, click on satellite view, then start zooming in on big empty areas. Choose a place big enough to fit a town. Yes, in reality it's probably farm fields, pasture, or someone's property, but that doesn't matter. You don't have to actually show it on a map. It's just a plausible spot to build your town. Now you can measure how far it is to other places, you know what highways to take to get to it. You can even do street view to get the lay of the land, see what the landscape looks like and try to envision the buildings there. You can also use what's there to create parks, popular recreational areas, and anything else your town needs.
Step 2 - Choose Your Inspiration - Even when you're creating a fictional town, it's still a good idea to use a real town (or two, or three) from that general area as inspiration for your town. For a fictional town in Des Moines, I would zoom in on the map to find a nearby town of similar size... like Elkhart, then I can take a look around to see what it's like. Just looking at the map, I can see they have a couple of churches, a couple baseball fields, a very small main street/downtown area with a couple shops and restaurants, a post office, a few different neighborhoods, and a cemetery. This would be a great model for a small fictional town outside of Des Moines. And, as I said, you could look at a couple other sand combine them. Once you have your inspiration town/s, you can walk around on Google Maps street view, go to the town's web site, watch a tour on YouTube (if one exists), or look up pictures in Google Image search.
Step 3 - Start Planning - This is the really fun part! First, you might want to draw a basic map of your fictional town using your inspiration town/s as a guide. This doesn't have to be a pretty map... just a basic line drawing to help you envision where everything is. Think about some of the basic things this town might have, like the ones I listed in step two, and any other things you might want your town to have, like maybe a library, a hospital, a city hall, school, and maybe a movie theater. It might even be helpful and fun to put together a collage of pictures to represent your town so you've got something in mind as you write about it. You can even choose representatives for specific locations in your story, like your MC's house, school, and their favorite hangout.
Step 4 - Naming Your Town - Start by looking at the kinds of town names that surround your town. Look for common naming conventions... suffixes like -ton, -ville, -dale, -burg, -wood, -field, etc. Words in a particular language, like a lot of French-inspired town names, or towns with geographical terms (lake, hill, valley, river, canyon, gap, etc.) My guide to Naming Locations has additional tips.
Step 5 - Populate Your Town and Give it a History - Last but not least, make up a little history for your town, again, using surrounding towns as inspiration. Who founded it? When was it founded? What's the town's main industry? What are the people like in this town? What jobs do they have? What do they do for fun?
Here are some other posts that might help:
Five Things to Help You Describe Fictional Locations
Setting Your Story in an Unfamiliar Place
WQA’s Guide to Internet Research
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Buttercup - Tess x Fem!Reader
MDNI, 18+ ONLY
Tess sucks at relationships. You lash out, and both of you get what's coming to you.
This work contains: Smut, mild angst, cunnilingus, slapping, rough sex, BDSM, mild dubcon (as in a spontaneous scene), choking, mommy kink, D/S dynamic, bratting/brat taming, and intimacy issues.
Sorta kinda inspired by "Build Me Up Buttercup" by The Foundations, if you're wondering about the name.
The food in Jackson was better than people expected. There were plenty of chefs willing to try new recipes- always happy to feed their community with love. Today, breakfast was French Toast and fruit, traded preserves from a nearby settlement.
It tasted like shit.
As good as it was, you couldn’t appreciate it for a second. Your focus was on the table, glaring holes through the wood, carving a literal hole in the wood with your free hand. Ellie and Jessie had both tried to approach you and ask what was wrong before retreating- you’d have to apologize and tell them you appreciated the effort. Later.
Stood up fucking again. You were used to it, but that didn’t make you any less pissed. No, last night was the fifth or sixth time. When she did manage to show up, she was drunk, or high, or both, or gone by morning. Always gone by morning. It felt brutal, robbing you of the chance to wake up in her arms. Like it was something she owed you, and the debt was growing every time she bailed before sunrise. If you were honest, you would rather she didn’t show up at all than do that.
As many times as she let you down, you could never bring yourself to make it the last time.
“Hey, hon…” Dina took a seat beside you, setting her plate down. “You alright? Ellie said you were practically biting her head off when she tried to check in.”
The knife in your hand fell to the table as you sighed and rubbed your face. “I know, I’ll beg for forgiveness later.”
