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Dressing For Revenge
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Summary: Still heartbroken from finding your ex cheating on you, you go to a nightclub with your friend Kelsie, where not only do you run into your ex, but also a handsome gentleman who's willing to help you get over him.
Warnings: dirty talk, oral sex (female receiving), angry sex (consensual), MUST BE 18+ TO READ
Word Count: 8.6k
Based on this request.
A/N: This is my first new fic of my rebrand. I hope you enjoy! Please be kind. FEEDBACK IS LOVE.
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“God, you look hot, Y/N.”
You smirked at your reflection in the mirror and at your friend Kelsie who sat on your bed behind you.
“Not bad, huh?” you wiggled your brows as your hands swept down your hips, accentuating the slim shape of the dress and your hourglass silhouette.
“I mean, I’d fuck you.”
You chuckled. “Thanks, Kelse.”
“That is the look you’re going for, right?” your friend asked. “The get me drunk and fuck me senseless look? Or is it the look but you can’t touch idea?”
“Hmm, I guess we’ll see,” you smirked.
“Huh?” Kelsie rose from the bed as you grabbed your handbag and strutted towards the front door. “What does that mean?”
“It means…it depends on who I run into.”
“Not Luke.”
You grimaced at the mention of his name. “Fuck no!” you yelled before quickly masking your disdain for your ex with a sweet smile. “But who knows who else will be there tonight.”
“There’s the Y/N I know,” Kelsie beamed, following you out to the awaiting Uber.
Nightclubs weren't really your scene. At least they hadn't been until you'd met Luke. He was rich and liked to flaunt it. His mission was always to see and be seen. So whether it was a Hollywood party or the loudest disco, he knew where the action was and always made an appearance. When he started taking you to clubs and parties, you weren't sure it was your thing. While you liked the personal attention he gave you and the money he spent on you, you didn't much enjoy watching other girls falling all over him. Especially drunk girls.
But you had to admit, even now, you had gotten used to jetset the lifestyle a bit. You'd come to know some great people, Kelsie included, because of the nightlife you'd shared with your ex.
Which unfortunately was the exact reason he was now your ex. Because of his lifestyle.
You could still smell the weed and whiskey that hung in the air that night you'd found him in the guest room at that party in Malibu with that little tramp. She'd barely been legal, for fuck sake, but that was beside the point. Up until then, you’d had your suspicions that Luke was cheating on you. Hell, he’d flirt with girls right in front of you. But every night he’d take you home and make you feel like the Queen of the World, and all your doubts managed to fizzle away like the bubbles in the champagne he’d paid for earlier.
That dreadful night, however, your suspicions had been confirmed in plain sight, the harsh reality stinging your eyes with the tears that it brought. Luke had begged for forgiveness later, swearing on his grandmother’s grave (who was still alive, by the way) that he would never do it again and that he loved only you. You’d told him you needed time to think about it, but it only took two days to find out from a mutual friend that he’d been out with another woman at yet another nightclub.
So stepping past security into this club was already starting to make you have second thoughts and leave a bitter taste in your mouth. But when Kelsie grabbed your arm and pulled you to the bar, you remembered the reason why you came.
Confiding in Kelsie, you promised you were ready to move on and have a nice girls’ night out. You let her believe it was her idea to get as dolled up as you had. And you did appreciate the little persuasion she’d provided. But truth be told, you would have gone out tonight with or without her. Perhaps moving on wasn’t the correct term for it, but one thing was for certain. You needed to get laid…badly.
Kelsie ordered you both cocktails from the bar while you kept your eyes peeled for contenders. You locked eyes with a handsome Latino who gave you a smile. You smiled back.
Possibly… you thought to yourself.
“Here you go, Y/N,” you heard Kelsie say as she handed you a glass.
“Thanks,” you muttered, quickly taking a long sip through the little straw.
“So how’s the turn out?” she grinned, turning to face the rest of the club alongside you.
“Not bad,” you chuckled. “Not great either. But the night is still young.”
“Hmm, someone’s eyeing you at two o’clock.”
Gazing over the crowd, you caught sight of the guy Kelsie was referring to. Eh. He was okay, but nothing to flip over. He definitely fell into the look but you can’t touch category. If he came by the bar, you’d let him buy you a drink, but that was it.
“Good evening ladies,” you heard a voice say from the other side of Kelsie. It was the Latin Lover. “What are we drinking tonight?”
“Nothing fancy,” Kelsie grinned, crossing one leg over the other as she batted her lashes. “Just rum and Coke.”
“Ah, a Cuba Libra!” the handsome man beamed, placing his hand on his chest. “You know, that’s where I’m from.”
“Cuba? No way!”
“Okay…it’s where my father’s from,” he held up his free hand and nodded sheepishly. “But I am still proud of my heritage.”
Kelsie giggled as the man leaned against the bar and introduced himself to her. You took this as your cue. The unspoken word to back off and let your friend take the lead. No harm done. You hadn’t begun to make the rounds yet.
“Going to the ladies’,” you leaned over and whispered to Kelsie. She gave a nod of acknowledgement as you slid off your stool.
As you made your way toward the back of the club, a handful of men caught your eye. You held your head high and winked when needed, flipping your hair off your bare shoulder.
And that’s when you saw him. He wore the jacket you’d bought him for Christmas, his ever present whiskey glass in his hand, a long legged twig of a girl attached to his hip as he chatted with a group of people.
Stopping in your tracks, you felt your hands form fists at your sides, the bile rising in your throat. Then taking a deep breath, you tried to think of the best way to get around Luke and his group in order to get to the bathroom without him seeing you.
Zig-zagging through the crowd, you just about made it to the other side of Luke’s clique when you heard your name and felt a hand around your wrist. Your automatic reaction was to turn toward him, your brain instantly cursing you for it. With your lips pursed, you scowled at him.
“You look amazing,” he said. As if you didn’t know.
“Hmph,” you grunted.
“How are you?” he asked as he stepped closer, his other hand grazing your hip. But you quickly stepped back, realizing he was trying to pull you in. Releasing your arm from his hold, you rolled your eyes. The nerve of this guy!
“As if you care.”
“What do you mean, Y/N?” he pleaded, his blue eyes giving you the look that used to make you melt. But you knew all his tricks now. “Of course I care. I’ve always cared about you.”
“Seriously?”
You were ready to slap him when the woman next to him turned around, sliding her bony hand up his arm.
“Baby, who is this?” she cooed.
“Oh, this is-”
“Nobody,” you interrupted, standing up straight. Then you turned swiftly, heading for the restrooms with determination.
