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WIP Wednesday - 10/11/23 (Closed) | Math Nerd AU
Cass Spears.
Drake's biological mom. The last 'mom' he had before he'd gone to his final foster home in Columbia. She'd been a decent mother aside from the monster she'd harbored in her house. A monster that Andrew could recognize even if he never saw the full extent of Drake's monstrous intentions.
Alex had made sure of that.
"Andrew, it's good to see you." She says smile warm and to her credit she doesn't come to hug him. She'd been one of the better foster moms.
"Can't say the same." he returns. "Long way to come for someone who barely spent time in your house." he raises a brow. "Where's Richard?" he asks.
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La passeuse de mots - Alric et Jennifer Twice
đ PrĂ©sentation du livre đ
𧟠733 pages
đ PremiĂšre publication : 2021
đ Langue : Français
đ Editeur : Hachette Romans
đLa QuatriĂšme de Couvertuređ
Dans le royaume de HĂ©lios, les mots ont un pouvoir. Celui de crĂ©er, dâĂ©quilibrer, puis de dĂ©truire le monde. Lorsquâon les prononce, aucun retour en arriĂšre nâest possible.
Arya, une jeune fille de la capitale, est passionnĂ©e de livres. Elle en dĂ©vore chaque mot. Mais elle est loin de se douter quâelle est la clĂ© pour sauver son royaume, le seul qui ait restreint lâutilisation de la magie grĂące Ă un traitĂ©. Un traitĂ© qui ne plaĂźt pas aux rebelles, prĂȘts Ă tout pour lâĂ©radiquer.
Ă lâaube des changements qui sâannoncent, les Mots se rĂ©veillent pour Ă©tablir lâordre dans le chaos, la vĂ©ritĂ© dans lâillusion.
Ils attendent leur Appel. Celui de la Passeuse de Mots.
đ€La lectuređ€
âïžLa promesseâïž
Un monde oĂč les mots peuvent crĂ©er (aussi bien que dĂ©truire)
đLe bilanđ
âLes livres ne meurent pas, ils restent dans le cĆur des gens.â
Cette critique va sans doute ĂȘtre une des plus compliquĂ©es que jâaurais Ă faire. Je ressors extrĂȘmement mitigĂ©e de cette lecture. MitigĂ©e car il me faut faire la part entre ce que ce livre promettait dâĂȘtre, et ce quâil a Ă©tĂ© pour moi personnellement. Chaque Ă©lĂ©ment sera donc analysĂ© selon ces deux perspectives.
âLâhorizon nâest pas la limite de la mer, mais celle de nos yeux.â
Une écriture inégale.
Jâai eu, dans les premiĂšres pages, Ă©normĂ©ment de mal Ă mâadapter au style. Des phrases trĂšs courtes qui se succĂ©daient trĂšs vite, trĂšs descriptives aussi, presque jusquâĂ la nausĂ©e. Pourtant la suite se dĂ©lit petit Ă petit, on sent que les auteurs sont plus Ă lâaise avec leur plume, plus confiants. Je nâarrive pas Ă savoir si ceci est un effet de style : un style saccadĂ© pour personnifier une jeune fille Ă la fois pĂ©tillante et un peu innocente, qui nâest pas encore capable dâapprofondir beaucoup ses rĂ©flexions, ou si, plus simplement, les auteurs ne sont pas beaucoup repassĂ© sur leur texte...
Jâai Ă©tĂ© ceci dit trĂšs agrĂ©ablement surprise par le niveau de vocabulaire. Jâai lu nombre de livres pour adultes bien plus pauvres que celui-ci.
âTout peut basculer si vite. Nous ne sommes que dĂ©fauts, fĂȘlures et os. Des choses quâon peut briser ou qui peuvent nous briser.â
Une raisonnable introduction Ă la fantasy.
Ce livre est sans doute une introduction trĂšs correcte Ă la fantasy pour un ou une adolescente qui nâen a jamais ou pas beaucoup lu. Pour un lecteur plus averti, on retrouve Ă mon goĂ»t trop dâĂ©lĂ©ments connus de folklore / mythe / lĂ©gende / ou mĂȘme pop culture. Pour nâen citer que quelques uns : la quĂȘte Ă©pique qui doit sauver le monde (duh), le compagnon farceur, le casse de la banque rĂ©putĂ©e imprenable, la carte secrĂšte qui mĂšne au âtrĂ©sorâ, le nid de vampires, lâantagoniste qui ne demande quâĂ mourir, lâhĂ©roĂŻne super puissante Ă la dĂ©couverte de ses pouvoirs (mais elle est gentille en vrai)... (Sans compter les noms des choses, gens et lieux qui restent assez classico-classiques) De maniĂšre gĂ©nĂ©rale, le dĂ©roulement du rĂ©cit mâa un peu fait penser Ă une partie de D&D : des Ă©tapes, des boss et des points dâxp Ă gagner.
Bon.Â
Il y avait des choses vraiment sympas aussi. Les soldats de verre (terrifiants mais sous exploités), les gardes flottants de la banque, la cité engloutie...
Quant au principe de ces mots capables de changer la personnalitĂ© de celle qui les prononce, capables aussi de changer la vision quâelle a de son monde autant que le monde lui-mĂȘme... Je ne sais pas. Jâaime bien lâidĂ©e mais la mise en pratique est trop abstraite, trop bancale, trop implicite et dĂ©finitivement pas assez approfondie Ă mon goĂ»t.
âNul besoin dâĂȘtre la mĂȘme. Il faut juste ĂȘtre meilleure pour ne pas devenir pire.â
Des personnages gentillets.