“Done seething?”
“For now.”
She smiled softly and folded the pocket knife shut, tucking it into your pocket. “Patrols start soon. Might want to finish up.”
You stood and pushed the plate in her direction with a sigh. “I’m done, eat up.” Dina grinned looking down at the plate.
“Thanks. Good luck, I hear you’re on pairs.”
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Even though Tess was just adjusting the saddle on her horse, you were furious the second you saw her.
You probably fucked something up trying to get your things situated faster than her, but you succeeded. Posed at the gate, waiting for her to trot up beside you, you had a second to think.
When she pulled up beside you and the gates creaked open, you took off.
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Hitching your horse to the post outside the lodge checkpoint, you sighed and leaned up against the wood siding. Only a few rounds left, as you counted what was left of your ammo. There were more infected along the trail than you’d anticipated. If you were honest, you were almost overwhelmed. It was worth spending the journey almost a mile ahead of Tess. You were nothing if not stubborn.
The morning light caught your eye, cutting through the trees in the right way to grab your attention, dust defining the beams. Approaching the cliffside, you leaned on the aging fence and looked down at the river. The first warmth of the day shines on your face, leftover snow twinkling on the mountain. As upset as you were that morning, it was easy to forget for a moment.
You weren’t sure what to think about Tess. She acted like she wanted you, most of the time. Flirting on patrols, getting you drinks, even a few…sweeter moments you wouldn’t tell anyone else about. The sex was mind blowing, without a doubt- it was almost, very nearly worth what she put you through.
You heard hooves.
Within another minute of gazing into the canyon, you felt a hand grab the collar of your shirt. It jerked you away from the view, forcing you to meet Tess’ eye.
“Now, what the fuck was that, kid?” Your top button almost popped off with the force of her grip. As startled as you were, you couldn’t bring yourself to be scared of her. You liked it rough. As pissed as you were, you still trusted her.
“What was what?” Your hand came up to grab hers.
“You want to explain leaving me in the dust on what’s supposed to be a pairs patrol?”
“Not my fault you were lagging behind.”
She sneered, turning and dragging you by the collar to the lodge. “You could have gotten yourself fucking killed. There are a dozen ways to be petty without putting yourself in danger.” You struggled to keep up, reaching up to try and pry her hand apart.
“Fucking, let go of me-”
“Let go? You’re lucky it’s not your fucking hair. You have no idea how much trouble you’re in.” She shouldered the lodge door open and pushed you in, locking it and sliding the pipe beside the door through the handles. “Fucking christ.”
You fell hard to the floor, trying to prop yourself up on your elbows.
“Now.” She turned to glower down at you, gritting her teeth. “We have two hours before the next patrol gets here. You can get out of this now, apologize, and we’ll spend the next two hours in silence. That, or I can spend the next two hours wearing you out. What’s it going to be?”
There it was. The out she always offered. If you were done playing games with her, done letting her have her way with you and ready to move on with your dignity, you could pull the plug on whatever this was. You could stop subjecting yourself to this, to her, any time.
Meeting her gaze with a bitter look, you spat at the ground in front of her.
“Fucking brat.”
She took your collar again and pulled you to your feet, guiding you to the couch in the lobby. Before she pushed you down, she took a step back, holding you in place as she sized you up.
“Sweetpea, I just can’t decide what to do first.” One hand went to unbutton your shirt halfway down, her eyes wandering to the soft swell of your breasts. “I think I’m gonna have to wait to taste you until you’ve learned your lesson.” She ripped the rest of your shirt off, grabbing your hips and pulling you in to kiss your neck. “I really, really want to taste you, sweetpea. So I guess I’m going to have to make you beg for mercy.”
You both fell onto the couch, your hands gripping at the upholstery. One of her hands curled into your roots and pulled your head to the side, exposing your neck for her to devour. Her teeth dug in, your back arching off the couch as she bit a hickey into the crook of your neck. God, she was feral like this. You wouldn’t be able to move at all without feeling her later, you were sure.
Leaning back, she took a moment to amdire the view.
“God. I know you're in trouble sugar, but it's hard not to appreciate you when I've got you like this.” One hand went behind your back to undo your bra, helping you out of your clothing as her other hand smoothed over your soft skin. She dipped down and pressed her lips to your breast, moaning softly at the feeling.