Tears threatened to fall from your eyes, blurring your vision as you scrambled to get to your destination, ready to hide in a stall until your composure was contained. Suddenly, you felt a body slam into your chest, nearly knocking the air out of your lungs.
“Oh shit, I’m so sorry!” you heard a voice declare as two hands grabbed hold of your upper arms to steady you. “Are you okay?”
“Huh? Fuck,” you stumbled, shaking your head. Getting a clearer image of the man who ran into you, you didn’t bother to exchange niceties. “Yeah. Watch where the fuck you’re going, asshole!”
You only stayed long enough to see the shocked look on his face before running toward the ladies’ room. Slamming into the door with your palms, you found an empty stall and locked yourself inside. Taking deep breaths, you counted to ten like your therapist had taught you to do.
Motherfucking Luke! Why did he have to be here? Of all the clubs in L.A. You’d known there had been a slight chance he would be at this club. You had gone to it a couple times with him before. But he also frequented others. Why this club? Why tonight?
Inhaling a jagged breath, you shook your head. No! You were not going to let one stupid prick ruin your night just because you happened to run into him. No matter how rich or good looking he was. No matter how good in bed he was.
Ugh…you sighed as you slid down the wall. You missed it. The sex. It had been amazing, delicious. Luke could make you come like…
Shut up, Y/N!
There’s other men who could make you feel just as good, if not better. And you had already taken a gander at some prospects tonight.
Washing your hands at the sink and doing your best to touch up your face, you took another deep breath and made your way back to the club. The loud music hit you in the face as your heels clicked along the floor, setting the tone for the rest of the evening. You spotted Kelsie on the dance floor with Mr. Cuba Libra and decided it was time to find yourself someone to dance with, or at least buy you a drink. You didn’t even bother to look in Luke’s direction, and instead decided to head back to the bar.
You saw his back first, a dark maroon jacket covering his broad shoulders. But it was the curls on the nape of his neck that caught your attention, the way they whispered against his collar so delicately. And when he turned his head slightly to talk to the person next to him, you knew for certain it was the man you’d bumped into earlier.
You watched him lift a highball glass to his lips, taking a swig. The rings on his fingers made you swoon inwardly, a secret turn-on of yours. When he turned away again, you decided it was time to bite the bullet. With your tail between your legs, you sauntered up to the stranger and poked him in the back. He turned inquisitively, immediately raising his eyebrows when he noticed it was you.
“I believe…” you paused to clear your throat. “I owe you an apology.”
You watched the man’s face soften, his full lips making a perfect circle before he said, “Oh.”
“I shouldn’t have yelled at you and called you an asshole.”
Giving a shrug, he slid off his stool and stood to face you.
“It’s alright. Sometimes I am one.”
You caught the corner of his mouth twitching before it grew into a smirk, pushing his cheek until a deep dimple appeared. Automatically, you smiled, feeling a weakness in your knees. Holy shit.
Getting your bearings, you blinked. “Anyway, just wanted to say I’m sorry. I wasn’t…feeling well.”
“I reckoned it was something like that. I saw you run for the toilets.”
Sheepishly looking down at your hands, you nodded. “Yeah. I was…in a hurry, and you ran into me. But I shouldn’t have been so rude.”
“Apology accepted,” he grinned wider, holding out his hand. “I’m Harry.”
“Y/N,” you replied, shaking his warm, ringed hand.
Then the jerk had the nerve to cover your hand with his other one as he leaned forward and looked you in the eyes. “Are you feeling better now, Y/N?”
You immediately felt like syrup was oozing down your body at the way he said your name.
“Kinda,” you teased. “But I’d feel much better with a drink.”
If you hadn’t already, the moment Harry smiled the biggest smile yet, his eyes twinkling as he guided you back to the bar, you decided you’d let him do more than buy you a drink. You’d let him try to make you come tonight.
The music was loud enough to send each pulse and vibration running through your veins. And the liquor Harry had offered you added to the sensation, making you feel weightless and on top of the world. But most of all, the feeling of his body against your back as you both swayed and grinded sent you to a hypnotic state of bliss.
“Who’s that?” you suddenly heard Harry whisper in your ear.
“Huh? Who?”
“That bloke you’ve had your eye on since we stepped onto the dance floor.”
“I don’t-” you choked, “know what you’re talking about.”
“Y/N,” Harry said, turning you around to face him. Clipping your chin with his finger, he forced you to look at him. “I’m pretty observant. You may be dancing with me but your gaze is glued to that man in the grey jacket over there. Now, either you really fancy him, or it’s someone you know.”
“I’m sorry,” you lowered your eyes, embarrassed and a little ashamed that he noticed. “It’s my ex.”
“Ah.”
“I’m not…I mean…I don’t want him back or anything. If that’s what you’re thinking. I didn’t know he was going to be here,” you confessed.
“That wasn’t what I was thinking,” said Harry. “But thanks for telling me.”
“I’m sorry I was looking over at him,” you continued, pressing your hands against his chest. You felt relief when he didn’t object. “It’s over between us…it’s just…”
“Still a little raw?” Harry finished.
“Yeah.”
“I get it. I just got over a breakup, too.”
“Really?”
“Well, it’s been a couple months, but yeah.”
“I’m sorry,” you frowned.
Harry’s mouth curved into a smile. “Stop saying that. You didn’t do anything. I was just curious.”
“Still…it was rude of me,” you returned the smile. “Here I am dancing with this incredibly attractive guy…”
“Who?” Harry playfully feigned stupidity, looking around him. When you giggled, he grinned wider, his dimples dipping in his cheeks. You blushed. “Oh, you mean me?”
“Who’s also a charmer,” you added.
“C’mere,” he instructed, pulling you against his body again, his hands sliding down your hips. “I know you don’t know me, Y/N. But I can show you a good time and make you forget about whatshisname. Even if just for one night.”
Your eyes twinkled with lust as you gazed into his green ones. You imagined kissing his full lips, his mustache tickling you, his stubble scratching deliciously against your skin. In a moment of excitement, you lifted your hand to touch it, your fingers grazing across his jaw.
“I’d like that. Very much,” you purred.
Slowly, Harry leaned down, and with his fingertips digging deeper into your hips, he covered your mouth with his. He tasted of whiskey, but not like Luke used to. This was sweeter, with a hint of cherries. Wanting to explore his mouth further, you slid your hands up his shoulders and fingered the wisps of hair on his neck as he allowed you access to his tongue. You swore you felt him groan as he pulled you even closer. 