Je ne sais si mon cĆur est dĂ©finitivement perdu Ă ce monde, si je suis devenue par trop grincheuse et cynique, mais cette avalanche de bons sentiments Ă chaque page mâa assez rapidement tapĂ© sur les nerfs. Encore une fois, je peux comprendre ce besoin dâoptimisme exacerbĂ© dans un monde de plus en plus brutal et sans doute que ma propre exaspĂ©ration a dĂ©cuplĂ© mon impression de niaiserie, mais au bout dâun moment, câest juste trop. La moi de quinze ans aurait peut-ĂȘtre apprĂ©ciĂ©, je ne sais pas...
LâhĂ©roĂŻne mâa particuliĂšrement tapĂ© sur les nerfs. Evidemment, puisque câest par elle que passe le rĂ©cit (premiĂšre personne - prĂ©sent), nous nâentendons jamais que son dialogue intĂ©rieur et, laissez-moi vous dire, cette jeune fille nâa pas 19 ans. En fait, jâaurais eu beaucoup moins de difficultĂ©s Ă accorder du crĂ©dit Ă ses rĂ©flexions si on mâavait dit quâelle en avait 12 ou 13. (Mais il Ă©tait, jâimagine, difficile dâinclure tant de sexe et de sang avec une hĂ©roĂŻne prĂ© adolescente.) Dâautant que ses dĂ©cisions sont, au mieux, inconscientes, au pire purement stupides. Elle a une tendance pathologique Ă se jeter tĂȘte la premiĂšre dans des situations catastrophiques, trĂšs certaine quâelle trouvera la solution QUAND elle sera face au danger. Le facepalm a Ă©tĂ© violent. Plusieurs fois. Sans compter que rien de ce quâelle fait nâa jamais de rĂ©percussions trĂšs dĂ©finitives...
Donc en somme : trÚs trÚs mitigée.
PS : quelquâun mâexplique comment Alric survit, svp ?
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#livre
#critique littéraire
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WIP Wednesday 12-27-23 (Closed) | Math Nerd AU
"Don't lie to me." Andrew says and slaps his hand to Alex's forehead, "You have a fever and your pale." he lists.
"I just feel a little off. I can just sleep it off." Alex dismisses. "I'm sorry." he adds.
"Don't apologize." he huffs and pulls his hand away from Alex's forehead to settle him back down into Andrew's bed. "I'll wake you up when Cass comes back with the food. If you're not feeling better by tonight then you can just spend the night." Andrew says.
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1/24/24 WIP Wednesday (CLOSED) | Math Nerd AU
Despite his anxiety, the next week is a good one.
Alex manages to produce an adult that claims to be his guardian who talks Cass into letting Andrew go on a 3-day trip up to Anaheim to go to Disneyland.
Andrew had looked at Alex in confusion since heights and rides were not Andrew's things. Alex merely leaned in and whispered, "Unlimited sweets."
Andrew was sold after that.
1/31/24 WIP Wednesday Ask Options: HERE
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poly!bau where they make long car rides a game to see how many times they can make the stubbiest members of the group cum
(in this case penny is going)
so Emily and Derek make penny cum with Derek finger fucking her and Emily touching her clit and each one teasing a nipple
and Luke starts with only touching Spencer's tip and he cums before they leave the parking lot and again before they're on the highway
over time they start to make bets about who can last the longest without touching themselves and the winner gets to fuck whoever cums the most first
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I've been saving this to add to but I literally have nothing to say. I'm just sitting here blinking repeatedly
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this is maybe overdone but virgin!Spencer cumming in his pants as soon as you touch him and being so apologetic and thinking he disappointed you
-cass
Him cumming though before he can get you off and you get interrupted for a case. He spends the whole case trying to make it up to you, bringing you coffee anytime your mug is empty, holding doors for you, bringing you files instead of making you get up. You know exactly what heâs doing but donât say anything cause youâre kinda enjoying the treatment. When you get home though, heâs in for quite a reward.
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Spencer in sundress season Spencer in sundress season Spencer in sundress season
there are two options for how this could be - you wearing sundresses or Spencer wearing sundresses and both make me melt
if you're wearing them I think Spencer spends the whole time flustered and at least partially hard - playing with him in public is basically a must since he's leaking hehe (not to mention if he knew you weren't wearing panties he'd just die)
If he's wearing them then it's easy access for public play - sitting at a table and just rubbing higher and higher up his thigh and eventually teasing his little cock through his panties
-cass
I am going to kiss you, cass
Soo I see you wearing the dress with cute frilly thigh highs that make Spencer tick (because they are the same thigh highs he will be wearing when he gets home). The thigh highs make you a little over heated in the sun though so youâre always tilting your head back and fanning yourself, flinging your hair around and he gets a whiff of it every time and youâre neck is exposed to him. If youâre sitting somewhere private maybe youâll slide the dress up a bit to cool yourself down, exposing the tops of your thighs. The dress without panties would also be perfect for cockwarming where no one can see. Heâd be hard all day though so the second heâs inside you, heâs on the verge of cumming.
With him wearing the dress, I see him walking around in it and his converse with some lacy socks that stick out the top. Youâd spend the whole day touching any and all of the exposed skin, teasing him but making comments about how if he gets hard everyone will see. Heâs not used to having such cool and breezy clothes though since heâs always wearing layers so in the evening when itâs chilly, you give him your jacket and sit between his legs, running your hands up and down his thighs to warm him while you make out gently. Heâs a whore though so he quickly gets needy and you jerk him off under the dress and make him lick the mess off your hand afterwards.
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