“So fucking pretty for me. You're lucky I have a soft spot for you, or you'd be over my knee already.” She leaned in to whisper in your ear. “But no promises about later, sweetheart.”
When your bra and shirt were discarded, her fingertips dragged over your chest. A few more marks were scattered across your breasts before she took your nipple into her mouth, flicking it with her tongue. You gasped, arching your back as her hands eased around your waist.
Once she'd left all the marks she wanted and stripped your inhibitions away, she adjusted you both to lay down a bit more comfortably. Her weight was comforting on top of you, only for a moment before you felt her hands wander upwards. They smoothed over her handiwork and up your neck, circling around you for a moment before falling back down.
She crawled off you and stood, just for a moment, undoing her belt. You almost covered yourself, self-conscious and maybe a bit nervous, but you couldn't bring yourself to think she would really hurt you right now. Not now, outside of Jackson, where she'd still have to get you home safely. Tess was a lot of things, but she wasn't reckless, and she didn't mean any actual harm. You were pretty sure, anyways.
She kicked her jeans off and returned to her position on top of you, adjusting until she found a comfortable spot. You could feel her panties on your thigh. If you thought about it for too long, you wouldn't last, so you refocused on her calm expression. Her hands went back to smoothing up and down your chest, inching up to your neck and then back down.
Before long, her hands actually secured around your throat, squeezing gently as she adjusted her hips.
”You're goddamn lucky I'm not in the mood to get rough right now, so here's what's going to happen. You're going to lay there like a good girl, and I'm going to get off. If you can be quiet and still, I'll reward you after I've had my fill. Do you understand?“
You nodded, looking away at a painting on the wall. God, her gaze was intense. That was a good word for Tess overall, you thought. Intense.
”Unless you're ready to apologize.“
Snapping back to look at her, you scoffed, rolling your eyes.
Her hand drew back and slapped you, jerking your head to look back at the wall. Her other hand tightened around your throat.
”Brat.“ She squeezed, starting to rock her hips back and forth on your thigh. ”God, you're so stubborn. This would be so much easier if you could just listen to me, sweetpea.“
”You know...“ She stifled a moan, grinding her cunt into your jeans. ”...you're like an animal, sometimes.“ You didn't respond. ”As much as I try to teach you who's in charge, you still seem to...mmph...have some trouble understanding.“
You tried to reach up under her shirt, anything to get your hands on her. She grabbed your wrist with a bruising grip, pinning it to the couch as she leaned more into the arm choking you. Things went a bit hazy as the blood cut off to your brain, only for a moment before she let up a bit.
”You even beg me to take control, don't you?“ She leaned in. ”You want momma to be in charge so bad until I try to be in charge. Isn't that right?“
You didn't respond. She leaned into your throat again.
When she let up, you coughed, your free hand weakly grabbing her wrist. ”Please-“
”What was that?“ She released her grip to smack you again, harder, before going back to your neck.
”Shit- momma, please, I'm sorry-“
”You're not sorry. You just want me to fuck you.“ She leaned down to kiss your forehead. ”I can't blame you for that, sugar.”
The longer you sat there with her rubbing off on your thigh, the more things got blurry. Whether that was from the lack of blood, the limited air, or the tears in your eyes, you couldn't be sure.
“You can fight me all you want, doll.” She looked up to the ceiling, letting out a shaky breath. ”But I've got experience taming animals like you. No matter what, they always break.“
She leaned in, shuddering, grinding down into the wet spot on your thigh. ”...and I'm going to break you, baby girl. I promise you that.“
If she'd given you permission, you could have finished right then, without her ever touching your cunt. But you didn't have permission. So you watched, distant, fixated, as she guided your pinned hand to her panties. You let her use you to get off, fingers exactly where she put them until she leaned back with a groan and eased off your neck.
You were okay. You knew you would be, she'd never really hurt you. It was easy to forget that sometimes. If you were honest, maybe you liked to forget it.
Her nails dragged over your stomach gently as she rode out her orgasm on your thigh, exhaling and looking down after a minute.