While the beat still pulsed around you, you found a particular pulse of your own, racing through your veins like a newly lit fire that you’d thought had long died out. As Harry continued to seduce your mouth with his tongue, your fingertips found his chest once again where you slid your palm inside his shirt and ran it across his bare chest. The touch seemed to ignite something in Harry too, and you felt him chuckle against your lips before he pulled away, grabbing your wrists.
“You’re gonna make me strip you right here and have my way with you, baby,” he growled.
His hungry eyes told you he could very well do just that. Lifting his gaze, however, his smirk fell as he looked past you.
“Hmm, looks like the tables have turned.”
“What?” you asked.
Cocking his head, he gestured behind you. Turning slightly, you caught Luke glaring at you. His jaw was set, his eyes narrowed. If you didn’t know any better, you’d think he didn’t approve of your sexy little display with Harry, or might even feel a tinge of jealousy.
Hmmph, you shrugged off the notion. Luke had never shown any sign of jealousy as long as you’d known him. Still, it made you a little excited to know he was keeping tabs on you.
“I’ll be damned,” you heard Harry chuckle. “I’d say he’s a wee bit unhappy, Y/N.”
“Serves him right,” you let the words slip.
“I’m gonna guess he was the possessive type.”
“Actually, no,” you replied. “In public he barely acted like he knew me. I’d find him flirting with every other woman in the room.”
“But he still expected you to be with him, right?” Harry asked.
“Yeah…”
“While he could do whatever he wanted.”
You furrowed your brows, finally understanding Harry’s point. “Yeah!”
“He didn’t deserve you,” Harry said, his voice low but loud enough for you to hear. “Didn’t appreciate you.”
“Probably not,” you sighed, your hips still swaying as Harry held you close.
“Definitely not,” he retorted, lifting his right hand to slide it under your ear. "Come home with me, Y/N. Make him really jealous. Make him realize what he's missing."
You snorted in disbelief as your fingertips tickled the back of his hand. “I doubt he’d even notice if I left with you.”
“I beg to differ,” said Harry. “The way his eyes are shooting daggers at me right now says otherwise.”
“I don’t like to use people, Harry,” you claimed.
He threw his head back laughing, and you could feel the vibration in his chest against your own.
“Seriously, Y/N? Isn’t that why you’re here? Why we’re all here? Regardless of whether or not your ex had shown up at this club tonight, wasn’t your intention to get back at him? To find someone to help you forget?”
“Well…yeah…kinda,” you stammered.
“And wouldn’t I just be perfect to help in that regard?”
You felt your face flush as you looked into his eyes. He was absolutely right. Your goal had been to get back at Luke tonight, if only to prove to yourself that you didn’t need him. And Harry was so sexy and willing…
“Yes,” you heard yourself say.
You followed Harry to the bar where he paid his tab, walking right past Luke and his group. Though you dared not turn your head to look at him, you could somehow feel his gaze on you.
“Ready?” Harry asked, stuffing his wallet into his pocket.
“You have no idea how ready I am,” you teased.
Harry didn’t miss your tone. He pulled you close once again, planting a wet kiss on your lips, right there for everyone, especially Luke, to see. When your mouths separated, you licked your lips seductively.
“And you have no idea how badly I want to touch you right here, right now,” Harry murmured in your ear. “Let’s go.”
As soon as Harry grabbed your hand, you heard your name being called. You turned to see Luke incredulously glaring at you.
“You can’t be serious!” he shouted.
“Excuse me?”
“This prick? You’re leaving with him?”
“What’s it to you?” you shouted back. “I don’t belong to you anymore, remember?”
“I fucked up, Y/N! I thought you were forgiving me!”
“You thought wrong!” you chuckled. Then you looked over at the woman you had assumed he was with. “Does she know you’re a cheater? Or have you been lying to her like you did to me?”
“Y/N,” you heard Harry say, tugging on your hand. “He’s not worth your time, baby.”
“Naw, see…” Luke yelled, clenching his jaw as he stepped forward. “You don’t get to call her that. She’s not yours!”
“She is tonight, mate.”
While the idea of being anyone’s possession was usually appalling, the way Harry said that made your legs weak. And the fact that he hadn’t let go of your hand yet made you feel safe.
“You fucking-”
“Luke, man!” someone called out. You watched as two of his friends held him back and told him to calm down.
��C’mon, Y/N,” whispered Harry before he pulled you through the crowd and out the front door to the valet where he stopped and looked at you. “Are you okay?”
“No, but I will be,” you replied as he pushed your hair from your face.
“I can just take you home if you’d like. We don’t have to-”
“No. I want to.”
“You sure?”
You merely nodded before grabbing his jacket and pulling him into another deep kiss. You felt him moan against your lips, reigniting the fire in your core. A black car pulled up to the curb then as you released him.
“I need to feel you tonight, Harry,” you whined. “Please.”
“Anything you want, baby,” he sighed before guiding you to his car.
You felt a little sleazy and a twinge of guilt for leaving Kelsie at the club. But when you texted her in Harry’s car, she swore she was fine and having the time of her life with her Cuban guy. She also gave both you and Harry kudos for not falling into Luke’s trap and letting a full fight break out. Though she hadn’t seen exactly what happened, she had heard a commotion and then caught the seething look on Luke’s face when she headed for the bathroom.
“Everything alright?” Harry asked when he stopped at a red light.
“Um…yeah…” You turned off your phone and looked up at him. “Just fine.”
“Good,” he grinned, gently placing his hand on your knee. “My place is just up here.”
You tried your best to not gawk at the stately home as Harry turned into the circular driveway. Shit, even Luke’s house wasn’t this extravagant. You smiled over at Harry as he killed the engine and stared at you.
“Still wanna come in?” he smirked.
“Mmhmm,” you nodded, biting your lip and squeezing your thighs together at his choice of words.
Harry chuckled low, shaking his head. You thought he was going to add to the spice that sizzled in the air, but instead he opened his car door. He was already at your side before you barely had your legs out. He helped you out of the car, sliding his arm around your waist, and he stared into your eyes as he slammed the door shut behind you.
Harry’s house was gorgeous to say the least. When you stepped into the foyer, you immediately noticed the grand staircase, a large statue and a painting above the mantel that was no doubt an original.
“Can I get you a drink?” he offered. “Scotch or a glass of wine?”
“Actually…” you blushed, “I could really go for some water. My throat feels dry.”
“No problem,” he grinned. “Kitchen’s this way.”
