Say cheese baby!
Photographer!darkyandere!Jungkook x oc
Disclaimer: this is a draft, and kinda anticlimactic🙂 But the tension is really thick though, my heartbeat sped up while writing this lol😭
Also, this is purely fiction, I do not believe that any of the Bts members engage in such activities, and Please don’t romanticize this type of behavior, it is toxic, unhealthy and overall yucky💁♀️.
Warning: dark yandere themes, Blood ( not a lot), bruise, non-con touching (not sexual), tension, anticlimax, OC is has epilepsy, OC has a seizure, catatonia, angst, JK is cuckoo in this. Use of word ‘ungodly’, short., no context, oc is bruised bcuz of Jk.
Edit: I’m definitely rewriting this lol
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No context he’s just obsessed with her.
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Let’s a go!🍄
The photographer caressed the bruised skin that discolored Aiday’s cheek. “How do you do it, Aiday.” He quietly asked, his warm breath hitting her face.
They were in the bedroom, she has been staying here since he kidnapped her.
Aiday stayed still in fright, her catatonic tendencies were both a blessing and a curse at this point.
Jungkook’s dark eyes shifted to hers.
“Aren’t you going to answer me? Sweetheart?” He asked.
Those would be such cute words if it weren’t for the person asking it.
Aiday pursed her bloody lips, “I..I don’t..know..?” She cautiously squeaked out.
He grinned, the once sweet adorable grin Aiday liked was the very one that sent chills to her skin.
“You’re so adorable..and clueless.” He muttered to himself.
He pulled away a bit, Aiday released the breath she unconsciously held.
He took his camera and took a picture of her with no warning, the flash causing her to flinch.
Jungkook kissed his teeth as he looked at the picture, “You’re going to be the death of me…”
He looked up and met the usual blank stare that Aiday emitted.
“Never I thought I’d be able to capture such…timid, acne spotted skin that I’d kill for.” He said.
Aiday stayed mute, not just because she was scared, but she didn’t understand what he was saying.
Jungkook pursed his lips and scanned her face.
The single bruise and nosebleed wasn’t enough for him, it has never been. It only made him crave for more, in a even more distasteful way.
And her eyes, those dark eyes that seemed to reach unattainable depths needed more…stories…more darkness..more trauma.
Jungkook took the camera and took a sudden picture of her with flash again,
And again.
And again
And again until he got a reaction from his statue like darling.
Her breath hitched and her torso started moving in uncontrollable manners.
The ungodly spasms that were emitted from her body had Jungkook staring at her in wonder.
Aiday couldn’t see anything but Jungkook staring at her through the dim light of her lashes fluttering.
As she was about to fall down he put his hand behind her back for support.
He pulled her closer and stared into her eyes filled with tears that were threatening to spill.
This was his own fault, if he hadn’t teased himself he wouldn’t have gone to such lengths, like taking advantage of her epilepsy and inducing a seizure on purpose.
“Stay just like this for me.” He whispered into her ear.
He pulled away and grabbed his camera again.
This time he turned the flash off and took the pictures and one video, for keeps.
The jerks made the fast gushing blood from her nose move everywhere.
The lens. Her cheek. And the photographer’s lips.
Oh and he loved it.
Adored it even.
Aiday’s body calmed down and pretty much collapsed out of exhaustion.
She has never had long seizures but this one felt like hours.
Jungkook sighed and reached for her hand but Aiday was quick to pull it away and crawl away from him.
He frowned and cocked his head to the side, “Don’t run away now..” He quietly whined as he crawled towards the girl that was blocked by the wall.
He was slow in his race towards Aiday.
Anyone seeing this scene would’ve seen the predator like demeanor he had in her presence. The slowness he had was painful and unbearable, he was living it vividly, loving it as Aiday trembled with no way to go.
Jungkook trembled with the amount of different scenarios that polluted his mind, pure adrenaline courses through his veins.
When he was close to her face, the tip of their noses touched.
She stared at him, but it wasn’t blank and void anymore. No, it was tainted, her eyes didn’t stay focused, they were impure and polluted.
Jungkook’s lips parted,
“Are you scared of me..Aiday?”
He himself didn’t know why he was asking the poor girl such a question, the tears blending with the stained blood on her face answered it for her, but he didn’t want to interpret it. No, he needed for her to say it, he needed to hear it, from her.
Aiday gulped as his widened dark eyes bore into her soul.
Jungkook held her cheek, “Come on..say it already.” He whispered.
His heart jumped at his chest frantically, if it wasn’t attached to the rest of his body it would’ve surely jumped out already.
Aiday and Jungkook panted, Aiday could hear her heartbeat in her ears, he could feel his heartbeat in all the places that were just..wrong.
The absence of words from Aiday drove him crazy.
“Fuck Aiday stop it, say it already!” He growled, gripping her cheek even harder.
Jungkook normally was a master at keeping things slow, just so he could savor it.
But it was different with Aiday, no matter how big he was in comparison to her.
She was slower.
The clouds went out the way and let the sun shine, the light made the room clearer.
I can’t say the same for the atmosphere, it was dark and tense.
He hovered over her and stared her down, making her feel even smaller, like a predator playing with his prey.
He put his free hand on the wall, trapping her. “Aiday~” he let out, no telling if was supposed to be a growl or a whine.
By now the cheek in his hand already bruised, perfectly contrasting his white kunckles.
Aiday looked down and slid her tongue across her chapped lips.
“…”
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Told you it was anticlimactic😁 idk what to write here😱🔦
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I want to take a moment to compare how the manifestation of the elements is described when Zoey casts a circle in the final climax of the series, versus how they were described during a practice circle in Chosen.
Air:
Fire:
Water:
Earth:
Spirit:
In this climactic scene, where the weight and stakes of the action should feel epic and intense, we completely brush over each element. Two of them aren't described at all! I think there's two main reasons for this:
Circle casting has been beat to death in this series, and the author is writing them by rote at this point. Actual description outside of just telling readers the element is called feels redundant because we've seen this happen so. Many. Times.
The author is trying to make the scene feel fast-paced and urgent. To an extent, giving less detail and moving through actions does contribute to urgency in action scenes. But that doesn't mean you give no detail. If there's no details, then readers aren't as immersed in the scene, and it can feel hollow and disconnected.
This is the same problem with the sprites appearing. I know they were there and I know Neferet killed them. But that's it. I barely even know what they looked like. This is only the second time sprites have physically appeared in the series, so I've been given no opportunity to care about these creatures beyond, "Well, they're alive and rare and maybe endangered?"
Imagine watching a one-one-one fight scene in a show. There's magic and swords and huge stakes! But you only see it in zoomed out macro shots. That hugely lessens the impact of each move in the fight, especially because you're not seeing the characters react to or be affected by it.
Also, the biggest, stupidest plot hole of this entire god damn scene, something that's been built up and repeatedly emphasized all throughout this series...
WHERE ARE THEIR CANDLES???
The number of times these characters have stressed about casting proper circles without their element candles leads me to believe that a circle this powerful and important probably requires candles.
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