”You alright, baby girl?“
Looking up at her, you took a moment to respond. The early morning sunlight was hazy through the filthy windows of the lodge, filtering through her hair, highlighting a few grays. You were sure if someone had been asked to draw a halo, it would look nothing like this- but it was all you could think of. If she wasn't an angel, she was a goddess, transcending any divinity you knew.
”Doll?“
”I'm alright.“ You nodded slowly, reaching up to wipe the tears out of your eyes with your clean hand.
”Shit, did I-“
”No.“ You shook your head, taking her hand. ”Just watering up, I'm fine.“
She nodded, leaning down to kiss you. You wrapped your arms around her, pulling her in closer for a moment. Just a moment. Then she pulled away and tugged off her flannel.
“Think it's time I delivered on that promise of mine, don't you think? Unless you want to rest for a minute?”
You nodded eagerly and parted your legs as much as you could, pulling her in for one more kiss before pushing her head down. “I'm alright. Can't rest like this.”
She nodded, sliding down between your legs. She stripped you down to panties, the only thing left to cover you. If a clicker came by now, you'd have been screwed.
Well, maybe if Tess wasn't there you’d have been screwed.
She started like she always did, pressing kisses to your thighs and panties just to make you squirm. Her fingers dipped into the elastic waistband, tugging them off. You felt lucky she didn't rip them off, as she liked to do- you were not interested in riding back to Jackson commando after all this. You had to remind her once or twice that panties actually didn't grow on trees, and finding suitable ones in the apocalypse was not an easy task.
She parted your lips with her thumb, running through the wetness and lifting it to her mouth to taste. She spread it around a bit before blowing on you, sending a chill up your spine before she leaned in and kissed your cunt.
The chill of the air was gone in an instant as she licked you, swirling around your clit and moaning as her tongue slipped inside you. She took just as much pleasure from this as you did, you were certain. From what she told you, she had years of experience in dingy bar bathrooms, down on her knees for pretty girls who wanted her attention. You had no trouble believing those stories as she put years of skill to work between your legs.
She pulled away to kiss across your thighs again, the temperature change making you grip the couch. Her thumb flicked your clit up and down, watching hypnotized for a moment before spitting on your cunt and going back in.
“Tess-” You grabbed her hair, tugging softly, halfheartedly trying to bury her deeper. She was insatiable like this. If you were honest, she was perfect for you. You struggled to take what you wanted, struggled to ask anything of your previous lovers. Tess didn't need you to ask. She gave without demand, offered when you couldn't bring yourself to request. It was in her nature.
“So pretty.” She whispered into your thigh, nipping the tender skin for a moment. Before long, she shifted lower, slipping her tongue deeper inside as her thumb rubbed over your clit. Your breath hitched.
“Yes, that, keep doing that-”
She moaned into your cunt, fingers digging into your thigh as you shuddered and tipped over the edge. Your eyes watered up again, head thrown back into the couch as she shushed you and ran her hands over your skin. Rough calluses over your tender skin were almost too much, dragging over your most sensitive spots as you slowly came down from the intense high.
She crawled up to lay beside you, pulling you into her side as you started to breathe again. “You alright, sugar?”
It took you a second to reply, but you nodded against her chest. “Yeah...yeah, I'm alright. Got intense for a second.“
She nodded, holding you for a few minutes. You glanced over at the clock.
”Want to tell me what that little stunt was about?“
”We have to get dressed. Joel and Tommy should be taking over soon.“
She looked at the clock, sitting up and nodding. ”You're...probably right.“ Something was left unsaid, but it wasn't the time for this conversation. ”Anything planned tonight?“
You hesitated. ”No. You can come by.“
One way or another, something would change tonight.
You spent the last ten minutes of solitude getting dressed and lingering in her touch, letting her help with the clasp of your bra. As she brushed out your hair with her fingers and started putting it back in the neat braid you'd started with, you started thinking about what to say.
-
As the last few minutes of midnight slipped away, your grip tightened on your wine glass.
She said she'd be here hours ago. This was old news, of course, she was hardly ever on time to come to your place. Still.
You'd resolved hours ago that if she didn't show up tonight, it was over. Either you'd finally get around to asking what was going on, or she wouldn't get another chance.
As your last tethers to hope started to break, the front door opened.