You followed Harry through the living room where he peeled off his jacket and laid it across the back of a chair. As he rolled up a shirt sleeve with one hand, you saw him grab a remote with the other which set the fireplace aglow. Damn!
Turning the corner into the kitchen, you watched as Harry opened what looked like a large pantry but turned out to be the refrigerator.
“Well!” you gasped, unable to hold in your amazement any longer. “Looks like you’re doing pretty well for yourself.”
That low chuckle that you’d already come to adore rose from his chest and dimples appeared in his cheeks as he set two bottles of sparkling water on the counter. Then he surprised you further by not only getting down two glasses from the cabinet, but then filling them with ice and pouring the water over it.
“I do alright, I reckon.”
He handed you a glass and you took a generous sip before lowering it. “So what do you do?”
“I’m in real estate.”
“Okayyyy… No surprise there,” you commented as you gestured around the area. “I suppose that’s how you scored this gorgeous mansion?”
Harry laughed, nearly spitting his water. “It’s not a mansion.”
“Yeah, it is. Fuck, you are rich if you can’t tell that.”
“Does that bother you?”
“No! Why would it? Unless…oh my God, you’re not married, are you?”
“No,” Harry snorted.
“Engaged? Separated? Newly divorced with an ex wife you owe a ton of alimony to?”
“No,” Harry laughed harder. Then he set his glass on the counter and placed his hands on your arms. “Y/N, I promise, I’m none of those things.”
“Then…how? Why?”
“Why am I still single?”
You nodded first before managing to squeak out a yes.
“Same reason you are,” he replied softly, his hands sliding up your shoulders and finding your jaw.
“What do you mean?”
“I was with the wrong person. And it took me a long time to realize.”
Harry’s words hung in the air as you tried to conjure up your own, to no avail. Instead you stared at his lips, now hydrated from the water, as his thumbs ran across your cheeks.
“Was she a cheater, too?” you finally asked.
Harry blinked his eyes softly. “Yeah.”
Who the hell would cheat on you? is what you wanted to say. Instead, you said, “Fuck them.”
“Yeah.”
Tilting his head, Harry captured your lips with his, sending a wave of desire down to your toes. Your fingers found the buttons of his shirt, and you hastily began to unfasten them. When you reached the waistband of his trousers, Harry tugged the hem of his shirt and removed it completely, tossing it on the floor. Then with your mouths still intertwined, he lifted you up and set you on the kitchen counter. Sliding his hands up your thighs, he grinned against your lips.
“I’ve been dying to get this fucking little dress off of you all night.”
“Yeah? How do you wanna do it?” you purred, leaning back and sticking your tits out.
“Hmm. Part of me wants to just tear it off right here,” he said, his sultry eyes burning into yours. “But the other part of me wants to take you upstairs and do it slowly. So slowly you can hardly stand it. Taking my time with you, kissing you, licking you, peeling your dress off inch by inch until you’re writhing and whimpering my name.”
“Mmm, I like the second one,” you breathed.
“Who says you get a vote, hmm?” Harry raised a brow.
“Oh.”
Your mouth remained in the O shape as Harry continued to run his hands up your legs and under your dress. You scooted closer to him on the counter, as much as you possibly could without slipping off. Harry quickly understood your intent, pushing himself between your legs, his hands finding their way to your ass where he squeezed.
“So what’s it gonna be?” you inquired, just before Harry lowered his head and kissed the exposed skin at the top of your breast. You gasped at the sudden touch, his lips moist and cool from the iced water.
Allowing Harry to take his time answering, you watched his sensual mouth caress your chest as you felt yourself get wetter and wetter. His fingertips pinched your sensitive skin on your rear until he found the waistband of your thong.
“You’re so fucking hot, Y/N,” he murmured as he pulled the elastic and made it pop against your hip. “You smell like cherry vanilla, and you taste like it too.”
You grinned at him, sliding a perfectly manicured nail down his chest and grabbing hold of his cross necklace.
“You like?”
“Mmm, yes. I wanna taste some more. But I wanna do it upstairs.”
“Lead the way, honey,” you beamed.
Seven thousand tiny nerves in your body were set afire as you took Harry’s hand and followed him up the enormous staircase. You stole tiny glimpses into each room as he led you to the end of the hall, stopping at a set of double doors that were opened to a stunning master suite.
“I’d show you the rest of the house, but I’d rather get down to business if it’s okay with you,” Harry smirked.
“Of course,” you agreed.
Stepping into the bedroom, you caught sight of the California King sized bed covered in luxurious linens. The entire room had the most intoxicating, manly aroma, like tobacco and patchouli.
“Wow, you certainly don’t scrimp,” you commented.
“I like to think I have good taste,” he said, grabbing your waist.
You chuckled as he pulled you close, goosebumps erupting all over your flesh. You ran your fingers down his chest, tracing his tattoos.
“I like these birds,” you said. “They don’t represent you and your ex do they?”
“No,” Harry shook his head. “I had these long before I ever…y’know. Met her.”
“Ah okay. Good.” And with that, you leaned forward and softly kissed each bird. When you lifted your head, Harry was grinning at you.
“I thought I was the one who was getting a taste.”
“You also said you wanted to take your time. Maybe I’m a little impatient, Harry.”
With a low, sexy laugh, Harry guided you backwards toward the bed. When your back hit the silk duvet, you watched him hover over you, the dim light creating a glow around his chestnut hair. A cluster of clunks sounded as you both kicked off your shoes. You smiled up at Harry, the excitement and anticipation both alluring.
“I am gonna take my time, darling,” he confirmed. “So slow that you’ll be begging me, your sweet pussy throbbing in agony.”
“Oh my God,” you gulped. This was going to be either torture or heaven. Maybe both.
Starting with a soft, sweet kiss, Harry let you get comfortable on the bed. The second kiss was deeper, his tongue sliding into your mouth like a warm, wet snake, eager to meet its mate. You kissed him back, one hand on his neck, the other tangling in his curls. You sighed as you felt his body relax and situate on top of yours, his legs between yours and his hands cradling your head.
You could still taste a twinge of whiskey on his tongue, and that mixed with the incredible fragrance in the room made you light headed. As Harry continued to kiss you, you felt the urge to feel him. Pushing your hips up, you could feel his erection between your legs. But when you slid your hand down his side to get a touch, Harry grabbed your wrist and pinned it down on the bed next to you. You whined in protest, but Harry only resumed his assault on your mouth.