She wasn’t moving slow, like she did when she was drunk or high. You couldn’t smell anything on her, but you weren’t close enough to know for sure.
She turned to you, locking the door behind her.
”Hey, sugar.”
“Tess.” You set your glass down, eyes locked on her.
She seemed frozen in place as she looked back at you. She had the nerve to look guilty. You weren't sure if that upset you or not. She felt bad about being late- but that guilt was proof she'd known what a dick she was being the whole time. At the same time, something small in your heart hated to see her upset, and you especially hated to be the one making her upset.
“What?”
You pressed your lips together and stood from the table, taking a few steps towards her. “You said you'd be here at 10.”
“...got held up. Sorry, sweetheart.”
“I-” You closed your eyes, hand coming up to pinch the bridge of your nose. “...what are we doing here, Tess?”
“Are you really...?”
“Don't give me that. You've been jerking me around and you know it. I know you're attracted to me, I know you care about me, I don't understand why you leave me sitting here by myself night after night. And most of all,“ you took a few bold steps toward her, crossing your arms over your chest. ”I don't understand why I keep letting you.“
”Sweetpea-“
”Don't. You don't get to call me pet names when you can't even seem to decide what I am to you. So, what is it? Am I not girlfriend material? Do you just like sleeping around more than you like me?”
“I'm too old to be anyone's damn girlfriend. And I don't...sleep around. Not anymore, I've got you.”
“You've got me. And what, exactly, does that mean? You have a girlfriend? You have a fuckbuddy?”
She wouldn't meet your eye. ”Look, when you've been on your own for as long as I have...“
”Tess.“ You waited until she looked up, wary and distressed. ”I've been on my own for a long time too. But I'm sick of it.“
She sighed, throwing up her hands in exasperation. ”I don't know what I have left to give you, sugar. I haven't been in a real relationship in years. I thought you were okay with taking what I can offer, but if it's not enough, then fine. I guess I'll stop wasting your time.“
”I know, Tess. I know you're used to no commitment. But just because you accepted scraps from Joel for years doesn't mean I have to sit around and do the same for you.“
It was a bit cruel and you knew it, striking a nerve like that. She didn’t like to talk about her and Joel, too proud to admit she loved him more than he could love her back. But here she was, putting you through the same thing. She gritted her teeth, backing up against the door as you got closer and closer. It reminded you of a cornered animal. Baring her teeth to look scary. Anything to get herself out of this. ”You have no right, you don't know-“
”I do know, Tess. I know you got used to being on your own.“ You took her hand in yours, pulling her away from the door and closer to you. ”I get it. This is what love has meant to you for almost twenty years. But it's not love to me.“ Her expression fell. ”You've done anything and everything to keep me close without getting close. Did you think I wouldn't get tired of it sooner or later? Or were you counting on it?“
Warm hands came to rest on your waist, her eyes looking away again. She looked gutted, too guilty to try defending herself.
”If I'm asking too much of you, then fine. I can accept that. But I'm not going to stay up waiting for you forever, especially when you spend the day flirting with me and leading me on.“ You look down, letting out a puff of air resembling a sigh. ”Either tell me what you want or cut me loose. Put me out of my misery, Tess. Please.“
She was still for a while, eyes on the floor as you watched her. The least you could do was let her think after springing this on her. Eventually, your head fell on her chest, listening to her heartbeat. Depending on what she said, this might be the last time you heard it. The thought made your chest hurt, but you knew this was a conversation that needed to happen. Even if it didn't resemble much of a conversation, with you spewing your thoughts of the last three hours at her.
You both deserved better than this poor excuse of a relationship.
Her arms tightened around your waist, pulling you closer. ”I'm sorry,“ she whispered, hands running up your back. ”You're right.“
You both sat in silence against your front door. You held her like she'd break apart if you let go. She held you like she'd break apart if you let go. You didn't call her out on her tight grip on your body, politely ignoring the way she clung to you.
You looked up at her, tilting her face to look at you. ”Stay the night.“ Getting up on your toes, you pressed a quick kiss to her lips. ”And be there in the morning.“
After a moment of holding you close and studying your face, she nodded. ”...okay.“
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The spring morning chill wasn't so bad when you had someone to keep you warm.
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