You wondered if you’d ever been kissed this way. Luke certainly never did this. He wasn’t one to skip foreplay, but he definitely liked to move things along. And even in high school when you were still a virgin, guys never concentrated so thoroughly on the kissing part. This was…different. But also incredibly satisfying. Harry was an excellent kisser, to put it mildly.
When he seemed to be content with your lips, Harry moved on to your neck, then your shoulder. Reaching the skinny strap of your dress, he looped his fingers through and pulled it aside. You hitched a breath when he’d pulled both sides down your shoulders and kissed the tops of your breasts again. He held onto your waist as he slid his tongue across your skin. You felt yourself hike your hips up again, needing the friction.
“It zips in the back,” you heard yourself say.
“What, baby?” Harry asked, lifting his head to look at you. One strand of hair had fallen on his forehead. God, he was gorgeous.
“My dress,” you breathed. “There’s a zipper in the back.”
“I know,” he smirked.
You whimpered low, squirming underneath him. “Aren’t you…please?”
“Oh, you’re begging already? I’m not even halfway there yet, love.”
“Jesus,” you gasped.
“What do you need, baby? Tell me.”
“I need you to touch me, Harry.”
“I am touching you.”
“You know what I mean!” you cried.
Harry shook his head and tsked. “I told you I’m taking my time. We’ll get there, babe. Okay?”
You sighed through your nose. “Fine.”
“Are you gonna behave? Or do I need to punish you?” he teased.
“Fuck! Punish me, please! I need to feel you.”
“Ohh!” Harry sat back on his knees and looked at you, one eyebrow raised. “I didn’t know you were a naughty girl.”
“Well, now you do,” you said flatly.
Harry chuckled that sexy way again, making your wetness pool even more in what was left of your pitiful panties.
“I thought you wanted revenge,” Harry stated.
“Revenge for what?”
“Your ex. To prove you’re better off without him.”
“I am,” you agreed.
“Did he kiss you like that?” Harry asked.
You shook your head. “No.”
“Did you like it when I did it?”
Smiling gently, you nodded. “Very much.”
“Don’t you think you deserve to be kissed like that?”
“I…”
“What about touched like this?”
Harry continued, running his palms up your thighs until he reached the hem of your dress. You stared at him when he paused, then slid them further to your panties. You felt him glide his thumb across the center, so softly you almost whined at the lack of friction. But then he repeated the motion, pressing little by little each time.
Your breaths became faster, quickened by each press of his thumb. He didn’t remove his eyes from yours, watching you as you started to shift your hips and let out tiny moans.
“Is that where you wanted to be touched?” Harry inquired.
“Mmm, yes,” you managed to sound between breaths.
“You’re fucking soaked, baby. Perhaps I was wrong with taking my time.”
“I told you.”
The cackle that came from Harry was unexpected, but at least he now understood how ready you were.
“Here I thought I was trying to prove to you what I think you deserve, when what you really need is a good fuck.”
“God yes, please!” you cried.
When Harry chuckled a little more, you suddenly rose up onto your elbows.
“I’m sorry, that didn’t sound right,” you said.
“What do you mean?”
“It sounded selfish. I don’t mean to imply I didn’t like all the other stuff.”
“No, I get it,” Harry shook his head. “And you’re definitely not selfish.”
“No?”
“Not at all. You deserve a good fuck, too.”
You bit your lip. “So do you.”
“Yeah?” Harry crawled up your body, resuming his previous position. This time his cock was even harder, poking you in just the right place.
“Mmmhmm,” you moaned.
Sliding his hands around your waist, Harry reached for the zipper on the back of your dress and pulled it down. A loud breath escaped your throat when he finally slipped it down and over your hips.
“Fuck me!” he exclaimed with a sigh. “Look at you, you gorgeous thing.”
Before you could reply, Harry’s mouth was on your breast, sucking on your nipple. You moaned explicitly at the instant and much needed contact. When he’d given both nipples equal attention, he changed course to your belly, slithering down your body until he situated himself between your thighs.
“I think, kitten…” he cooed, grabbing hold of the sides of your thong, “that these need to go. They’re much too wet to keep wearing.”
You groaned in agreement, letting Harry remove your panties completely.
“I reckon I can help with that too,” he added, placing his palm on your inner thigh before sticking out his tongue and lapping your skin there.
Holy shit! He hadn’t even touched your clit yet and you were already about to explode.
Harry repeated the action on your other thigh before finally…finally centering himself at your pussy. He opened you gently, then so delicately pressed his tongue to your clit. You almost came unglued as he started to move it in various lines and shapes, adding a bit more pressure to each lick.
“God damn, kitten, you do taste good. So delicious.”
As he resumed his oral pleasure on you, you began to pant and moan, grabbing hold of his hair and curling your toes. Fuck, what this man could do with his mouth!
Just when you started to feel the burn in your core and thought you might go over the edge, a finger joined in on the fun, slipping past your juices with ease. You felt an extra tightness in your stomach, your legs trembling next to Harry’s head.
“Oh God! Harry! Baby! So….so good!”
You heard him hum against your pussy, his tongue flickering in the best rhythm, and a second finger slid in with the first.
“Aaaaaaahhhhh!” you cried, grabbing fists of his hair.
Your orgasm thundered through your entire body with Harry still transfixed on your pleasure. It seemed to last for ages, like you couldn’t stop.
“Harry! Oh shit!”
You finally came down after a couple more seconds, your body limp. Harry lifted his head finally, a cheeky grin on his face as he wiped away your juices from his chin. Then he crawled up the bed again to face you. When he leaned in for a kiss, you backed away.
“What…what are you doing?” you asked.
“Um…was gonna kiss you?”
“Oh.”
“Do you not like to taste yourself?”
Biting your lip, you shrugged. “Luke never liked to do that. So I got used to it.”
“Never liked to do what? Eat your pussy or kiss you after?” Harry asked.
“Kiss after. He always made me wash myself off before we kissed or…did anything else.”
Harry frowned and narrowed his eyes. “Fuck that guy. He wouldn’t do that and he was shagging other women?”
“Yeah.”
“Babe,” said Harry as he laid on his side next to you. “I think it’s time you got over him.”
“I am over him,” you declared.
“Really? Seems to me like you’re still pretty scarred from him.”
“Well, I am,” you agreed. “That’s gonna take some time. But I don’t love him anymore. He cheated on me. Do you still love your ex?”
Harry stared at you a moment before saying, “No. But I’m still a little bitter and angry, I admit.”
“Yeah,” you nodded with a scowl. “That’s what I am. I’m so fucking angry.”
“Then that’s what you need to do, Y/N. Let it all out. On me.”
You stared incredulously at Harry. Though his expression was serious, his eyes had a certain softness to them, as though he was silently willing you to let go.
“Come ‘ere,” he whispered, pulling you close against his body.
His mouth covered yours once again, a tender kiss of vulnerability, this time allowing you to take the lead. When your tongues met, you felt him sigh. You cupped his face with your hands, his scruffy jaw sending yet another spark through your veins. This man was so incredibly sexy, and he was wanting you to take advantage of the situation. Let out all of your emotions in a single roll in the hay. Who were you to resist?
“Let me help you with that,” he murmured when your fingers glided down his belly to his belt.
Rising from the bed, Harry hurriedly unbuckled his belt and dropped his pants. You sheepishly examined the massive bulge in his briefs before he removed them as well, stepping out of them and returning to the bed.
“I’m all yours, baby,” he offered. “Show me what you want.”
“Harry…” you breathed, unable to take your eyes off of his beautiful physique and his long, thick cock.
“Fuuuuck.”
The dimples returned as Harry smirked with a nod, placing his arm behind his head. “That’s the idea.”
Words escaping you - not to mention air - you couldn’t decide if you wanted to take him in your mouth or straddle him. You’d never had this much control before. You watched as Harry began to stroke himself, and your mouth began to water. But your pussy began to twitch, too. Damn it.
“This is about you, babe,” Harry voiced. “But don’t take too long to decide.”
As his thumb ran over the tip of his cock, you finally made your decision. Throwing your leg over his waist, you could already feel yourself dripping.
“You wanna ride me, darling?”
“Yes,” you nodded.
“Okay, hold on. Lemme get a condom.”
When Harry retrieved the protection from the bedside drawer, you offered to put it on. Harry watched you, an easy grin on his face. Then you aimed his hard cock at our entrance, taking a deep breath before sliding down slowly.
“Oh, Jesus babe,” Harry groaned, his eyelids fluttering. “Fuck, that feels so good already.”
With a smirk of your own, you began to ride him, taking it easy at first to adjust to his size. He definitely filled you more than Luke had.
You concentrated on Harry’s face as you moved, letting your pussy wetten with each thrust. He reached for your tits, cupping them and then grabbing your nipples. You threw your head back, feeling a moan escape your throat from deep down.
“Fuck, baby,” growled Harry. “You’re a fucking dream, you know that? I can’t believe your man didn’t want this.”
With a jagged breath, you looked back at him, his gorgeous face watching you in awe. It made you feel amazing.
“How dare he cheat on you?,” Harry added. “What was he thinking? Look at you. Riding my cock, taking me so deep and so well.”
“Yeah,” you whined.
“How dare he bury his cock in someone else's pussy when he has this little kitten ready to please his every whim. His every need. You do that, don’t you baby? You like to please your man, hmm?”
“Yes. I do.”
“You like to watch him become captive of your tight, warm pussy til he can’t get enough.”
You moaned, nodding your head.
“It’s not fair, is it kitten?”
“No,” you whimpered.
“You give so much, aiming to please. Only for a man who doesn’t know how good he’s got it.”
“Harry…”
“I know, baby. Tell me how unfair it is. Tell me how angry you are.”
Furrowing your brows, you groaned and sped up the pace, riding Harry faster.
“Fuck yeah, babe. Take it all out on me. All your anger. Fuck me like you hate me.”
“I do.”
“Say it.”
“I hate you.”
The words burned your throat because although they weren’t meant for Harry, you definitely hated Luke. Harry was right. You’d given your ex everything and he hadn’t appreciated it. You let him hurt your feelings in public and then pretended it didn’t matter anymore when his dick was inside you. Fuck that. Fuck him!
As your thrusts quickened, so did your breaths. You moaned louder, though the tiny cries and whimpers were not near enough. Watching Harry as his chest and throat started to get red, his eyelids fluttering from pleasure, you wanted so badly to make him come. But your fury was taking over as well. Your head was spinning with so many thoughts, emotions and desires.
Harry squeezed your ass as he lifted you higher and bucked his hips hard. You cried out in pleasure and pain, reaching for the headboard that was too far away.
“Get up, baby,” Harry suddenly commanded, slapping your ass. “I want you on your knees.”
When you obliged, you made sure you scooted closer to the headboard this time in case you needed to hold on. You felt Harry run his hands up the back of your thighs, his rings chilling your flesh right before he reached underneath and pinched your clit. You cursed again, unable to see straight.
“I know, kitten,” he said. “You’re dripping all over me and my sheets. Do I need to make you come again?”
“Yes. Please.”
Slipping two fingers inside your pussy, Harry quickly pulled them out and put them in his mouth.
“So fucking good, baby.”
Before you could respond, Harry slapped your ass, taking you by surprise. You squealed and looked over your shoulder where he was knelt behind you with a dirty smirk. Shithead.
“Now, my kitten,” he said firmly, “I’m gonna bury my cock in that tight cunt again. And you’re gonna take it just like before. Alright?”
“Yes,” you nodded.
“Only this time I wanna hear everything. Tell me how much you hate me. How fucking good my cock feels, but you can’t stand me. I wanna hear you seething with anger. Got it?”
You nodded again, although you were unsure exactly what he meant. Surely he didn’t want you to pretend he was Luke. Perhaps he wanted you to use the anger to fuel the orgasm. 
Before you could think about it further, Harry did as he promised and slammed into your pussy over and over. The sting was so good, you nearly lost your balance, but Harry had a good grip on your waist.
“God, this ass,” he growled, slapping it again.
“Fuck you,” you cried, barely enough for Harry to hear. But he did.
“What was that, love?”
When you didn’t reply, he thrust harder. “Tell me!”
“Fuck you!”
“That’s it,” he acknowledged. “It’s so good, innit?”
“So good, Harry…I can’t…”
“Yes you can. Babe. Tell me you hate me.”
“I hate you,” you muttered.
“No, no. That won’t do,” he argued. You felt him lean forward, his stomach on our back. “I need to hear it. Louder.”
While it did feel so fucking good, your hatred was at its peak. You thought of all the shit you put up with from Luke…why did he hurt you like that? Why had he thought it was okay? What kind of fool did he think you were?
“I hate you!” you shouted, staring ahead at the headboard.
“I know you do,” said Harry, his voice even lower than usual.
Then he moaned, a deep, low, sexy moan that filled your senses. You could tell he was nearing his own climax. Your eyes began to burn as he reached for your clit again. You were so close, the orgasm sitting on the edge of the precipice. Oh God!
“Say it it again!”
With his finger on your cunt and his cock deep, the dam broke and you cried out in both pleasure and pain.
“I hate you! I fucking hate you, Luke!”
Time seemed to freeze as you glared straight ahead. Harry paused his thrusts, but his body still laid on top of yours.
“S-sorry.”
“S’okay, babe.”
“No, I- I didn’t mean to say that,” you croaked, tears spilling from your eyes.
“Hey. It’s okay. I told you to let out all your anger.”
You were silent for a bit, your body trembling as you felt his breaths on your shoulder. You wondered if he was going to move, figured he would after hearing you scream someone else’s name…even if it was tagged with hate.
“I’m…I’m really, sorry, Harry.”
“Baby. Please don’t be sorry. You released what you needed to. It’s okay.”
“O-okay…” you breathed, your throat sore.
“Do you need me to stop?”
“No,” you replied hastily. “You didn’t come yet, did you?”
“No, but it’s alright, I-”
“Harry. Don’t be silly. Keep fucking me.”
“Are you sure?”
“Yes. It…feels amazing. You’re so good.”
You felt his body rise from yours, a slight sweaty stickiness as his chest separated from your back. When he ran his hands down your hips, you heard him moan again.
“You’re amazing too, babe,” he said, breathing heavily with each thrust. “Shit, I’m so close.”
When you felt his balls hit your pussy, you reached underneath and grabbed them, earning a loud groan from Harry.
“Fuck, baby, I’m gonna come,” he proclaimed.
Letting out a deep, guttural moan, Harry thrust a few more times until his body trembled and he let out long, slow breaths onto your back. Cursing again, he fell onto the bed beside you, pulling you against his chest.
Perhaps it was the memories flooding back, perhaps it was the way Harry held you with his sweaty arms that made you unable to breathe, or maybe it was because you’d fucking said your ex’s name as you came, but your eyes darted around the room, trying to decide your escape.
“I um…need to use the restroom,” you declared.
“Oh, sure babe.”
When he released you, you sped for the bathroom, shutting the door behind you. While washing up, you wondered why the hell you’d let this happen. You’d barely gotten over Luke’s hurt only for it to return again. You should have just stayed home tonight.
When you opened the door, Harry was still lying on the bed, naked, his head propped in his hand. Damn it.
“I should go,” you said, grabbing your discarded dress and panties from the floor.
“Why?”
“It’s late.”
“You can stay if you like.”
“No, I…should get home,” you declined.
“Oh. Well, let me get dressed and I’ll drive you,” Harry offered as he rose from the bed.
“Please. It’s fine. I’ll order an Uber.”
“Y/N, that’s ridiculous,” argued Harry. “I can take you.”
He slipped back into his pants, forgoing the briefs, but you were already at the door.
“It’s okay, really,” you insisted, pausing at the top of the stairs. “I just…I’m embarrassed, Harry. I’d really just like to be alone. I hope you understand.”
Making it to the living room where you’d left your bag, you noticed Harry had followed you. You quickly ordered an Uber on the app. When you turned, Harry wore a deep frown.
“Please don’t be embarrassed, Y/N. That was never my intention.”
“I know,” you confirmed, placing a hand on his chest for reassurance. Then you handed him your phone. “Here. Put your number in.”
Harry did as you asked, and when he handed it back, your fingers brushed.
“There, now you have mine,” you gave a tight smile after sending his number a text. When your phone pinged, you jumped. “Oh! There must have been a driver nearby. Goodnight, Harry.”
“It’s here already?”
“Just down the road. I’ll wait outside.”
“Babe,” he sighed.
You gave him a quick kiss, then a second.
“You’re lovely,” you whispered before leaving him standing in the middle of his luxurious living room.
If it had been a cab, you might have cried the whole way home. But seeing as it was an Uber and you were just sitting in the back of some guy’s car, you held the tears in. Stumbling up the stairs as if you were drunk, you tossed your bag on your nightstand and stepped out of your shoes. You’d just pulled on an oversized tee to sleep in when your phone rang in your purse. Seeing Harry’s number shouldn’t have startled you, but it did.
“Just wanted to make sure you got home okay,” he said when you answered.
“Yeah. Yeah, I’m fine. Thanks.”
“Good. I know you wanna be alone, but I just wanted to say I um…I had a really good time with you, Y/N.”
“Me too.”
“I’m sorry I embarrassed you, love. I really am. I was hoping we could both just-”
“Harry,” you interrupted. “It’s okay. You didn’t embarrass me. I did it to myself.”
After a long sigh, Harry spoke again. “Um…listen, if you ever wanna do this again….if you need to get your anger out or you’re stressed or…” he paused with a sigh, “just wanna talk. Whatever…give me a ring.”
“Of course.”
“Take care, Y/N.”
“Harry…”
“Yeah?”
“I don’t hate you.”
“I know.”
“That was just…”
“I know, baby.”
You gave a soft hum of contentment. “Okay then. Goodnight, Harry.”
“Goodnight, kitten.
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*dramatic music* What did you think?? Do we need more them? Don't be shy, leave all the comments you want :).
tagging: @kathb59 since you asked :)
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rngaredead · 1 month
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I was going to wait until I was 100% done writing fic forever to say anything, but I got mad at something I saw so I’m going to be an idiot and say something anyway:
I see so many posts going around on here about what people are annoyed about when reading fics or things they want authors to stop doing — tropes they’re annoyed with or style things that bother them. Etc.
The back button or close out button is right there.
That one post going around calling AO3 the thrift store of fic where there’s some designer stuff mixed in with lesser works really set me off.
Every story on AO3 is on there because someone took time out of their life to write it. (Hours and hours across days, weeks, years.) For free. For you to read. Also for free.
Writing is *hard*. And every author on AO3 and other writing platforms had the guts to not only put their thoughts into words, but also decide to share their art.
For some writers, posting a story is an easy thing to do. For others, it’s a complete act of bravery every time because it is terrifying to hit that publish button.
And guess what? Not every fic writer has writing experience! Fic writing is supposed to be for fun and something you do because you want to do it. Anyone can write fic. That’s the beauty of it.
If a story is not your cup of tea for any reason, move on. But you don’t need to drag someone down else while you do it because it’s not up to your personal standards plot-wise, or looks how you think it should look.
And you are also free to write your own stories if you are so put off by what others wrote or how they wrote it. Just be ready for someone else to pick on it because they don’t like your plot or formatting.
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avis-fictional-world · 4 months
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Happy to be a part of this series! I was commissioned for a drawing for How to Survive Hu-mans with Your Sanity (Mostly) Intact by katydid & Zyla_SweetBean
@aimportantdragoncollector
It’s super funny I love reading it!!! Thank you for commissioning me!
Interested in commissions info in read more
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destinedtobeloved · 1 year
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I don’t think fanfic writers understand what impact they have on people and even fandoms as a whole. When I read a fanfic, I don’t forget about it- it’s always something I turn in my head over and over thinking about it constantly. They change the way I think of characters and also my view of how one would act. I literally fall asleep thinking of these pieces. I’m so blessed to be able to interact with such talented people that obviously have such pure hard work and dedication for things like fandom works. This is a love letter to all those writers at there that I have interacted with, and maybe even not. I love you guys more then you know.
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tismrot · 5 months
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AO3 WRITERS:
I’ve noticed how you tend to put dialogue in new paragraphs, something rarely seen in books. I uploaded my fic in traditional formatting - dialogue within paragraphs - but then I started thinking.
Is there a reason why most texts on AO3 is formatted differently? Readability on phones, perhaps?
While I’m not new to writing, I’m new to fanfics and AO3, so thank you for any insights!
EXAMPLE
Screenshot from What We Make of It (Shotgun Wedding): https://archiveofourown.org/works/22557148/chapters/56470528?view_adult=true and Good Omens:
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ahgasegotarmy116 · 14 days
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I hit 800 Followers 😭💜
I literally hit 700 eight days ago and now I'm already at 800 like what?!?!?! Y'all are actually insane!!! Thank you so much again for all the love like wtf. No one really reads these but still thank you all for supporting me and my writing! It's been a wild ride and I can wait for what's to come! I love you guys 💜
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againstacecilia · 1 year
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So uh.... Has this been done yet?
Credit to my husband, I said I was surprised I hadn't seen it and he goes, "So... Make it? Do it for Tumblr.")
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naviiisblog · 1 year
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i swear it feels like tumbler is depriving us of dave lizewski fics 👎🏽👎🏽
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geeky-politics-46 · 1 year
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In an attempt to feel festive, I got this book to read each night in the lead up to Christmas. Tonight I felt my heart swell a little when I cracked it open for the first time & found this as the dedication.
To all my fellow fic writers, if you needed proof that you are seen & that your work matters... here it is.
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Happy holidays, everyone ❤️ cheers 🥂
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jlbilu · 1 year
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In your beginnings
"Father Brown" fans, fan fiction writers, I conjure you (if is not a bother)!
How many of you have created one or more Original Characters?
How many of those Original Characters have a Face Claim?
How many of them have a backgroung/lore/their own story before Kemblefrod?
I find those things interesting.
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dragonsholygrail · 4 months
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Hello!
You fabulous babes, long time rarely see. I have been trapped in despair, locked up in the torture of writers block. For over a freaking year! BUT I HAVE GAINED RESURGENCE! I have come out a new. The fog has lifted. My fingers now produce words again. I AM BACK BABY! And so is my blog.
I’m excited, are you excited, you’re excited. I bet. Hopefully. Or at least you will be. I am going to be doing some reorganization. Changing things up on this blog. I am a new person. Writing new things. Trying new things. And it’s gonna be brilliant.
So stick around— or hey! Even jump on board. You will not regret it. You won’t (not a threat (or is it?))
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rngaredead · 5 months
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I love ask games
😅 and 💥
For this ask game...
1.) 😅 What's a story or scene you've created that you're a smidge embarrassed exists?
I know some folks enjoy this story, but I'm embarrassed about "Curious & Judgmental." The whole thing.
Please do not get me wrong — I really like parts of that story and some of my favorite lines I've written are hidden in there. But it has waaaaaay too many coincidences in it. I try to ground my stories in reality as much as I can and I feel in that one everything wrapped up too neatly in a bow. I set out to write one fic and it turned into something else and there was no way for me to backtrack and reroute.
I'm so grateful I wrote it because it allowed me to write other things that I know are more in line with myself and what I want to write. But that is my most overall cringe Tedependent fic that I've written because it's the least "me." And while folks who read it don't know that, I do.
2.) 💥 How do you feel about criticism?
I am only fine with criticism when it is solicited.
I don't think criticism has a place in fan fiction unless an author specifically asks for it. No one should criticize someone's fic without being asked to do so. Fan fiction is written for free by folks who may or may not have writing experience or are competent storytellers — but they still have a story to tell!
Readers who are getting all of this content for free should not be criticizing someone's work — if you didn't like something, then don't read it. There's no need to tear someone else apart because you didn't like it — go write a story yourself to get exactly what you want.
Comments that say "You should have done [XYZ] differently" or "I wanted [XYZ] to happen" crush me.
I can't speak for other writers, but I am heartbroken when I get comments like that because I feel like I have personally let that person down ... even though that story wasn't specifically for them. (My stories, for the most part, are for me. It's the plot I want to read, so it's the plot I wrote.)
I LOVE when folks are into a story and have thoughts as to where they want it to go... but readers should not expect to dictate the further plot of a story/WIP or be mad when something they wanted to happen didn't happen the way they wanted it to.
I know my writing has a lot of room for improvement — that's why I wrote fic in the first place. It was seemingly a safe space to write stories for a built-in audience for a pairing/fandom. But I'm already hard enough on myself as a writer... I don't need someone coming out of the woodwork to rip something to shreds that I spent a lot of time and energy on.
It takes me ages to write each chapter and minutes for people to read it. So, no, I don't want them criticizing my work. (Even though I know there is ample stuff to criticize...)
Unless criticism is specifically solicited by an author — if you can't say something nice, then don't say anything at all.
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avis-fictional-world · 3 months
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Thank you @aimportantdragoncollector for the commission!
Below are the sketches and original image without cleaning it up.
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It maybe hard to see the difference, but I try to edit it brighter for the final piece. Taking the image from the sketchbook makes it darker than it is naturally. It’s a commission for a sketch so it’s not meant to be a clean and polished art style, but I like it when it looks rough.
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The different sketches trying to figure out the best look for Mezo Shouji’s expression and pose. I address so many spikes to him😭 but it turned out okay.
Thanks for the commission!
Go read the new chapter!
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destinedtobeloved · 1 year
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Am I the only one disappointed disgusted in the lack of Ethan hunt x reader fan fiction out there or what
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emwuz-here · 6 months
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fic writers be out here experience the most traumatic moments of their lives and STILL be writing enough words to make their fic a whole ass book
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